1、UnitPEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT1-reading for writingTry to become not a man of success,but try rather to become a man of value.Albert EinsteinTo learn about a great scientists life story and achievements.To learn to write an introduction about someone you admire.21.According to the picture and title,whats
2、 the purpose of this text?to introduce Albert Einstein2.What do you know and expect to know about Einstein?Task of today:learn to write a text to introduce someone you admire by learning from this text.achievementappearancepersonalityStep1 Lead inAlbert Einstein,who is perhaps the greatest scientist
3、 in modern physics,is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived.He made numerous contributions to the world,the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=mc.Einstein was not only a genius;he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.4Pa
4、ra.1:Brief introductionpersonalityname，identitypeoples commentsachievementcontributionsStep2 ReadingTask2.Find out time In what order(顺序顺序)does the writer develop the text?time orderPara.2-4:Life experienceStep2 ReadingBorn in Germany 1879189619551933189519001902190519091922Entered universityFailed
5、to enter universityGraduated from university Took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent officeEntered research full-time at a universityAwarded the Nobel Prize for PhysicsFled GermanyPassed awayEarned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papersPara.2-4:life experiences(birt
6、h,study experiences)Task3.Underline some descriptive(描述性描述性的的)sentences:what Einstein looked like?what kind of person he was?P9 3Para.5:Appearance and personalityappearancepersonalityStep2 ReadingTask 4.What rhetorical devices(修辞手法修辞手法)are used in the passage?Simile(明喻)Metaphor(隐喻)Rhetorical questio
7、n(设问)Personification(拟人)Quote(引用)Repetition(重复)Analogy(类比)Euphemism(委婉语)phrasesrhetorical deviceas the new Isaac Newton(from para3)the doors of academic institutions(from para4)as though he had just received an electric shock(from para5)(hair)stood on end(from para5)passed away(from para6)Analogy(类比
8、)Metaphor(隐喻)Simile(明喻)Personification(拟人)Euphemism(委婉语)Step2 Reading for devicesParagraphParagraphMain idea1Introduction(mainly about his great contributions and personal qualities)2Early life/Education3Work experience(the road to the new Isaac Newton)4Turbulent mid-life5His odd looks,three anecdot
9、es(forgetfulness,love,humour)6DeathConclude:How to organise How to organise our writingour writing?Structurepart 1 part 2part 3Introduction(name,identity,great contributions and personal qualities)Body(important life experiences)Ending(peoples comments )Reading for wReading for writing riting 姓名：袁隆平
10、爱好：听音乐、游泳职业：科学家生活态度：生活简朴、淡泊名利出生：1930年9月7日，北京毕业院校：西南农学院工作经历及成就：1.大学毕业后，袁隆平去往湖南从事农业教学和研究工作，并在1975年成功培育出了杂交水稻。2.提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿 3.被誉为“杂交水稻之父”4.2019年被授予“共和国勋章”5.2021年5月22日，在湖南长沙逝世审题谋篇第一步明确要求该写作属于介绍人物类写作，故要用第_人称来写；文章的主题内容是写袁隆平的生平经历、取得的伟大成就以及人们的评价。时态以_为主。第二步确定段落本篇短文可以从以下几个方面入手：Para.1总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)；Para.2
11、介绍袁隆平para.3总结全文(说明袁隆平的成就以及人们对他的评价)。三过去式作为当代作为当代中国中国最伟大的人物之一，袁隆平被人们称为最伟大的人物之一，袁隆平被人们称为“杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父”。Yuan Longping,who is one of the greatest figures in modern China,is widely known as the“father of hybrid rice”.通过提高水稻产量，他为解决世界饥饿问题作出了巨大贡献。通过提高水稻产量，他为解决世界饥饿问题作出了巨大贡献。He made huge contributions to the p
12、roblem of world huger by promoting rice production.袁隆平不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和游泳。袁隆平不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和游泳。Yuan was not only an outstanding scientist;he was also a person who had a wide range of hobbies,like listening to music and swimming.仿写仿写 Para1time expressionswhen sb.was.after doin
13、g for.year(s)after.years of doing.that same yeae,which was recorded as.following thisafter.yearsin.,when.仿写仿写句式句式 Para2time orderrhetorical devices(修辞手法修辞手法)set a good example forsb be regarded/considered aspeople speak/think highly ofremember sb.foreverlet us realize thathave a great effect on sb仿写
14、仿写短语短语 Para315The checklist may help you.Does the writer describe the persons appearance and personality?Does the writer tell an impressive story of the persons life?Does the writer say why the person is great?Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person?Exchange your draft with a partn
15、er.SampleThe Man Who Fed the WorldYuan Longping,who is one of the greatest figures in modern China,is widely known as the“father of hybrid rice”.He made huge contributions to the problem of world huger by promoting rice production.Yuan is not only an outstanding scientist;he is also a person who has
16、 a wide range of hobbies,like listening to music and swimming in daily life.Yuan was born in Beijing on 7 September 1930.After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College,he went to Hunan province and devoted himself to agricultural education and research all along.Owing to years of hard-working,
17、this man succeeded in cultivating hybrid rice in 1975 and was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2019.On 22 May 2021,it was reported that Yuan had passed away,and our whole country felt sorrowful deeply.“I was a seed,”he once said.“To be a good one,both my body and spirit should be healthy.”Yuan i
18、s a person who looks thin but has a strong mind.Yuan is a man who lives in poverty but owns spiritual richness.写作模板_，who was born in _，was one of the greatest _._talent for _showed at a early age.He learned _.By the time he was _，the young _had become a well-known _.The following year _moved to _，wh
19、ere he spent the rest of his life,_as a _._，who has been called _，_about _or so throughout his life.As a great _，he will be remembered by people forever.开头：The person I admire most is _(人）人）.Born in _(地点地点/时时间）间）,_（人），（人），who is one of the greatest _(职业）职业）,showed a passion for_(方面）方面）The person I a
20、dmire most is Yuan Longping.Born in Beijing in 1930,Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist,showed a passion for researching rice.After graduating from _(学校）学校）,he/she spent most of his/her time in doing/on_.Despite many difficulties,he/she managed to overcome them.With strong will and gr
21、eat determination,he achieved the great success in_,which made him _(成就）成就）.中间：西南农学西南农学院：院：Southwest Agricultural College他从事农业教学和研究工作他从事农业教学和研究工作 agricultural teaching research培育出了杂交水稻培育出了杂交水稻breed hybrid rice杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父the father of hybrid riceAfter graduating from Southwest Agricultural College,h
22、e spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research.Despite many difficulties,he managed to overcome them.With strong will and great determination,he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice,which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger.So he is known as
23、the father of hybrid rice.提高了水稻产量，提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿有助于消除世界饥饿improve the rice production and help rid the world of hungerHaving set a great example for us,he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.The person I admire most is Yuan Longping.Born in Beijing in 1930,Yuan Lon
24、gping,who is one of the greatest scientist,showed a passion for researching rice.After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College,he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research.Despite many difficulties,he managed to overcome them.With strong will and great determination,he achi
25、eved the great success in breeding hybrid rice,which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger.So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.Having set a great example for us,he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.结尾：全文：110 1.引出人物：引出人物：-简单介绍人物背景简单
26、介绍人物背景 (出生日期出生日期/出生地出生地+职业职业/兴趣兴趣)出生于：_ 酷爱；对有强烈的兴趣：_在方面有天赋：_从某大学毕业：_be born inhave/show a passion forbe talented in.When he was a boy,he (对.的热情)maths._(出生于)Shanghai,on September 12th,1980,Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.Born ingraduate fromshowed a passion for2.介绍人物主要经历介绍人物主要
27、经历-重要词汇重要词汇做做工作：工作：_ 把把奉献给奉献给：_ 起关键性作用起关键性作用：_ 坚定的决心：坚定的决心：_在在获得巨大的成功获得巨大的成功：_使某人能够做某事：使某人能够做某事：_下定决心下定决心做某事做某事：_work asdevote oneself/entire life to.play a crucial role instrong will and determinationachieve great success in.enable sb to do stheg._(从从毕业毕业)Peking University in 1993,he_(做做工作工作)a teac
28、her in Wuhan University.Graduating fromworked as/take up a position asmake up ones mind to do/be determined to do sth2.介绍人物主要经历介绍人物主要经历-重要句型重要句型1.After graduating from.,he/she spend most of his/her time in doing/on从从毕业后，他毕业后，他/她大部分时间都花在做她大部分时间都花在做2.In order to.,he made up his mind to do.为了为了，他决定做，他决
29、定做.3.With strong will and great determination,he achieved the great success in.凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在方面取得了巨大的成功方面取得了巨大的成功4.Despite many difficulties,he/she managed to overcome them.尽管有许多困难，他尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了她还是设法克服了5.He/She put his/her heart into and made great contributions to他他/她全心全意投入她
30、全心全意投入,并为并为做出了巨大贡献做出了巨大贡献3.人物评价及对作者的影响人物评价及对作者的影响-重要词汇重要词汇为某人赢得好名声：为某人赢得好名声：_ 高度评价高度评价_做出巨大贡献做出巨大贡献：_ _ 被授予被授予：_作为作为而闻名而闻名：_ _ 被尊称为被尊称为_树立好榜样：树立好榜样：_ 值得我们崇拜和尊重值得我们崇拜和尊重：_earn sb a good reputationmake great contributions tobe awarded.be known/famous asbe honored asset a good exampledeserve our admira
31、tion and respectthink highly of3.人物评价及对作者的影响人物评价及对作者的影响-重要句型重要句型1.As a great.，he/she will be remembered by us forever.作为一个伟大的作为一个伟大的，他，他/她将被我们永远铭记。她将被我们永远铭记。2.It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。3.Having set a great example for us,he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重尊重。Thanks!26
