1、2023年高考英语二轮复习：读后续写指导讲义一、解题思路步骤1精读文章，获取记叙文六要素1.关注标题，浏览全文，获取全文时态及基调。2.分段获取记叙文when，where，who，what，why，how六要素。When does it happen？Where does it happen？Who is it？What happens？Why does it happen？How does it happen？3.梳理线索，勾画文章情节。特别关注实词：名词、动词、形容词或副词。情节Para._Para._Para._Para._Para._who what feelings借鉴叙事模型，归纳
2、出故事的开始、冲突、上升部分、高潮。步骤2根据信息提炼文章主题一般情况下，读后续写都是通过小故事讲述大道理，彰显正能量，弘扬真善美。步骤3根据段首句做出合理预测每一段的段首句有承上启下的作用，故预测思路如下：1.第一段段首句和原文衔接，并且引出下文。标注出第一段段首句的关键词，合理推测下文将要续写的内容，即故事的下降部分。2.第二段段首句需要和第一段续写内容衔接，并引出故事的结局。标注出第二段段首句的关键词，反推出第一段的结尾。同时，根据第二段段首句的关键词，预测下文将要续写的内容，即故事的结局。步骤4完整勾勒出整个叙事模型步骤5构思内容，润色语言1.每个段落分3个层次构思。第一段第二段高分标
3、准（1）故事要围绕主要人物展开；（2）详细刻画人物角色及其情感；（3）有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑；（4）运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞，使描写生动；（5）第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑合理，语境连贯；（6）续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极向上。2.语言风格需要和原文保持一致，采用记叙文常见的描写手法来增加细节。（1）动作描写；（2）心理描写；（3）肖像描写；（4）场景描写；（5）有效对话；（6）修辞；（7）精辟结尾。3.采用多样的语法结构及句式。（1）v.ing作状语；（2）独立主格；（3）部分倒装；（4）“so.that”句型；（5）with复合结构；（6）从句；（
4、7）常用修辞；（8）名言。步骤6誊写清晰，字迹工整二、题型解读（2022新高考卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the day of the big crosscountry run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route（路线）through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spot
5、ted David，who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong？ He had worked so hard for
6、this event！I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him，”he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not，and let him decide.”I bit back my frustration（懊恼）.I knew the coach meant wellhe
7、 thought he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David could run if he wanted，I turned to find him coming towards me，his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children，but at scho
8、ol his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing.That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the crosscountry team.It just took him longerthats all.David had not missed a single pra
9、ctice，and although he always finished his run long after the other children，he did always finish.As a special education teacher at the school，I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1：We sat down next to each othe
10、r，but David wouldnt look at me._Paragraph 2：I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners._续写步骤步骤1精读文章，获取记叙文六要素1.全文需用一般过去时态，讲述发生过的事情。2.when：the day of the big crosscountry run.where：the small town；thick ever green forest.who：David；students from seven different primary schoo
11、ls；the schools coach.what：A boy named David，who had a brain disease，participated in running with other students.why：David refused to run before starting because he was afraid that strange students would laugh at him for his disease.how：The author decided to advise David to challenge himself accordin
12、g to his former behaviour.3.梳理线索，勾画文章情节。步骤2根据信息提炼文章主题主题：encouragement and help步骤3根据段首句，做出合理预测预测：作者的鼓舞使David更加自信参加赛跑并取得不错成绩赢得别人的尊重。步骤4完整勾勒出整个叙事模型步骤5构思内容，润色语言1.每个段落分3个层次构思。Continuation Para 1：I knew the refused reason and encouraged David and he accepted my advice.What would I say？What would David ans
13、wer？Result.Continuation Para 2：David overcame his hesitation and conquered himself and earned others praise.How did David perform？What did others react to？Lessons gained.2.采用常见的描写手法来增加细节。动词类：bury，sob，well up，hug，wipe，sound，lurch（突然倾斜），trip（绊倒），give up，flood in，pick up形容词类：inspired，thunderous（雷鸣般的）名词
14、类：faith，determination，encouragement，delight，destiny（尊严）3.采用多样的语法结构及句式。I hugged him firmly，patting his back gently.我紧紧地拥抱着他，轻轻地拍着他的后背。Seeing the determination in his eyes，I wiped the tears on his cheeks，promising to keep him company until the end of the competition.看到他眼神中的坚毅，我擦了擦他脸颊上的泪水，答应他会陪伴他直到这次比赛
15、结束。My heart sank.我的心一沉。Upon dashing towards the finishing line，a wave of thunderous applause flooded in.一冲向终点线，雷鸣般的掌声就如潮水般涌来。It was you who made me realize that just be myself，and I can be the master of my destiny.是你让我意识到，做我自己，我就可以成为自己命运的主人。步骤6誊写清晰，字迹工整We sat down next to each other，but David wouldn
16、t look at me.He buried his head in his hands，sobbing.“Do you fear the audience will laugh at you？”asked I.He nodded and bit his lip，tears welling up in his eyes.I hugged him firmly，patting his back gently.“I have faith in you and you will not be looked down upon.Instead，everyone will cheer for you w
17、hen you are running！” David was inspired instantly and accepted to run.Seeing the determination in his eyes，I wiped the tears on his cheeks，promising to keep him company until the end of the competition.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.The starters gun sounded，
18、and David lurched forward with the other children.But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground.My heart sank.As I started to shout encouragement，other voices around me took up the call“Come on David，you can do it！”David picked himself up and started again.He used u
19、p all his power to march on.This was Davids run.He had worked for it，and he wouldnt give up！Upon dashing towards the finishing line，a wave of thunderous applause flooded in.I ran towards David and gave him a bear hug.“You made it！”His eyes twinkled with delight，saying，“Thank you.It was you who made
20、me realize that just be myself，and I can be the master of my destiny.”三、素材积累语料库1动作描写动作描写是描写人物、凸显人物性格的有力手段，利用恰当的词语对表达人物心理和性格特征有很大的帮助。1.常见的“说”（1）动词类表达“说”。基本表达：say说tell告诉生动表达：shout 大声叫add补充说continue 继续说explain 解释comfort 安慰warn 警告remind 提醒scream 尖叫whisper 耳语complain 抱怨order 命令nod点头laugh笑着说sigh 叹息suggest
21、 建议recommend推荐declare/announce 宣布howl 嚎叫remark评论说（2）副词类修饰“说”。angrily愤怒地casually 随意地happily/cheerfully开心地harshly 严厉地reluctantly不情愿地impatiently不耐烦地madly疯狂地desperately 绝望地2.常见的“看”（1）动词类表达“看”。see/look at/notice/observe/watch/view/find out 发现make out 辨认出look around环顾四周look up 向上看look down 向下看stare at 凝视g
22、lance at 瞥了一眼glance around/round the room 扫视房间glare at 怒目而视glare angrily at sb对某人怒目而视recognize认出spot 注意到（2）名词类表达“看”。have a good/close look at 仔细看one more look 又看了一眼at the sight of 一看到catch sight of 看到lose sight of看不到come into view 呈现在眼前3.常见的“走”walk/run/wander/stroll漫步wander into the woods漫步到森林里walk
23、across street步行穿过马路stroll about/around 闲逛walk arm in arm 臂挽着臂走walk gracefully步态优美地走step back/back off 后退dash/rush冲head for朝出发tiptoe踮着脚走make ones way（排除困难）前进feel ones way摸索前行stagger 蹒跚drag ones feet 拖着脚走pace back and forth 来回踱步jump to ones feet一跃而起jog in the woods 在林间慢跑rush out of the room 冲出房间crawl
24、to safety爬到安全的地方4.常见的“笑”smile/laugh笑laugh at 嘲笑tease取笑light up 喜笑颜开5.常见的“哭”be in tears/cry/weep 哭泣sob抽泣burst into tears/burst out crying放声大哭6.其他与肢体语言相关的词汇applaud鼓掌欢迎shrug ones shoulders 耸肩frown at sb 皱着眉头看着某人bow to sb 向某人鞠躬nod in agreement点头表示赞同pat sb on the shoulder/head拍某人的肩膀/头grasp/hold ones hand
25、抓住某人的手point to sb指向某人wave ones hand挥手7.介词短语without hesitation毫不犹豫地with excitement/thrill兴奋地with wonder/surprise惊奇地with shame/guilt 羞愧地with satisfaction 满意地with sympathy同情地with fear/horror 害怕地with tiredness/exhaustion疲惫地with embarrassment 尴尬地with despair 绝望地with force 用力地with anger/rage/fury愤怒地with c
26、aution小心翼翼地语料库2心理描写心理描写分为概括描述和细节描述。概括描述是总体描述，只将意思表达清楚即可。细节描述则是具体刻画，使描述更加生动，有画面感。1.喜悦/兴奋概括描述：adj.happy，glad，delighted，excitedn.happiness，joy，excitement，thrill，delight 细节描述：喜悦/兴奋的表现dance/jump for joy 高兴地跳起来an encouraged expression一个受到鼓舞的表情in cheerful spirits 心情愉快a satisfied look 满意的表情be delighted at.因
27、而高兴brighten sbs heart使某人心情愉快feel inspired/encouraged感到被鼓舞be in high spirits情绪高涨be deeply moved被深深地感动a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心indescribably wild joy 难以形容的开心can hardly conceal ones excitement几乎无法掩饰某人兴奋的心情be powerfully attracted to 被强烈地吸引keep up ones spirits 振作精神be content with.对感到满意b
28、e excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜be fascinated by the scene/beauty of.被场面/美丽吸引be joyful over/about.因而高兴on the top of the world心满意足，非常幸福tears of happiness flowing down流下幸福的泪水with抽象名词作状语Ones eyes shone/glowed with joy/happiness.Ones heart was racing with excitement.2.怒概括描述：adj.angryn.anger，rage
29、，fury细节描述：愤怒的表现feel annoyed感到恼怒的be displeased at ones conduct对某人的行为感到不满be speechless with anger气得说不出话rage at sb对某人大发脾气flame with anger 气得满脸通红get mad at sb对某人勃然大怒express/voice a complaint about.对表示不满“so.that”句型，v.ing/v.ed作状语She felt so angry that she stormed out of the room，slamming the door angrily
30、behind her.Boiling with/Filled with rage（anger/fury），she was barely able to say a single word.3.哀概括描述：adj.sadn.sadness，sorrow，grief，watery eyes细节描述：悲伤的表现a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感with a heavy heart 怀着沉重的心情cry ones heart out 悲痛欲绝with a sinking heart 心情沉重have a worried look 愁眉苦脸feel frustrated/depr
31、essed/discouraged感到沮丧的break ones heart over ones death因某人的死亡而痛心make ones heart bleed使某人悲痛die of a broken heart 心碎而死with a sorrowful heart 忧郁的a flash of grief comes upon sb.某人感到一阵悲伤be drown in spirits情绪低落lose ones spirits垂头丧气be sad at heart 伤心a broken spirit 意志消沉比喻、夸张等修辞My heart began to race and my
32、mind went blank.Something choked him and he could not finish the sentence.Her voice began to crack.Tears welled up in my eyes./His face was wet with tears./Tears streamed down her face.4.惧概括描述：v.frighten，scare，terrifyadj.frightened/frightening，scared/scary，terrified/terrifying，fearfuln.scare，fright，
33、fear细节描述：恐惧的表现be seized with panic 惊慌失措fall into despair 陷入绝望“so/such.that”句型，“too.to”结构，形容词作状语、表语At the sight of the fierce wolf，her eyes were wide with horror.At the sight of the fierce wolf，I was too scared to move even an inch.At the sight of the fierce wolf，I felt so scared that I froze with te
34、rror.At the sight of the fierce wolf，I was seized by such a strong sense of horror that I was sweating.At the sight of the fierce wolf，I froze/was terrified/was scared/was frightened.5.悔概括描述：v.regretadj.regretful，ashamed细节描述：后悔的表现send（sb）ones regrets（向某人）表示歉意express regret 表示遗憾I am ashamed of.我对感到很羞
35、愧虚拟语气、谚语等She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart.She kept thinking she shouldnt have stolen the wallet.Otherwise，things would turn out differently.Dont cry over spilt milk.语料库3肖像描写肖像描写即描绘人物的面貌特征，目的是以“形”传“神”，刻画人物的性格特征，反映人物的内心世界。1.体态外貌描写short 矮tall 高thin 瘦的welldressed穿着讲究的in
36、ones 20s/30s在某人二十几岁/三十几岁的时候mediumsized中等身材（的）be of medium size 身材适中a pair of blue eyes一双蓝色的眼睛a graceful figure 优美的身段a skinny figure 瘦削的身材a wellbuilt man身材魁梧的人a handsome figure 仪表堂堂2.性格与特征描写calm镇定的confident自信的strong坚强的selfish 自私的humourous 幽默的optimistic乐观的lovely可爱的generous 宽宏大量的with the virtue of.具有的美
37、德a talented person天资高的人an easy person to deal with容易相处的人a wellinformed man消息灵通/见多识广的人a smoothspoken man 能说会道的人be fond of.喜欢，热衷be keen on 喜爱；对着迷be skilled in/do well in精通；擅长have a gift/talent for.在方面有天赋strong will/determination and courage 坚强的意志和勇气a strong sense of responsibility 强烈的责任感语料库4场景描写在故事叙述中
38、添加场景描写不仅有助于锁定故事发生的地点，了解该地点的现场情况，还能渲染故事氛围，增添画面感，产生呼应并烘托人物心理活动的积极作用。1.天气情况a rainy season 多雨的季节a stormy night 暴风雨之夜in the pouring rain在倾盆大雨中continuous/constant rains 连绵不断的雨in the blinding rain在茫茫大雨中be buried in snow 深埋在雪中unbearably hot 难以忍受的热in the warm spring sunshine 在温暖的春光里clear up 放晴fierce/heavy/vi
39、olent storms狂风暴雨a timely/seasonable rain及时雨，好雨bathe in（the）sunshine沐浴在阳光下the colour of the sky is changing天空的颜色在变化first light gray，then dark gray先是浅灰色，然后是深灰色finally dark and dense最后又黑又密2.地理位置at a distance在远处a lake in the forest森林里的一个湖a small village off the map一个偏僻的小村子within a stones throw of the be
40、ach离海滨仅咫尺之遥be situated at the northern end of.位于北端in a village among the hills在群山环抱的村庄里room facing south朝南的房间the thinly populated rural area人烟稀少的农村地区be located somewhere on the Pacific coast 位于太平洋沿岸某处beneath the surface of the water在水面下snowcapped mountain top积雪覆盖的山顶a favourable situated city 位置优越的城市
41、a steep uphill climb一个陡峭的爬坡the sights along the way沿途的风景rolling down the river nearby 沿着附近的河流滚滚而下3.以境写情（1）The birds sang； the grass was green； the sun was warm； and Hans heart was full of love.（2）The air was rich with happiness.（3）As she headed out to the car，she breathed in the pleasant air and adm
42、ired the crowd.（4）The wind was howling around the house.4.乐景衬哀情It was beautiful spring weather，but neither dogs nor humans were aware of it.The whole long day was a blaze of sunshine.Life was waking after the long months of frost.And in the middle of all this life，like travellers of death，the two me
43、n，the woman and the dogs staggered on their journey.（The Call of the Wild）语料库5交通篇1.交通方式之公路driver驾驶员，司机passenger 乘客，旅客vehicle交通工具，车辆bicycle 自行车，脚踏车highway公路，干道，交通要道cross交叉，穿越engine发动机cyclist骑自行车的人petrol汽油passerby 路人pedestrian步行者，行人pavement人行道，路面cab/taxi出租车motorcycle摩托车crossroads十字路口freeway 高速公路cycle
44、lane 自行车道private car 私家车shared bike共享自行车electric vehicle 电动汽车new energy vehicle新能源汽车driving licence驾驶执照pick up 接载traffic light/signal交通灯2.交通方式之铁路underground地下的railway station 火车站express line 快车线路track 轨道subway地铁platform 站台tunnel地道，隧道highspeed railway/train 高铁3.交通方式之航空pilot 飞行员airport 机场airline 航空公司aircraft/airplane 飞机flight航班
