1、Unit 5 Humans and Nature Lesson 4 Writing Workshop Unit 5 Humans and Nature Lesson4 Writing Workshop Step I Get ready for writing To read and talk about writing a brochure about surviving a disaster.To read for writing.To summarize information.To write a brochure about surviving a disaster.Learning
2、Objectives Step I Get ready for writing 1.Pair work You are going to write a brochure about a disaster.Discuss with your partner.Which disaster do you want to write about？what advice would you give on surviving it?A small book or magazine containing pictures and information about a product,service o
3、r advice.Step II Read for writing 2.Read the brochure about surviving an earthquake on page 41 and find out whats the main idea?The brochure has provided advice for three situations that a person could be during an earthquake.Step III Focus on structure and language How to Survive an EarthquakeSitua
4、tion 1:_1.1 _1.2 _Situation 2:_2.1 _2.2 _2.3 _Situation 3:_3.1 _3.2 _3.3 _If youre indoors:Drop,cover and hold on.Dont run,but protect yourself.If youre outdoors:If youre in a car:Move away from anything that can fall.Find a shelter where you can stay.Wait before moving to another place.Stop.Stay se
5、ated.Drive carefully when the quake stops.3.Read the brochure again.Complete the table.Step III Focus on structure and language 4.Look at the Sentence Builder.Write a few sentences that you may want to include in your brochure about Dos and Donts for surviving a particular disaster.Sentence Builder
6、Imperatives for Dos and Donts Dos Drop down onto your hands and knees.Cover your head and neck with your hands,arms or hard objects.Donts Dont try to run out of the building during an earthquake.祈使语气；祈使语气动词Step III Focus on structure and language 学习小贴士 祈使句 祈使句可用于表示命令、请求、建议、劝告、警告、禁止等。祈使句的主语常是you,且常省略
7、。它以动词原形开头，句尾 用感叹号或句点，句子用降调。祈使句的结构如下：(1)肯定结构Do型：动词原形(+宾语)+其他成分 Be型：Be+表语(+其他成分).Let型：Let+宾语+动词原形(+其他成分).Step III Focus on structure and language 2）否定结构Do型&Be型：Dont be/do.Let型：Dont let+宾语+动词原形(+其他 成分).或者：Let+宾语+not+动词原形(+其他成分).eg:Go and wash your hands.去洗手。（命令）Watch your steps.走路小心。（叮嘱）Look out!Danger
8、!小心！危险！（强烈警告）Keep off the grass.请勿践踏草坪。（禁止）Be quiet,please.(=Please be quiet.)请安静。（请求）Be a good child!要做一个好孩子！Let me help you.让我来帮你。Dont forget me!不要忘记我！Dont be late for school!上学不要迟到！Dont let him go.别让他走。Let s not waste time.咱们别浪费时间了。Activate And Share Read And Explore 翻译+讲解课文 特别提醒(1)lets是let us的简略
9、形式。但lets肯定包括听话人在内，而let us可以不包括。所以在不包括听话人时，一定要用 let us。Let us help you with your English.让我们来帮你学习英语。(us中显然不包括you在内)(2)lets do的否定式通常是lets not do。Lets not have a rest,我们别休息了。Step III Focus on structure and language 如何写灾难逃生的说明文 1.关于灾难逃生的书面表达一般是提纲式作文。考生要根据 所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识和生活常识，采用不同的表达
10、方式将各要 点完整地表述出来。2.写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语 言力求准确、简洁。由于这类文章所陈述的内容都是生活常 识，因此，文章的时态应以一般现在时为主。3.根据灾难发生后采取措施的步骤，按顺序安排好材料。也可 按照所处不同位置或场景，按情况给出不同建议。同时应选 用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时可按照Things to do before./Things to do during./Things not to do during.进行叙述，也可按照firstly/secondly,/.,的方式进行叙述。Step III Focus on
11、 structure and language 常用表达 1.It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as in a fire.2.The firemen had to break down the door to get into the burning house.3.The fire spread through the hotel very quickly but everyone managed to get out.4.When an earthquake happen
12、s,first we should calm down,which is the most important.Step III Focus on structure and language 5.Follow the teachersguidance and keep our actions in order.6.When a fire breaks out,call 119 at once and tell your detailed address so that the firefighters can get there in time.7.Then we should try to
13、 find a safe exit to escape.8.If possible,try to cover our mouths with wet towels to prevent us taking in too much thick smoke and wait for rescue.Step IV Compose your writing 请写一篇100字左右的文章，说明发生火灾时如何逃生。写作导航 高楼大厦给火险逃生带来隐患，如何逃生值得探讨；其实事先防范很重要，这包括检查火灾紧急出口，弄清灭火器的位置及用法等；万一发生火灾也要冷静，可拨打火警电话、避免烟熏、不上电梯、悬挂标志求救
14、等；只要有所准备，就能应对火灾。Step IV Compose your writing Writing a BrochureIts important to:be clear and direct;use simple and clear language.Make the information easy to remember;give advice with reasons for actions in different situations;use the present tense and imperatives;include pictures and key words to
15、 show the important actions.Writing HelpStep IV Compose your writing 范文赏析 Many people now live and work in very tall buildings.It is often not so easy to get away from these buildings in an emergency,resulting in great loss of lives.So how to survive in case of a fire is a problem concerning all tho
16、se involved.Dont lose your head if unfortunately a fire breaks out.First,telephone the fire department immediately when the fire just gets started.Take care not to be overcome by smoke,which can kill you quickly.Step IV Compose your writing Cover your mouth with a wet towel or a wet cloth,and avoid
17、getting into the smoke.Dont get in an elevator,as you may get trapped if the electricity fails.If you can not get away by yourself,it is of great importance to hang something out of the window to attract attention as a sign of asking for help.In short,if you make preparations beforehand and take precautions during the fire,chances are that you will survive in case of a fire if it really breaks out some day.Thank You
