1、Writing Aims: 1. Be able to describe your trip with the right tense. (能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行) 2. To enjoy the fun of life. (学会享受生活的乐趣)(学会享受生活的乐趣) My trip went to the zoo saw some pandas and elephants visited the museum rode a horse took some photos ate delicious food Talk about something
2、 about your school trip and make a conversation in groups. Where did you go? How was the weather? What did you do? How was the trip? Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really interesting. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I al
3、so went to the gift shop and bought some gifts. It was a great day. the beginning the ending activities & feelings How did Bob talk about his trip? (总)(总) (分)(分) (总)(总) beginning activities ending I went on a school trip./ I had a trip to weather where who How Feelings (感受感受) All in all, It was an e
4、xciting trip. / I liked the trip very much. / I was tired but happy. (总)(总) (分)(分) (总)(总) Talk about “the trip ”last Sunday. 假期期间你到哪里旅行了?请你运用所学语言谈假期期间你到哪里旅行了?请你运用所学语言谈 谈你自己的旅程。注意文章的结构与时态的运用。谈你自己的旅程。注意文章的结构与时态的运用。 要注意语言的连贯性及文章的基本结构,还要注意要注意语言的连贯性及文章的基本结构,还要注意 时态的正确运用哦!时态的正确运用哦! 提示提示 上上 海海 之之 行行 weathe
5、r 阳光明媚,炎热阳光明媚,炎热 where 动物园动物园/博物馆博物馆 who my teacher and classmates how took the train to activities 看见了熊猫和大象看见了熊猫和大象 (friendly) 照了一些照片照了一些照片 骑马骑马 (exciting) 给朋友买了礼物给朋友买了礼物 (not expensive) 吃了美味的食物吃了美味的食物 feeling tired but happy The trip to Changchun 上周日你去了长春,请根据表格内容写一篇作文。上周日你去了长春,请根据表格内容写一篇作文。 要求:要求:
6、1. 包括所有提示内容,可以适当发挥;包括所有提示内容,可以适当发挥; 2. 60词左右。词左右。 weather Sunny and hot where the zoo/the museum who my teacher and classmates How took the train to activities see the pandas and elephants take a lot of photos ride a horse (exciting) buy some gifts eat delicious food feeling tired but happy Writing
7、评价内容评价内容 自评自评 互评互评 1.说明自己所去的地点说明自己所去的地点 2. 和谁一起去的和谁一起去的 3.交通方式交通方式 4.天气情况天气情况 5.谈及自己的所见所闻谈及自己的所见所闻 6. 自己的感受自己的感受 注意:注意:先对照评价内容进行自评、补充,先对照评价内容进行自评、补充, A档:六项内容齐全,错误档:六项内容齐全,错误3处以内。处以内。 B档:含档:含5项内容,错误在项内容,错误在5处以内。处以内。 C档:含档:含4项内容,错误在项内容,错误在7处以内。处以内。 评价内容评价内容 自评自评 互评互评 1.说明自己所去的地点说明自己所去的地点 2. 和谁一起去的和谁一起
8、去的 3.交通方式交通方式 4.天气情况天气情况 5.谈及自己的所见所闻谈及自己的所见所闻 6. 自己的感受自己的感受 Who wants to show yourself? 积极推荐展示组内的优秀作文积极推荐展示组内的优秀作文吧吧 1.Can you talk about your trip? (你学会如何描述自己的一次旅行了吗?)(你学会如何描述自己的一次旅行了吗?) 2.Can you learn something from others compositions? (你能通过学习别人的作文而有所收获吗?)你能通过学习别人的作文而有所收获吗?) 假期期间你到哪里旅行了?假期期间你到哪里旅行了? 请你运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程请你运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程,注意文注意文 章的结构与时态的运用。章的结构与时态的运用。 Homework