1、Error-correction-全卷得分率最低的题全卷得分率最低的题第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)，不计分。最多有共有21多陈杰陈杰3人11人13人10人13人
2、13人8人30人12人21人方框内代表未做对的人数。方框内代表未做对的人数。刘伟全My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is ho
3、nest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or highquality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that henever dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016年高考全国卷年高考全国卷My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Thoug
4、h not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or highquality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says
5、 that henever dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.wherehavehonestyandusedofasteadilyhis2016年高考全国卷年高考全国卷?短文改错的命题特点短文改错的命题特点:1(删词)1(加词)8(改词)?1.内容来源于学生的生活,贴近学生生活。?2.考查的东西全面,突出知识的运用。?3.针对性强,设计错误的点也是学生常犯的，具有“高起点、低落点”的特点。高考短文改错题对学生的语言感觉和语言能力
6、要求较高，但改正的错误往往比较简单。很多同学做不好改错题不是因为没有掌握这些语法知识，而是不能通过语感找出错误。所以培养同学们有意识地去注意一些高考短文改错的常考点非常重要。2014年全国卷（102词）2015年全国卷（105词）2016年全国卷（93词）冠词result前加acountryside前加thethe该为a名词year改为yearsairs改为airhonest改为honesty动词时态、语态与主谓一致had改为havethink改为thought 去掉been found改为findusing改为used had改为have非谓语动词形容词、副词before改为ago some
7、where改为everywhere taste改为tasty much改为many wonderfully 改为wonderfulseriously改为serious Much改为manysteady改为steadily代词you改为our或theour改为his介词by 改为ofon改为withdreams后加of连词去掉but或but改为yetor改为andthat改为where or改为and 去掉but短文改错常见考点设置与改正方法?考点1：名词?命题特点?改正方法My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.hones
8、ty（1）本来用复数，却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。（2）词性混乱。（1）根据名词前的修饰限定成份（2）根据上下文的逻辑关系和在句中的功能?考点考点2：代词：代词（人称代词、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等）He hopes that our business will grow steady.his命题特点：命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数复数用反；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。5.指代不明方法：根据上下文的逻辑关系及人称代词的数和格的一致问题考点3：介词My uncle says that he never dreams becoming richof命题特点：介词涉
9、及搭配错误方法：了解介词的基本用法，记住常用搭配考点4：动词（时态与语态及主谓一致；非谓语动词；情态动词）Some people even had to wait outside.haveare using for cooking.used命题特点：1.时态混乱。2.主动与被动的误用。3.动词的谓语与非谓语功能的区分、非谓语动词各种形式的误用。4.情态动词的选用或情态动词后动词的形式。方法：1.要联系上下文，着眼于整个语篇的时态。2.分析句子结构，结合句意判断动词在句中的功能。?考点考点5：连词（并列连词、从属连词）：连词（并列连词、从属连词）fresh vegetables or high
10、quality oilandMy uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that Ilive.Though not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.where命题特点：并列连词（and,or,but,so)与从属连词的误用方法：1.根据句意确定错误以及根据句子的逻辑关系确定错误。错误。2.掌握三大从句中连接词的用法。?考点考点6：冠词：冠词in the short period of time.a命题特点：英语中冠词只有三个，只能从以下几个方向出题：1.不定冠词a和an互改；
11、2.不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；3.根据需要增加或删除冠词。改正方法：掌握冠词的基本用法?考点考点7：形容词和副词：形容词和副词will grow steady.steadily命题特点及改正方法：主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级、最高级等。1.根据adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误；2.修饰名词用adj.系表结构用形容词；3.修饰行为动词、adj.、adv.及整个句子用副词。其它考点：其它考点：?数词：主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，以及hundred,thousand,dozen,score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。?英语中的并列现象：在一
12、些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构，如并列连词连接的两个部分等。?特殊句式：如强调句、倒装句、省略句、反义疑问句等?固定搭配和习惯用法：如used to do,be used to do,be used to doing等结构的误用。短文改错小结解题步骤：1.通读全文，整体把握大意。2.细读全文，分析句子结构，注意谓语动词。3.逐句分析词法、句法、逻辑上是否有问题。4.逐句修改，先易后难。5.复读全文，验证答案。6.注意答题是否合乎规范。（校对改正的符号、位置是否准确，大小写是否拼写正确)（适当考虑118原则）“名 代 数 连 冠，形 动 介 叹 副”请将下文设计成一道改错题并说说你的理
13、由：Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want toshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I told you last time,I made three new friends here.We hang outtogether during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot oftime singing in karaoke bar
14、s.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me much.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,but Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.What do you think I should do?If you were me,would you talk to them?Please help me and give me some advice.Grace20
15、15年四川2015年四川年四川Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really wantshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang outtogether during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot oftime sing in karao
16、ke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.
17、GracetotoldfriendssingingmuchbutWhatwerethem?1.要注意按意群来理解句子，避免定势思维。?2.改错要求有良好的语感，课后加强熟读与背诵经典文章。?3.对常见错误设置加以总结。做到循序渐进，夯实基本语言知识。?4.增强答题规范意识以后学习中要注意的事项精析、勤练、常复现Lets practise more!1.After class we become stranger at once.2.He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.3.The Smiths did his best to m
18、ake me feel at home.4.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.5.I am writing to thank you with your kind help.6.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.7.I will write again and send you the photos we take together.8.We fed monkeys,visiting temples a
19、nd told stories.9.She is smiling at me but nodding at me.10.It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.11.As everyone knows,its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.12.We may be one family and live under a same roof,but.13.They came back lately and had some tea.14.Earni
20、ng their own money allow them to spend on anything as they please.15.My parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.(2016年全国II)The summer holiday is coming.Myclassmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If
21、 we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is
22、 a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.(2016年全国II)The summer holiday is coming.Myclassmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But
23、in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.whatchooset
24、akingandtheourknowledge或改为shouldthinkmuch(2016年全国III)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didnt seem to think such.They al
25、ways tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to
26、 whenever need help.(2016年全国III)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to
27、do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.yearsworstmyselfsotoldfreewearingforI
