1、Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the darkSection B(3a-self check)Writing To know how to write their changes by using the sentence structure“.used to.,but now.”To describe the biggest change and explain how it happened.To encourage students to improve themselves.ObjectivesObjectivesHow I have changed!5
2、years agonowLead-inWhere can we find our changes?appearance (外貌外貌)personality（性格）（性格）hobby（爱好）（爱好）shy-serious-clever-silent-careful-polite-lazy-my changesoutgoingshort-fat-young-ugly-have short hair-wear glasses tallexpressions to describe appearanceexpressions to describe personalityexpressions to
3、describe hobbylike/hate/dislike doing sth.be interested in sth.thinoldbeautifulhave long hairhumorousnoisystupidcarelessimpolitehard-workingHow to describe our changes?.used to.,but now.Words The biggest change in my life is that_ my biggest changeIm not shy anymore.I made it by_speaking in public.我
4、对英语的兴趣更浓厚了。我对英语的兴趣更浓厚了。Im more interested in English.joining the English club and having conversations with others 我再也不是一个小胖子了。我再也不是一个小胖子了。Im not fat anymore.doing exercise and eating less foodSentencesThanks to/.advised me to./.had a great influence on me.Talk about your biggest change with your pa
5、rtner and explain how it happened.(讲述你最重要的一个变化及其它是如何发生的讲述你最重要的一个变化及其它是如何发生的)The biggest change in my life is that_Im not.anymoreI become much thinner/heavier/more outgoing.I do better/worse in.Im more/less interested in.I made it by doing./Thanks to/.advised me to./.had a great influence on me.Sente
6、nces My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to be very shy and quiet,but now I am outgoing and popular.I used to like sleeping all the time,but now I am interested in swimming.Besides,I used to fail the exams,but now I get good scores on my exams.The biggest change in my life is that
7、 I am not a fat boy any more.In the past,I was very heavy.My parents were very worried about me.My best friend John had a great influence on me.He advised me to swim with him every day.Athough the journey was long and painful,I finally succeeded in losing weight.How I am proud of myself!My life has
8、changed a lot in the last few years.I used to be very shy and quiet,but now I am outgoing and popular.Besides,I used to like sleeping all the time,but now I am interested in swimming.The biggest change in my life is that Im not fat any more.In the past,I was very heavy.My parents were very worried a
9、bout me.Thanks to my best friend Kate,she advised me to swim with her every day.Although the journey was long and painful,I finally succeeded in losing weight.How I am proud of myself!In a word(总之总之),I have become much better than before.I will keep improving myself.主旨句Change in personalityChange in
10、 hobbyHow did it happen?the biggest changeMeaning of the changesStuctureHow I have changed!StructureLead in your topicBeginning Body EndingSet examples to show how you have changed.Summarize your passage.My changeStuctureDivided passagesGrammar mistakesClear hand-writingAttention!Writing PracticeWhi
11、le writing How I have changed!_ 中考模拟训练中考模拟训练2019中考英语作文预测：中考英语作文预测：（满分20分）初中生活中，你有些什么改变？最大的变化是什么，你是怎样改变的？请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你生活中发生的变化，写作内容可以包括外貌性格、兴趣爱好和行为习惯等方面。要求：1.要求80-120词；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名。whathowPolish your writing1.小组合作，按照中考英语作文评分标准互相评分，并用红笔改出错误，给出评分意见;2.每组挑选最佳的作文上
12、台展示。Group work 中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准Structure:divided passages,coherenceContents:completeLanguage：spelling,grammar,accuracyHand-writing:beautifulShow your writing Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.Words:Appearance/Personality/Hobbies.Sentence:used to do.but now Passage:Divided passages/Grammar mista
13、kes/Clear hand-writingsummary遣词遣词造句造句成文成文People sure change!Lets improve ourselves to be a better man.My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to be very shy and quiet,but now I am outgoing and popular.I used to like sleeping all the time,but now I am interested in swimming.The biggest
14、 change in my life is that Im not fat any more.In the past,I was very heavy.My parents were very worried about me.Thanks to my best friend Kate,she advised me to swim with her every day.Although the journey was long and painful,I finally succeeded in losing weight.How I am proud of myself!In a word,
15、I have become much better than before.I will keep improving myself.How I have changed!知识迁移知识迁移she has My motherSheshesShe sheshershessheherherherherherselfherselfshesheShesheHomeworkHomework Make a survey on how your family member/friend has changed.2.Write a passage according to your survey.People
16、sure change!Lets improve ourselves to be a better man.Thank you!1.1.高考高考作文不同于作文不同于“自由写作自由写作”高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要高考作文为了达到一定的考察目的，考生要“根据要求写作根据要求写作”，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚，在这个基础上鼓励考生发挥想象和联想写出自己的思考和感悟，因此，若要写好高考作文，既不能不顾写作要求信马由缰，也不能被要求所限，畏手畏脚。2.2.而而要既符合要求，又要有张扬个
17、性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。要既符合要求，又要有张扬个性的出彩的地方。所以说高考作文不是自由写作，既有限制又有开放的空间，既有考生必须完成的规定动作又要有彰显特色的自选动作。3.3.一一篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要。篇议论文如果能有几个联系密切并具有较强论证力度的主体段，那就会增加论证的深度、广度和厚度，颇具层次感，使议论文富有说服力。因此，同学们写好议论文的主体段至关重要
18、。4.4.出现出现大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的大量的叙述文字，而缺少相应的议论性语言点睛，给人以罗列事例或者啰嗦叙事的感觉，并且暴露自己欠缺说理能力的缺点缺点。5.5.空洞空洞乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅乏味的议论，缺乏必要的理论和事实支撑，车轱辘话绕来绕去，论述肤浅无力无力。6.6.段落段落中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏中有事例有论述，但却水是水，油是油，没有分析融合，论点就如同生硬地贴在论据上面的标签，缺乏说服力说服力。
19、7.7.这这是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出是一则新材料运用作文，先是列举了古往今来中外青年成人礼仪和节日的沿革；接着从国际和国家层面，对青年提出了明确的希望和要求；最后指出“你们你们”成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁成年，青年们前赴后继，成就自我人生，勇作社会脊梁。8.8.在在运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。运用部分，则指出结合材料进行联想和思考，致即将成年的自己。整道题条理明晰，从现象到本质，逐一得到揭示，很好地拓展了考生的写作思维。
