1、How to do Proof-reading 短文改错短文改错Can we express the following phrases like this?马马虎虎马马虎虎人山人海人山人海心花怒放心花怒放给你点颜色看看给你点颜色看看Horse horse tiger tigerPeople mountain people seaHeart flowers angry openGive you some color see seeStep 1 Lead-in 导入导入 Zhinu,the granddaughter of the Goddess of Heaven,visited the ea
2、rth.While she was on earth,he met the herd boy,Niulang and they fell in love.They get married secretly,and they were very happy.When the Goddess of Heaven knew that Zhinu was married with a human,she became very angrily and made the weaving girl return to Heaven.Niulang tried to follow her,but the M
3、ilky Way stopped him.Find that Zhinu was sad,her grandmother finally had decided to let the couples cross the Milky Way to meet once a year.Magpies make a bridge of their wings but the couple can meet on a seventh day of the seventh lunar month.People hope that the weather will be fine on that day,b
4、ecause it is raining,it means that Zhinu is weeping and the couple wont be able to meet.Step 2 Practice练习练习 Zhinu,the granddaughter of the Goddess of Heaven,visited the earth.While she was on earth,he met the herd boy,Niulang and they fell in love.They get married secretly,and they were very happy.W
5、hen the Goddess of Heaven knew that Zhinu was married with a human,she became very angrily and made the weaving girl return to Heaven.shegottoangryNiulang tried to follow her,but the Milky Way stopped him.Find that Zhinu was sad,her grandmother finally had decided to let the couples cross the Milky
6、Way to meet once a year.Magpies make a bridge of their wings but the couple can meet on a seventh day of the seventh lunar month.People hope that the weather will be fine on that day,because it is raining,it means that Zhinu is weeping and the couple wont be able to meet.FindingcouplesotheifWrong wo
7、rd错词错词Missing word 少词少词Unnecessary word 多词多词(1-2个个)(1-2个个)Zhinu,the granddaughter of the Goddess of Heaven,visited the earth.While she was on earth,he met the herd boy,Niulang and they fell in love.They get married secretly,and they were very happy.When the Goddess of Heaven knew that Zhinu was marr
8、ied with a human,she became very angrily and made the weaving girl return to Heaven.shegottoangry代词代词动词动词介词介词形容词形容词Niulang tried to follow her,but the Milky Way stopped him.Find that Zhinu was sad,her grandmother finally had decided to let the couples cross the Milky Way to meet once a year.Magpies
9、make a bridge of their wings but the couple can meet on a seventh day of the seventh lunar month.People hope that the weather will be fine on that day,because it is raining,it means that Zhinu is weeping and the couple wont be able to meet.Findingcouplesotheif非谓语非谓语动词动词名词名词连词连词冠词冠词从句从句 1.名词名词(Noun)2
10、.冠词冠词(Article)3.代词代词(Pronoun)4.动词动词(Verb)5.形容词和副词（形容词和副词（Adjective and Adverb）6.介词（介词（Preposition）7.连词（连词（Conjunction）8.从句（从句（Clause）9.逻辑（逻辑（Logical meaning）Step 3 The important points for tests考点考点 错误主要集中在动词的错误主要集中在动词的_、_、_ _ _等方面等方面。3.Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.4.He shouted loudly t
11、o his mother as if he was scolding his son.wishes1.We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel before.2.Today,I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.hadadmitted 考点一考点一 动词形动词形时态时态语态语态主谓一致主谓一致（虚拟）语气（虚拟）语气were1.The library has all kinds of book.Im sure you will find
12、one you like.2.I was playing at my cousin house.3.Your knowledges of English can help the whole class.books knowledge名词爱考名词爱考_与与_，也要分清，也要分清_ _cousins考点二考点二 名词数名词数数数格格可可不可不可修饰修饰名词名词，作宾补作宾补及及连系动词连系动词后用后用_；修饰修饰动词动词，形容词形容词，副词副词及及整个句子整个句子时时用用 _；注意注意_和和_的使用。的使用。1.We can hear birds singing happy all around
13、.2.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.3.The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.4.Still,your happiness makes him happily too.proudhappilyfasterhappy考点三考点三 还要注意形和副还要注意形和副形容词形容词副词副词比较级比较级最高级最高级1.I could not to run very fast and fell behind.2.Li Ming came see me every day.3.There
14、were many meaningful things that were worth think of.to主要错误为三种：非谓语主要错误为三种：非谓语(-ing;-ed;to do)的的混淆混淆；不定式不定式to的的遗漏遗漏或或多用多用；非谓语与谓语动词的；非谓语与谓语动词的混混淆淆。thinking考点四考点四 非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别lose my heart 丧失信心；泄气丧失信心；泄气 such many people in hurry in a short 简言之简言之,总之总之,简而言之简而言之in a short while 不久不久,一会而后一会而后,不久以后不久以后
15、in Sunday afternoonaonso介词、短语多半考搭配介词、短语多半考搭配,多、漏、误用想周到多、漏、误用想周到考点五考点五 介词、短语要牢记介词、短语要牢记_的性别，单复数及代词格的误用；的性别，单复数及代词格的误用；_，_以及以及_的误用；的误用；“_”一词的不当使用一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中作形式主语包括用于从句中作形式主语或宾语或宾语)；代词方面的错误主要体现在：代词方面的错误主要体现在：考点六考点六 代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟人称代词人称代词物主代词物主代词反身代词反身代词不定代词不定代词it1.Just at that time I woke up and fo
16、und me still in bed!2.I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement.3.With the help of Katia,a roommate of me,Ive soon got used to living without my parents.myselfourmine句法涉及到句法涉及到一致一致,从句多考从句多考_（误用误用，多用多用或或遗漏遗漏）1.One day I saw a second-hand bic
17、ycle,that was only one hundred yuan.2.Here is my idea about how a friend is like.3.If they had said was true,I would have a chance of winning the prize.whichwhatwhat考点七考点七 句子成分多分析句子成分多分析引导词引导词 If what you have lost is time,you can never have the missed time again.冠词在前冠词在前“错错”“多多”“少少”。常考的错误形式有：冠词常考的错
18、误形式有：冠词the,a,an 的的_，_或或_。1.I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school.2.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.3.He was right there in the front of me.athe考点八考点八 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾误用误用多用多用少用少用连词连词常考常考 _，_，_,_等的逻辑错误，以及等的逻辑错误，以及搭配错误搭配错误。1.Today I was
19、 having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.2.He thought the poor animal was injured,but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.whenso butandorso词法句法均未错词法句法均未错,逻辑推理来寻找。逻辑推理来寻找。主要是句主要是句子之间逻辑关系的矛盾，代词在人称上的不子之间逻辑关系的矛盾，代词在人称上的不一致等。一致等。1.That night，we sat down to what they th
20、ought would be a pleasant,uninterrupted meal.2.I have to take up a part-time job because my family is rich enough.wenot考点九考点九 逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注 动词形，名词数动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别 介词、短语要牢记介词、短语要牢记 A Limerick（五行打油诗）（五行打油诗）代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟 句子成分多分析句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注1.1.通读全文，把握大意通
21、读全文，把握大意2.2.细读全文，仔细斟酌细读全文，仔细斟酌3.3.再读全文再读全文,复核审查复核审查确定时态，改明显错误确定时态，改明显错误逐逐句句研读，对照考点，研读，对照考点，排除法排除法三种题型是否齐，题三种题型是否齐，题量分布是否符合命题量分布是否符合命题规律规律Note:Step 4 The method of correcting 方法点拨方法点拨 Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back gar
22、den.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same p
23、lace year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Step 5 Test小测小测2014年全国新课标卷年全国新课标卷 Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden.Since thenfor all
24、 these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.agoofyearshaveaeverywheretasty还要注意形和还要注意形和副副介词介词短语要牢记短语要牢记名词数名词数动词形动词形冠词冠词连词常光顾连词常光顾还要注意形和还要注意形和副副还要注意还要注意形形和副和副There are so much that w
25、e often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!many或或 yetwonderful冠词冠词连词连词常光顾常光顾还要注意还要注意形形和副和副代词代词格，细领悟格，细领悟 1.名词名词(爱考爱考数数与与格格，也
26、要分清，也要分清可不可可不可)2.冠词冠词(少少用、用、误误用、用、多多用用)3.代词代词(人称人称代词、代词、物主物主代词、代词、反身反身代词、代词、不定不定代词代词)4.动词动词(谓语谓语动词：时态、语态、主谓一致及虚拟语气动词：时态、语态、主谓一致及虚拟语气等；等；非谓语非谓语动词动词:-ing;-ed;to do)5.形容词和副词形容词和副词(修饰名词，作宾补及连系动词后用修饰名词，作宾补及连系动词后用形形容词容词；修饰动词，形容词，副词及整个句子用；修饰动词，形容词，副词及整个句子用副词副词；注；注意意比较级比较级和和最高级最高级的使用。的使用。)6.介词（多半考介词（多半考搭配搭配
27、，多、漏、误用想周到），多、漏、误用想周到）7.连词（连词（逻辑逻辑错误、错误、搭配搭配错误）错误）8.从句（从句（句法句法涉及到涉及到一致一致，从句从句多考多考引导词引导词）9.逻辑（句子之间逻辑关系的逻辑（句子之间逻辑关系的矛盾矛盾，代词代词在人称上的不在人称上的不一致等）一致等）The important points for tests考点考点Step 6 Look-back回顾回顾Dont forget your homework:Dont forget your homework:1.Review what we have 1.Review what we have learned today.learned today.2.Finish exercises on P82-83 2.Finish exercises on P82-83 in your coaching books(in your coaching books(金版金版学案学案).).
