1、英语短文写作句子改错练习1指代方面1）Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the students have to bear. 2）People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.改为:People have b
2、een fighting against the influence of TV commercials, which often proves useless.3) Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly,provides us with a vivid, colorful world.2修饰方面1）To keep the air
3、clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.改为:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases, to the countryside.2）Without television, people cant get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.改为:Witho
4、ut television, people cant immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.3）At the age of six, my father began to teach me English.改为:When I was six, my father began to teach me English.4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly
5、improve改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved living standard. 5) To improve ones writing skill, regular practice is essential. 改为:To improve ones writing skill, we need regular practice. 3平行方面1）While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic
6、 can be increased.改为:While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can be increased.2）The price of milk isn t higher than grain.改为:The price of milk isn t higher than that of grain.3）The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and human beings.改为:The ener
7、gy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, to the world, and to human beings.4）But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever it arises.改为:But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and that a wise man will nev
8、er lose it whenever it arises.5）Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.改为:Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and of the length of it.6）Making cities greener has a lot of advanta
9、ges, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our cities beautiful.改为:Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its beautification of our cities4. 语法方面1）Narrow str
10、eets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents.2）A great change has been taken place since then.改为:A great change has taken place then.3）But it may occur some new problems.改为:But some new problems may occur.4）Opportunities are only belonged t
11、o those who work hard.改为:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.5）Green trees can protect our air from polluting.改为:Green trees can protect our air from being polluted.6）Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.改为:Compared with other countries, Chin
12、a pays little attention to the energy problem.5. 搭配方面1）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.改为：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.2）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.改为:In the past the price
13、 of milk was so high that most families could not afford it.3）We should study/learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.改为:We should get as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.4）The opportunity to be promoted in a joint
14、 venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English.改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be less if one cannot speak English.6. 赘言问题1）In my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.改为:In my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.2）People tr
15、y to find a solution to solve the problem.改为:People try to find a solution to the problem.3) Many visitors who visit our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street. 改为:Many visitors of our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street. 4) The reason why people
16、choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution or noise there.改为:The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution or noise there.5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.7. 汉化问题1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of
17、 the reasons is that Shanghai has over ten million people.改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai.2）My level of English has thus been improved.改为:My English has thus been improved.3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are beco
18、ming more and more.改为:Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.4)With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.改为:With the development of cities, there is less and less green land.5) Smoking will do harm to our body.改为:Smoking will do harm to heath. 6) We should put out hearts into the study.改为:We should pay attention to the study
