1、英语写作教学选择性必修一unit4Body Language writingwriting假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom将来中国旅游,发邮件向你询问中英日常生活肢体语言的异同。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.不同点:在中国,与长辈交谈时,低头避免直视等;3.相似点:见面握手,微笑等。审题谋篇审题谋篇肢体语言肢体语言第一人称、第二人称邮件、信件一般现在时为主说明写信意图:表示欢迎说明肢体语言的相同点和不同点表达祝愿和愿望 构造句子构造句子1.得知你要来中国,我写信是为了表达我最真诚的欢迎I heard you will come to China.I am writing to ex
2、press my welcome2.肢体语言是不相同的Body language are diffierent.构造句子构造句子3.例如在中国,与长辈交谈时,低头避免直视等 For example,when we talk to old peole in China,we usually look down to avoid eye contact.4.一些手势也会有相似点:见面握手,微笑等 Some gestures have the same meaning.when we greet someone,we can shake hands,smile or nod the head 5.我
3、希望我的介绍能够对你有帮助I hope my introduction will be helpful to you.运用丰富句型遣词造句运用丰富句型遣词造句1.得知你要来中国,我写信是为了表达我最真诚的欢迎I heard you will come to China.I am writing to express my welcome(使用非谓语,改为一句话;欢迎前加形容词)Hearing that you will come to China,I am writing to show my warmest welcome.运用丰富句型遣词造句运用丰富句型遣词造句2.肢体语言是不相同的Bod
4、y language are diffierent.(使用短语代替)Body language varies from culture to culture.3.例如在中国,与长辈交谈时,低头避免直视等 For example,when we talk to old peole in China,we usually look down to avoid eye contact.(when后接非谓语;老人表达更换;增加内容:表示尊重)For example,when talking to the elderly in China,we usually look down to avoid ey
5、e contact as a sign of respect.运用丰富句型遣词造句运用丰富句型遣词造句 4.一些手势也会有相似点:见面握手,微笑等Some gestures have the same meaning.when we greet someone,we can shake hands,smile or nod the head(增加连接词,另一方面;用句型:喜欢做;增加内容:就像你们一样)On the other hand,some gestures have the same meaning.We favour shaking hands,smiling or nodding
6、the head to greet someone,just as you do.运用丰富句型遣词造句运用丰富句型遣词造句 5.我希望我的介绍能够对你有帮助I hope my introduction will be helpful to you.(增加副词修饰希望;helpful adj换为 be of+n)I deeply hope my introduction can be of great help to you.运用丰富句型遣词造句运用丰富句型遣词造句Step 1 审题谋篇Step 2 构造句子Step 3 运用丰富句型遣词造句总结总结Dear Tom,Hearing that y
7、ou will come to China,I am writing to show my warmest welcome.Body language varies from culture to culture.For example,when talking to the elderly in China,we usually look down to avoid eye contact as a sign of respect.On the other hand,some gestures have the same meaning.We favour shaking hands,smiling or nodding the head to greet someone,just as you do.I deeply hope my introduction can be of great help to you.Yours,Li Hua