1、 He doesnt wear glasses.He has short and black hair.He is tall and thin but he looks strong.He likes playing basketball.He is an English teacher.Hello,its me!Latest NewsOne of Damings classmates get the first prize in the English Speaking Competition?Do you know who is he/she?He is fifteen _old.year
2、sHe is _.He looks _.tallprettyHe has _and_hair.shortblackHe _ wear_.glassesdoesntHe is a little _.He looks _.thinstrongHe works very _.hardHe likes_.playing basketballHow to describe a person?Hello,Im Fan Zhihao.personheihthobbieshairagesizefacepersonalityAge:_Hair:_Face:_Size:_Height:_Hobbies:_Pers
3、onality:_ old/young;xx years old.Haslong/short/black/white/yellow hair.Looks pretty/beautiful/lovely.Strong/weak/Tall/short;xx meters tallPlay basketball/volley ball/pingpongKind/strict/nice/work hardwrite them into sentencesHe is years old.He is .He looks _.He has and hair.He doesnt wear .He is a l
4、ittle .He looks .He is and works very .He likes playing .withbutAndfifteentallblackshortglasses thinstrongkindbasketballhardpretty假如你就是大明，请从外貌、性格、爱好等方面，描述一下你的好同学范梓豪吧。内容（内容（7 7分）分）语言语言:人称人称、时态、时态、连贯连贯（8 8分）分）合计合计 要点要点1 1（2 2分）分）要点要点2 2（3 3分）分）要点要点3 3（2 2分）分）个别个别错误错误（8 8分）分）少数少数错误错误（6-76-7分）分）一些一些错误错误
5、（4-54-5分）分）较多较多错误错误（1-31-3分）分）1515分分自评自评 互评互评 师评师评 and,but,with,because 第三人第三人称：称：he/she一般现一般现在时在时 Im very luck to have many good classmates and Fan Zhihao is one of my best friend.He is fifteen years old and he is tall with short and black hair.He doesnt wear glasses and he looks pretty.He is thin
6、but he looks very strong because he likes playing basketball.He is kind and he works very hard.This is my good classmate.What about yours?Can you tell me?Examplebeginning body endingSummary写作技巧写作技巧:使用_ _ _ _来实现文章连贯性连贯性。and because with but写作步骤：写作步骤：1.审题（判断写作类型、人称、时态）2.构思（内容：单词、短语、句式、结构）3.检查（拼写、语法、连贯性）Homework3.用今天所学的语句，描述班里的一 位同学，让同学们猜一猜。2.根据评分标准进行自评和小组互评。1.修改、完善作文。
