1、2023年中考英语作文讲解与预测书面表达 明确评分原则要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3. 词数80左右。评分意见：考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表达。所给参考词汇仅供选用。共分六档评分，满分15分。如果有单词拼写、大小写或标点错误，每4个扣1分。此项扣分最多不超过2分。评分标准：第一档：（13-15分）包含全部要点，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，用词准确，语言没有或基本没有错误，具有较强语言表达能力，能围绕内容适当发挥，完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档：（10-12分）包含全部要点，句子较通顺，行文
2、基本连贯，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误，达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（7-9分）包含部分要点或者只是简单说明要点，语言虽有错误，尚能达意，字数较少。第四档：（4-6分）包含少部分要点，语言错误较多，不能准确表达意思。语言不规范。第五档：（1-3分）使用了提示词，有少量表达，但错误百出。第六档：（0分）白卷或文不对题。 必备写作秘诀：一、 结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结 二、 要点：全，围绕中心 三、逻辑：逻辑词递进：first/first of all, second, third, finally/at last, in addition/whats more/ moreover/besid
3、es(都是另外的意思), in a word/all in all(表示总结); last but not least(最后但同样重要的是)转折：but, however等因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, so/such.that.总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up,
4、finally, in conclusion, in summary四、 语法：硬性要求，如人称、时态、语态、从句、单复数等问题五、 必背基本句型和词汇：人称代词第一人称第二人称第三人称单数复数单数复数单数复数主格Iweyouyouhesheitthey宾格meusyouyouhimheritthem选定主语：物主代词第一人称第二人称第三人称单数复数单数复数单数复数形容词性myouryouryourhisheritstheir名词性mineoursyoursyourshishersitstheirs2. 必用主语+情态动词：can能,cant不能,should应该,shouldnt不应该mus
5、t必须,have to不得不，be supposed to(应该），will（将要）。3. 必用简单句型：Its adj (important重要的, necessary必要的) to do sth：做某事是怎么样的。.Its a good way to do sth.做某事是一种好方法。Its a good idea to do sth.做某事是一个好主意。I like doing sth.我喜欢做某事。I think its adj.我认为它是怎么样的。want to do sth、would like to do sth、feel like doing sth.。想要做某事。Its ou
6、r duty to do sth.做某事是我们的义务。六、亮点：高级词汇和加分句型1. 表达不同观点看法的句型 Different people have different ideas/opinions on this problem. 关于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点 Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人认为做某事是.的 Some of them are against the idea that it is. 他们中有些人反对.的想法 As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the
7、 view that.(观点一或二). It is not only because., but also because. All in all, the more., the more.2. 解决问题的句型 In recent days, we have to face a problem-_, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我们不得不面临一个问题：_， 这个问题变得越来越严重； Faced with., we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the s
8、ituation. For one thing, .(解决方法一). For another, .(解决方法二). Finally, .(解决方法三). I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better. 我相信如果每个人都能对.做出贡献，这个.将会变得越来越好。3. 说明原因句型 The reason for this are as follows. 这一点的几种原因如下 For one reason is that . For another reason is that
9、 . 一个原因是., 另一个原因是. On the one hand, .; On the other hand,. 一方面.，另一方面.4. 说明利弊型句型 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .(作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in.(题目议题). Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常来说，人们相信有如下几
10、点优势。 Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一；In addition, 缺点二. To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In that case, we will make a better use of . 总之，我们应该尽力充分利用其优势
11、，同时减少缺点。如果那样的话，我们将能更好的利用.5. 正反观点式句型 Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should. Our opinions are divided on this topic. (导入，观点有分歧) Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出2-3个理由) However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点).
12、Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more.In addition.(列出2-3个反对理由) Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms, so I support it. (个人观点)6. 个人观点论述句型 As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for
13、this are as follows. (亮明自己的观点） First of all. Secondly.Besides. (列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由) In conclusion, I believe that. (总结，构成总分总结构)7. 提出建议类句型 Im so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in . in you last last letter(背景介绍). As far as I am concerned, it would be wise to take the following suggestions. (导入
14、下文) I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. To begin with, Id like to suggest that you should . Because it can . In addition, if I were you, I would . This is a good way of . Whats more, you are supposed to. Only
15、 then you will.(列举建议内容以及理由) I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. (表达愿望)8. 表达活动邀请类句型 I know that you are interested in. And I am writing to invite you to take part in. (背景介绍，提出邀请) There is an activity about.(活动名称), which will be held .(活动地点)
16、. It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on July 1st(时间) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, .will be put on. (活动内容). Come and join us! I think well have a great time. (再次提出邀请) I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)9. 表达求助类句型 .(背景介绍). I find it is quite hard to . (提出问题). Th
17、erefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/ give me a hand. (表达目的) Im faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with. Whats more. What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to . Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you
18、 can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.10. 表达感谢类句型 Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多亏） Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. Without your help, its impossible for me to. (没有你的帮助，对我来视说是不可能的) Without your help, its impossible for
19、me to get such good grades. Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的帮助使得我做某事成为可能。)Your help makes it possible for me to change myself. 必备写作范文：1. 护林防火（必须了解，多记一些要点）话题热度：木里火灾，西昌火灾，冕宁火灾给我们每个人深深的警示：护林防火，人人有责。目前，天干物燥，气温上升，凉山州森林防火形式依然严峻。为此，我校组织了以护林防火，人人有责”的主题演讲活动。假如你是李红，请你以“Preventing forest from
20、fire is everyones duty”为主题用英语写一篇演讲稿参加本次演讲比赛，号召大家积极参与森林防火，人人有责的宣传活动，让学生明白青山绿水就是金山银山。内容如下：护林防火的重要性1. 森林吸收二氧化碳，生产氧气2. 有许多动物住在森林里，它们从林中获取食物3. 森林让山更绿，水干净 森林火灾导致很多问题烧死人和动物；严重破坏自然环境。护林防火的主要措施1. 政府花钱修建了森林隔离带；2. 每天许多消防员和工作人员在山上守护森林；3. 政府制定了以下规则：多植树，少伐木；不准带火种进山，进林区；不准在野外吸烟，野炊，烤火；不准上坟烧香，烧纸，燃放鞭炮；、4. 告诉家人和朋友积极参与
21、保护森林；5. 如果发现森林火灾拨打电话12119，但老人和孩子不能去救火。自我意识及感悟写作要求：1. 参考单词：destroy(破坏)，take in carbon dioxide（二氧化碳），make oxygen（制造氧气），in order to (为了)，avoid(避免),fire accident(火灾事故)，Take an active part in (积极参与) ,government （政府），guard（守护），firemen（消防员）,森林隔离带（forest isolation belt）,救火（fight/put out a fire）火种 kindling m
22、aterial，林区forest zone , 烤火warm oneself by a fire , 祭拜祖先worship ancestors, 烧香 burnincense，钱纸josspaper，燃放鞭炮set off firecrackers2. 所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚； 4. 词数80词左右。（演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）Itswell-knownthattheforestistheraretreasureofmankind.Itbenefitsusalot.Itcanta
23、keincarbondioxidefromtheairandmakeoxygen,somanyanimalsliveintheforestandgetfoodfromit.Meanwhile,forestcankeepwatercleanerandmakethemountainsgreener.However,inthepastfewyears,forestfirehascausedalotofproblems.Firecouldkillpeopleandanimals.Itdestroyedthenaturalenvironmentbadly.Theoutbreakofthebigfores
24、tfireinMuli,XichangandMianninghasgivenusadeepwarning.Thesedays,withthetemperaturerisinggradually,itsdryandhotinLiangShan.Inordertoavoidfireaccidents,thegovernmenthasmadegreatefforts.Forexample,forestisolationbeltsarebuilteverywhereinthforest.Anumberoffiremenandworkersguardtheforestsinthemountainseve
25、ryday.Asacitizen,everyoneisresponsibleforprotectingtheforestandpreventingfire.Sowhatcanwedofortheforestandhowtokeepawayfromtheforestfire?Themainmeasuresareasfollows.Firstly,moreandmoretreesshouldbeplantedinsteadofcuttingthemdown.Secondly,itsnotallowedtobringkindlingmaterialsintothemountains,especial
26、lytheforestzone.Thirdly,wemustntsmoke,goforapicnicandwarmourselvesbymakingafireintheopenair.Moreimportantly,wearenotsupposedtoburnincense,burnjosspaper,andsetofffirecrackerstoworshipourancestors.Ifyoufindaforestfire,pleasecall12119,buttheoldandchildrenmustnttakepartinputtingoutafire.Besides,itsimpor
27、tanttocallonthepeoplearoundustofollowthesemeasures.Aswecansay,cleanwaterandgreenmountainsareourtreasures.Itrulyhopeeveryonecanplayakeyroleinforestprotectionandfireprevention.Letstakeactionfromnowon!2.社会发展变迁话题热度：2020 年，是决战决胜脱贫攻坚和全面建成小康社会的收官之年。2021 是十四五开局之年，也是新中国的百年诞辰，这一百年里我们经历了巨大的变化，城市经济发展日新月异，居民生活水平
28、、个人素质不断提升。范文1：假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom 特别关注中国政府和人民在脱贫攻坚战中取得的胜利，给他写一封邮件，内容包括1. 与过去的贫困对比，介绍现在农村脱贫后的情况;2. 简要说明脱贫成功的原因。注意1，字数 100 左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数。Dear Tom, thanks for your concern about my countrys anti-poverty that held by my country for the remote areas. As a member of Liang shan, I feel
29、so happy to share its development with you.In the past, the people there were so poor that itwas not easy to get enough food to feedthemselves. Some teens wereforced to drop out of school to go out working in cities.Now with the help of the government,my hometown has achieved/changed a lot.First,man
30、ypoorfamilieshaveimprovedtheirlivingstandardwiththegreathelpofthelocalgovernment.Second,manyvillagersaregreatlysupportedandencouragedtodevelopagriculture.Asaresult,theyarebecomingrichandlivinginbrightandbighousesnow.Third,studentswhoareinamountainousarea can enjoy freeeducation and the elderly are p
31、rovided with free health care.Even better, they can get monthly poverty assistance from the government and society.Fourth,theenvironmentaroundushasalsoimprovedalot.Forexample,theriverwhichwaspollutedbadlybeforeisbecomingcleanerandcleaner.Besides,lotsofwideroadswerebuilt,whichmakesitmoreconvenientfor
32、ustogoanywhereatanytime,especiallyonrainydays. AsaChinese,Imsoproudofmycountry.Meanwhile,Imsothankfultoourgovernmentandparty.Westudentsmustmakeadecisiontodevoteourselvestobuildingourcountry.Istronglybelievethatourmotherlandwillbebetterandbetter.I hope you can visit our country and feel the great cha
33、nges.Yours,Li Hua3.志愿者话题热度：范文2：假如你是Ella,你们年级计划下个月组织一次赴四川贫困地区做志愿工作的活动。请根据以下要点提示向你的校长史密斯先生写一封请求信，阐明一下这次志愿者服务活动的相关内容以及你的感想。要求：80 词左右，给出部分不计入总词数，可适当发挥。提示：1.活动时间及地点：下个月在凉山贫困地区；2.活动目的：帮助孩子们并使他们振奋；3.活动内容：教孩子们唱歌，给孩子们讲故事，给他们传授不同的知识；4.你的请求。Dear Mr Smith,We are writing to ask permission for a voluntary work ac
34、tivity.In order to help the children in poor areas and raise their spirits, our grade decides to organize a voluntary activity in Liangshan next month.We plan to teach them to draw pictures as well as telling them interesting stories about the outside world. We will spend two days with them. We will
35、 also teach different knowledge to them so that they can have a better understanding of the world.In my opinion,doing voluntary work can make our life richer and more colorful.Could you please give us permission to have the activity?Yoursincerely,Ella4.校园安全话题热度：校园霸凌、校园食品、校园消防等校园安全问题时有发生，如何有效提升校园安全指数
36、，完善校园安全设备一直是我们需要思考的问题。每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。安全对每个人都很重要交通：外出时遵守交通规则食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需谨慎远离危险之人遇到危险保持冷静然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助尽可能避免受伤害 保证自己的安全Dear friends，Everyone has only one life,we should treasure our lives. But how can we
37、protect ourselves？Here are some suggestionsOn the one hand,we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do.First,when we go out，we must obey traffic rules.If we walk, we must use sidewalks and mustnt run a red light；If we ride bikes,we must ride along the right side and shouldnt carry
38、 others；Second，we should develop a healthy eating habitsEat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less.When food smells bad,dont eat it.Third,when we play sports or games,be careful not to hurt ourselves.Fourth，we mustnt swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around
39、On the other hand，we should learn to protect ourselves,which is one of the most important living skills.We must be careful when making friends especially onlineSome person online are not honestThey are dangerous,so we must keep away from them.If we happen to have trouble,we should keep calm and reme
40、mber to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurtIn a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our livesThats all. Thank you！ 6. 环境话题热度：范文一、假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Eli对中国正在推广的垃圾分类政策很感兴趣，他想了解一下相关情况，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1. 上海率先实行；2. 垃圾须分四类(
41、干、湿、可循环、有害) ；3. 公众反应。参考词汇：rash sortingwaste sorting (垃圾分类), recyclables, kitchen waste, harmful waste and other waste, dustbin注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Eli,Having learned that you are interested in the trash-sorting program promotedrecently in China, I am here writing to give you a brief int
42、roduction.As far as I know, Shanghai has become the pioneer of our countrys waste sortingpolicy. As of July 1st this year, the residents in Shanghai have not been able todump their waste bags in whichever bin was closest. On the contrary, domesticwaste is required to be classified into four categori
43、es: dry refuse, wet trash,recyclable waste and hazardous(dangerous) waste.Faced with the new rule, many citizens in Shanghai are finding it a little toocomplicated, with every item of waste now under careful scrutiny(examination)and classification. Still, there are more people who warmly support the
44、 policybecause it helps people to cultivate greener lifestyle habits and helps China tobecome a more beautiful country.Yours,Li Hua范文2：塑料袋的广泛使用给人们的生活带来很多便利，同时也造成了严重的环境污染俗称“白色污染”。假如你是李华，正在参加学校组织的“环境保护，从我做起”的征稿活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语小短文。1.概述“白色污染”现状 2.分析“白色污染”的后果3.发出倡议:减少塑料袋使用量，提高公众的环保意识；提倡重拎布袋子，重提菜篮子。参考词汇：塑
45、料袋：plastic bag禁令 ban 意识 awareness 提倡 advocateThe problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role. While plastic bags bring us much convenience in our daily life, they also lead to a kind of serious environmental pollution. They can be found everywhere, from lands to rivers, and even in the sky, which results
