1、 Learn How to Write an Article.Where did the story happen?When did the story happen?Who were in the story?What did the brothers do?How did they make the decision?whats the ending of this scene?Who did they find?What was his situation?What did Henry tell them?What impression did Henry give them?The s
2、tory happened in London The story happened in 1903.Two rich brothers and Henry The two brothers made a bet.They doubt whether a man would survive in London a month with one million pound.They found Henry,and he was an American young man.They called him in.He was in rags and wandering in the street.H
3、enry told them his sad experiences.They thought Henry was an honest and a hard-working man.They decided to make the bet on him and give him a letter with a one hundred million pound note in it.How about putting these sentences together?The story happened in London in 1903.Two rich brothers made a be
4、t on whether a man would survive in London a month with one million pound.They found Henry,and he was an American young man.He was in rags and wandering in the street.They called Henry in.Henry told them his sad experiences.They thought Henry was an honest and a hard-working man.They decided to make
5、 the bet on him and give him a letter with a one hundred million pound note in it.Is this a complete story of scene three?How do you think of the story?Is it well written or not?Why do you think so?The story happened in London in 1903.Two rich brothers made a bet.They doubted whether a man would sur
6、vive in London a mouth with one million pound.They found Henry,and he was an American young man.He was in rags and wandering in the street.They called Henry in.Henry told them his sad experiences.They thought Henry was an honest and a hard-working man.They decided to make the bet on him and give him
7、 a letter with a one hundred million pound note in it.The story is a complete story,but it is not a very good one in writing.So we need to make some changes to make it perfect.,1903wealthyAt that time,they onwhoAfter,theyAs a result(so),theySo theyThe story happened in London,1903.Two wealthy brothe
8、rs made a bet on whether a man would survive a month with a million pound note in London.At that time,they saw Henry,who was in rags and wandering in the street.So they called Henry in.After Henry told them his experiences,they thought Henry was an honest and a hard-working man.As a result,they deci
9、ded to make their bet on him and give him the letter with a million pound bank note in it.whetherwhoSo how can we write a good article?Tips for a good writingMake a decision what contents should be included in your article.Make sure no elements(要点要点)are left.Try to write correct(right)sentences and
10、put them in a proper order.Use proper words or phrases to combine(join)your sentences into a passage.Try to use one or two clauses if possibleTry to change some of your words into advanced ones.Learn to appreciate and try to be a good judge With the letter,Henry went to _.Seeing him in rags,the owne
11、r and the water treated him _ because they _whether he could afford his food.Henry was _hungry _he ate two orders of food.When he was asked to pay for the bill,all of them were _ at his note because it was so large a note that no one had seen before.They began to _ treating such an important guess l
12、ike that and treated him very politely instead.Whats more,they didnt ask him to _ any longer and even _ when he was showed out.From the last part,we know Henry got a letter with money.What happened next?a restaurantin a rude mannerdoubtedSo thatshockedregretted(后悔后悔)pay for the billbowed With the le
13、tter,Henry went to a restaurant.Seeing him in rags,the owner and the water treated him in a rude manner because they doubted whether he could afford his food.Henry was so hungry that he ate two orders of food.When he was asked to pay for the bill,all of them were shocked at his note because it was s
14、o large a note that no one had seen before.They began to regretted treating such an important guest like that and treated him very politely instead.Whats more,they didnt ask him to pay for the bill and even bowed when he was showed out.Reading and try to be a judgeHow do you think about my article?I
15、f 30 is the full mark,how many will you give for my article?Can you find any strengths in my passage?_ _ If you want to be a good writer,you should first be a good reader.When you read a passage,you should pay attention to how the passage is formed,what kind of words,phrases or sentence make the pas
16、sage a good one.If you want to be a good writer,memorizing work is very important,so try your best to remember something.When writing,you may use them freely.Tips for a good writing Practice makes perfect（熟能生巧）Lets go back to the story at the restaurantthe attitude of the owner,waiter and the hostes
17、sbefore showing the bank note after showing the bank note in a rude mannerVery politeWhat made their attitude change quite a lot indeed?It was money(the one million pound note)Money is very important in our daily life.We can use money to buy whatever we want.Even we cant live without money.However,i
18、s money everything?support(_%)（be)against(_%)In my opinion,I thinkAs far as I am concerned,I think From my point of view,Personally,I believe.As for me,I support.To my way of thinking,I think.PersonalIy,I disagree that.In my opinion,I dont believe.I am strongly against that.But as for me,I dont thin
19、k.Writing Please write a short passage to tell your parents about your discussion in this class and tell them your opinion about money.You could write your passage like this.WritingWritingWritingWriting Today our class had a hated discussion on whether money is everything.We have different opinion o
20、n this topic._%of the class think.For one thing,.For another thing,.Whats more,.However(But on the contrary/Oppositely),_%student disagree .First,.In addition,Finally.As for me(As far as I am concerned/In my opinion.),I think(believe).Appreciation Money is not everything It can buy you a house but n
21、ot a home,It can buy you a bed but not sleep,It can buy you a clock but not time,It can buy you books but not knowledge,It can buy you blood but not life,It can buy you sex but not love,It can buy you a position but not respect,It can buy you medicine but not health,Money may not be the root of all evil(罪恶罪恶),But it often bring us anguish(苦恼苦恼)and regrets(懊悔懊悔).
