1、Extended writingLEARNING AIMS1.读后续写中动作描写的句子扩充。（慢动作，多角度）Extend the sentence of action description.（slomo,multi-angle）2.读后续写中心理描写巧用关键词暗示主题 Using key words to indicate the theme in psychological description 3.读后续写中多种句型在作文中的应用 The application sentence patterns上车He got in the car.specificdetailed informa
2、tionslow motionFilm divides motion up into a series of static images according to timer shaft.电影根据时间轴将动作分解为一系列静态画面慢动作（一帧变三帧）上车：拦车，上车，告诉司机目的地better？17.6浙江高考 被狼围堵，身处险境朝狼扔肉threw the meat to the wolf朝狼扔肉：掏出肉，瞄准狼，扔出去句型1 多个动词的连接上车：拦车，上车，告诉司机目的地（hail 拦车）He hailed a taxi,got into it and told the driver his
3、destination.扔肉：掏出肉，瞄准狼，扔出去（pull out 掏/aim at 瞄）He pulled out the meat,aimed at the wolf and threw it straight to the fierce animal.句型一：动作A,动作B and 动作C练习一：他抱住儿子：He hugged his son.冲向前，蹲下来，一把抱住 He dashed forward,knelt down and gathered his son into his arms.发言（感谢）：He said:“thank you!”看一眼奖杯，微笑，说道：感谢我的团队
4、(trophy/trofi/奖杯)He glanced at the trophy,smiled and said “thank my team!”句型一：动作A,动作B and 动作C 句型2.先后动作连接 战争结束后，战士回到家中，发现房子被洗劫一空。Having fought in the war for years,the soldier returned his home,only to find his house robbed.句型二：having done+句子他排了三小时队，被告知票卖完了。Having queued for 3 hours,he was told the t
5、icket had sold out.收到光轮2000（the Nimbus/nmbs/2000）后，哈利高兴地不知所措。Having received the Nimbus 2000,so happy was Harry that he was at a loss what to do.同一个动作从不同角度拍摄Sheldon害怕面部肢体语言/心理睁大眼睛惊恐万分逃走大喊妈妈Widening his eyes in extreme horror,Sheldon fled away,screaming,“Mom,help!”面部/头部肢体语言/心理仰望天空站在路边享受这份珍贵的平静Standin
6、g beside the empty road,they looked up into the sky,feeling the precious peace from within.句型三：分词作状语+句子+分词作状语三个主动动作同时伴随进行心理肢体语言受老师鼓舞举起手小声说“我来”受到老师的鼓舞，他举起手，小声说道：“我来”(whisper 小声说)Encouraged by the teachers words,he raised his hand,whispering“I volunteer.”句型三：分词作状语+句子+分词作状语面部肢体语言/心理目光呆滞坐着，双臂低垂陷入沉思贝贝坐着，
7、双臂低垂，思考自己接下去要做什么。贝贝坐着 Beibei sat.贝贝双臂低垂，坐在泳池边，想知道自己接下去要做什么。(低垂droop)Drooping his arms,Beibei sat beside the pool,wondering what to do next.独立主格/（with）名词+非谓语(With)His arms drooping,Beibei.句型四：with/独立主格+句子+分词作状语Summarizeslomo慢动作三个并列动词的连接 先后动作multi-angle多角度 从面部肢体语言心理主动动作被动动作不同主语句型一：动作A,动作B and 动作C句型二：h
8、aving done+句子句型三：doing+句子+doing句型四：with/独立主格+句子+分词作状语句型三：done+句子+done心理描写-关键词暗示主题想到/看到关键词seeing xx，某人感到sb felt as if它在做xx（表达情感）it had been doing_并说（暗示主题）and saying_看到那处山峰，我感觉它好像在风中叹息，并对我说，“希望你能再给我一次机会.”Seeing the mountain over there,I felt as if it had been sighing and saying,“Hope you can give me a
9、nother chance.”活到老学到老看到字母表，我感觉它好像在嘲笑我，并对我说，“你太老了.”Seeing the alphabet,I felt as if it had been mocking me and saying,“You are too old.”每个人都有自己的天赋看到标枪，我感觉它好像在鼓励我，并对我说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你.”Seeing the javelin,I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying,“Youve found your talent and Ive found you.”Pra
10、ctice我抓“小偷”-松鼠。我很困 发现松鼠 松鼠偷东西跑掉 追松鼠 没追到很累停下来 心理描写：关键词：破杂志干叶子 Practice 多角度:眼皮耷拉，点头，手撑着头慢动作:听到声响，望向窗外，看到松鼠慢动作:眼睛睁大，手指向松鼠，追上去大喊“抓小偷！”多角度:望向远方，嘴叼着纸，手拿着盒子多角度:大口喘气，双腿颤抖，喊道:你别走！看到满地的撕破的杂志和干叶子，他们好像在 嘲笑我并说，“你绝不可能追到松鼠”我很困 发现松鼠 松鼠偷东西跑掉追松鼠 没追到很累停下来心理描写：关键词：破杂志干叶子droop 耷拉 paw 爪子 打盹 nod off squirrel 松鼠slight scra
11、tching sound 轻微刮擦声mess up 弄乱tear off pages 撕纸eyes open wide 瞪大眼睛tremble 颤抖torn magazine paper 破杂志Under no circumstances 绝不（我很困）我眼皮耷拉，手撑着头,打起盹来。（谓语+独立主格）。忽然我被轻微的刮擦声吵醒，我站起身，立马看向窗外，看到一只胖胖的松鼠（动作A,动作B and 动作C）。这小东西正弄乱杂志堆，还用爪子撕纸。然后，嘴里叼着纸，东张西望，手里夹着盒子（doing+句子+with结构)然后跑掉了。我瞪大眼睛，指着松鼠，追上去大喊：“原来小偷是只松鼠”（独立主格+句
12、子+doing），追了一会儿我停了下来，双腿颤抖，我上气不接下气，但是还是喊着：别跑！(with结构+句子+doing)，看到满地的撕破的杂志和干叶子，他们好像在 嘲笑我并说，“你绝不可能抓到松鼠”（心理描写）droop 耷拉 paw 爪子 打盹 nod off squirrel 松鼠slight scratching sound 轻微刮擦声mess up 弄乱tear off pages 撕纸ones eyes open wide 瞪大眼睛tremble 颤抖torn magazine paper 破杂志Under no circumstances 绝不 I was determined t
13、o catch the thief,but I had a difficult time staying awake.Within a few hours,my eyes drooping,I held the head with my hands and nodded off.Suddenly,I was woken up by a slight scratching sound.I stood up,looked out of the window immediately and saw a fat adorable squirrel.The little creature was mes
14、sing up the piles of magazines and using its paw to tear off pages.Then,filling the paper in its mouth,it gazed around,with her arms holding a box.My eyes opening wide,I pointed at the squirrel,running after it and yelling:“The thief is a squirrel!”After a while of chasing,I stopped.With my legs trembling,I was out of breath,still yelling:“dont go!”.Seeing the torn magazine paper and dry leaves,I felt as if they had been laughing at me and saying:“Under no circumstances can you catch the squirrel!”
