1、U n i t 1写作指导如何写校园生活日记英英 语语感知文体常识感知文体常识日记作为一种常见的应用文形式,主要是用来记录作者近日经历的事情。在此基础上,作者还要发表自己对这件事情的看法和理解,这样才能突出写日记的本质所在。牢记写作素材牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.perform v.执行;表演;表现2.at the thought of一想起;一想到3.excellent adj.卓越的;极好的4.cheer v.欢呼;为加油5.gain v.赢得;收获6.confidence n.信心;信任7.try ones best尽某人最大努力(二)精彩句型1.The first days of s
2、chool are meant to orient the freshmen to the campus life.开学头几天用来让新生熟悉校园生活。2.When the bell rang,we were in our eagerness to gather on the playground.上课铃响了,我们急切地去操场集合。3.The teacher introduced the campus life to the freshmen.老师向新生介绍校园生活。4.With butterflies in my stomach,I failed for the first time,yet
3、I didnt lose heart.第一次失败了,我心里七上八下,但我没有灰心。5.From this lesson I came to see that one will become successful if he has persistence.从这件事中,我明白了一个道理:一个人如果有毅力,他就会成功。6.Studying is not something you do just because your parents ask you to do it.学习不仅仅是因为你父母要求你去做就去做的事情。示例写作步骤示例写作步骤【写作要求写作要求】假如你是高二学生李华,今天你们学校举行
4、了一次运动会,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记记录一下运动会的情况。内容包括:1.举办的时间和地点;2.开展的体育项目;3.你所参加的项目及获得的成绩。【审题谋篇审题谋篇】体裁日记人称第一人称时态一般过去时话题记录一下运动会的情况框架第一段引出话题:介绍举办的时间和地点;第二段主体部分:介绍运动会的比赛情况,开展的体育项目,所参加的项目及获得的成绩;第三段表达喜爱和希望。【遣词造句遣词造句】1.词汇(1)运动会 (2)最令人激动的赛事 (3)以开始 (4)位列第二名 (5)擅长 (6)参加 (7)玩得很愉快 (8)期待 a sports meeting the most exciting eve
5、ntbegin withcome in second placebe good attake part inhave a good timelook forward to2.句式(1)要点翻译今天,我们学校举行了一次运动会,这是整个学年对所有学生来说最激动人心的活动。Today,our school held a sports meeting,and it is _in the whole school year.上午,运动会从100米开始,随后是200米。In the morning,the sports meeting ,and later,the 200-meter race.the m
6、ost exciting eventfor all studentsbegan with the 100-meter race由于我篮球打得很好,我参加了这场篮球赛。,I took part in the basketball game.我们队赢了,这使我们非常高兴。Our team won,.(2)句式升级用定语从句升级句_用现在分词短语作状语升级句,I took part in the basketball game.As I am quite good at playing basketballwhich made us very happyToday,our school held a
7、 sports meeting,which is the most exciting event for all students in the whole school year.Being quite good at playing basketball【妙笔成篇妙笔成篇】Friday October 29th SunnyToday,our school held a sports meeting,which is the most exciting event for all students in the whole school year.The sports meeting sta
8、rted at 8:00 a.m.in our new gym.There were a lot of sports events.In the morning,the sports meeting began with the 100-meter race,and later,the 200-meter race.My classmate Tom came in second place in the 200-meter race.The high-jump,long-jump and basketball game took place in the afternoon.Being qui
9、te good at playing basketball,I took part in the basketball game.Our team won,which made us very happy.The sports meeting ended at 6:00 p.m.All of us had a good time and we look forward to the next sports meeting in our school.针对训练假如你是新华高中的新生李华,你在新学校的第一天给你留下了美好的印象,请以“My First Day at Senior High”为题,写
10、一篇日记。内容包括:1.校园美景;2.印象深刻的一件事;3.对高中新生活的畅想。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。WednesdaySeptember 1st SunnyMy First Day at Senior HighI was amazed by the new campus the moment I stepped into it.With varieties of trees and flowers along the paths,the whole campus looks like a beautiful garden.Better still,the
11、modern and well-equipped buildings fit in well with the surroundings.One thing impressed me most was the self-introduction among new classmates.By introducing ourselves one by one,we came to know one another for the first time and I was touched by my cute and friendly new classmates.My first day in senior high is really wonderful.With so beautiful a campus and so nice classmates,I strongly believe that I will have a good school life and can study well with hard work.
