1、必修二 Unit 5 Music(5)高一年级 英语Lesson 5 Write a speechReading for WritingAt this class,you will be able toLearning objectives1.obtain and sort out the changes and feelings of Sarah from her speech;2.identify the rhetorical devices and the outline presented in Sarahs speech;3.create a speech about how mus
2、ic can change a persons life.What do you find about Sarah in the picture?Where?What?How?Look and ThinkSarah WilliamsLook and ThinkShe may be in hospital;listening to music;optimistic and;Read and ThinkRead the speech and answer the questions.(P56 Ex.1)1.What was Sarahs problem?3.What is her advice t
3、o others?2.How did music help her during her difficult time?Read and ThinkRead the speech and answer the questions.(P56 Ex.1)1.What was Sarahs problem?Sarah had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.Read and ThinkRead the speech and answer the questions.(P56 Ex.1)2.How did music help her dur
4、ing her difficult time?It made her feel much better because it is the“medicine of the mind”.Read and ThinkRead the speech and answer the questions.(P56 Ex.1)3.What is her advice to others?Her advice to others is to use music to help when you have problems.Read the article again and answer the questi
5、on.Read and Think What are the characteristics of the language that the author uses to introduce her story and her feelings?Read and Think Good morning!My name is Sarah Williams.Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.(Paragraph 1)Read and T
6、hink Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?Two years ago,I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.My body ached all the time,and thus I thought I didnt have much longer to live.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.(Paragr
7、aph 2)Read and ThinkThen one day,I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment.The doctor wanted me to relax.So he had me listen to some music,and one of the songs was“Happy”.The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time.John A.Logan said,“Music is
8、 the medicine of the mind.”And its true.Music helped me recover.(Paragraph 2)Read and Think Music gave me happiness.When I listened to music,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through thos
9、e hard times.Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(Paragraph 3)Read and Think Of course,I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did.At the same time,we all go t
10、hrough various periods when we feel sad or alone.During those times,music can help you in the same way that it helped me.I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.(Paragraph 4)Thank you!(Paragraph 5)Think and ShareWhat are the characteristics of the langu
11、age that the author uses to introduce her story and her feelings?Straightforward Easy to understand Rhetorical devices used修辞手法 设问 Rhetorical question 引用 Quote 明喻 Simile 暗喻 Metaphor 重复 Repetition 拟人 PersonificationThink and ShareWhat rhetorical devices does the author use?A rhetorical question is a
12、question that isnt meant to elicit an answer,but is asked to make a point.For example,“How could I be so stupid?”Study the Language FeaturesWhat is“rhetorical question”?To quote is to repeat a short passage,word,phrase,or sentence that came from somewhere or someone else.Quotes can be used to descri
13、be or to add more examples.Sometimes a quote can even motivate people.For example,“as Longfellow says,Music is the universal language of mankind.”Study the Language FeaturesWhat is“quote”?A simile compares two things by using words such as“like”or“as”.For example,“John is as cunning as a fox.”狡猾的Stu
14、dy the Language FeaturesWhat is“simile”?A metaphor compares two things that are unrelated,but which are similar in some way.For example,“That businessman is a real fox.”What is“metaphor”?Study the Language FeaturesRepetition is the use of the same word or phrase in a poem,speech,etc.It can be used f
15、or different purposes,such as to heighten tension or to give emphasis.One example of this can be seen in Julius Caesars famous saying“I came,I saw,I conquered.”Study the Language FeaturesWhat is“repetition”?Personification is when a thing,idea,or animal is given human attributes.For example,“The sky
16、 weeps.”属性What is“personification”?Study the Language Featuresmetaphorquoterhetorical questionpersonificationrepetitionsimileAMatch the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language Featuresrhetorical questionA Have you ever faced a time when thin
17、gs looked dark and you had no hope at all?Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language FeaturesmetaphorEIt was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettere
18、d sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language FeaturesquoteBJohn A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language FeaturespersonificationFIt became my best friend.It spoke words of
19、 encouragement to the deepest part of my being.Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language FeaturesrepetitionCMusic gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
20、Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Language FeaturessimileDWhen I listen to music,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.(P56 Ex.2.1)Study the Langua
21、ge FeaturesWhat expressions does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel?Underline the phrases in the speech.Study the Language Features So he had me listen to some music,and one of the songs was“Happy”.The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all
22、the time.John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”And its true.Music helped me recover.(Paragraph 2)What expressions does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel?Underline the phrases in the speech.Study the Language FeaturesMusic gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and
23、brought me relief.Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(Paragraph 3)What expressions does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel?Underline the phrases in the speech.Study the Langu
24、age Features When I listened to,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.Music gave music me strength and brought me relief.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(Paragraph 3)What expressi
25、ons does Sarah use to talk about how music can make us feel?Underline the phrases in the speech.Study the Language Features vivid beautiful expressiveThink and ShareWhy does the author use these rhetorical devices?Use what you have learnt to write a speech about how music can change a persons life.(
26、P57 Ex.3)Think and WriteThink of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.(P57 Ex.3.1)Ways people experience musicHow music can help peopleThink and WriteThink of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.(P57 Ex.3.1)Ways people experience music singing(i
27、n a choir)How music can help people give encouragement provide joy express emotions Think and WriteThink of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.(P57 Ex.3.1)Ways people experience music listening to a piece of music or a songHow music can help people share similar feelings
28、 bring about happiness make listeners strong in mind Think and WriteThink of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.(P57 Ex.3.1)Ways people experience music playing the piano/guitar/guqin How music can help people express feelings from heart imagine a dream world have fun Th
29、ink and WriteNow think about your experience with music and how it has changed your life,or think about how the life of someone you know has been changed by his/her experience with music.(P57 Ex.3.2)Think and WriteSingingunderstandingoptimistichopefulindependentstrong in mindThink and WriteFill in t
30、he blanks below with some of the rhetorical devices you hope to use in your speech.(P57 Ex.3.3)Think and WriteFill in the blanks below with some of the rhetorical devices you hope to use in your speech.(P57 Ex.3.3)Metaphor:Music is my guide.Personification:Music is like an old friend comforting me a
31、 lot.“Where words fail,music speaks.”Hans Christian Anderson Quote:said,Think and WriteFill in the blanks below with some of the rhetorical devices you hope to use in your speech.(P57 Ex.3.3)Music helps me remember how much I miss my grandmother.Repetition:Music makes/gives/helps me/him/her It helps
32、 me remember all the great times we had.123It helps me be grateful for that time together.Think and WriteFill in the blanks below with some of the rhetorical devices you hope to use in your speech.(P57 Ex.3.3)Simile(verb+like):Music is like a special language.heard a piece of music and remembered an
33、 important Rhetorical question:time in your life?Have you ever Think and WriteWhat is the structure of a speech?What does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study The first paragraph:Welcome the audience:GreetingsSpeakers nameSarah WilliamsSarahs topicIntroduce yourself:Propose the topic:Wha
34、t does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study The second paragraph:Personal anecdote:Sarahs story or experiences轶事What does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study The third paragraph:Personal feeling:Sarahs feelingsWhat does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study The fo
35、urth paragraph:Close the speech:Sarahs adviceWhat does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study The fifth paragraph:Thank the audience at the end:Sarahs thanksWhat does each paragraph mainly talk about?Think and Study1.Welcome the audience2.Introduce yourself3.Propose the topic4.Personal ane
36、cdote5.Personal feeling6.Close the speech7.Thank the audience at the endWhat is the structure of a speech?Think and Study Welcome the audience:Hello!Introduce yourself:Your name Propose the topic:How can music change a persons life?The first paragraph:What is the structure of your speech?Think and W
37、rite Personal anecdote:Write about your experience with music or the experience of someone you know.The second paragraph:What is the structure of your speech?Think and Write Personal feeling:Write about how music made you/him/her feel.The third paragraph:What is the structure of your speech?Think an
38、d Write Close the speech:Relate your/his/her experience to the audience and give your advice.The fourth paragraph:What is the structure of your speech?Think and Write Thank the audience at the end:Thank you!The fifth paragraph:What is the structure of your speech?Think and Write Do you explain how m
39、usic has changed your/someone elses life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly?Do you talk about how music makes you/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentence capitalized?Do you use correct punctuation?Use this checklist to help you revise the draft.Check and ReviseRead
40、 the sample speech and check if it meets the structure you have just learned.Read and CheckHello,my name is John,and Im here to talk about the power of music over words.Two years ago,my grandmother passed away and music has helped me cope since then.Read and CheckSometimes words cannot describe what
41、 were feeling,but music can.As Hans Christian Anderson once said,“Where words fail,music speaks.”Music is like a special language that everyone can understand.Read and CheckHave you ever heard a piece of music and remembered an important time in your life?Perhaps when something important happened,or
42、 when you felt really happy or sad.I feel this way about a piece of classical music by Eric Satie called“Gymnopdie No.1”.It reminds me of my grandmother.It is like an old friend comforting me when I hear it.Read and CheckThis music helps me remember how much I miss her.It helps me remember all the g
43、reat times we had.And music helps me be grateful for that time together.If you struggle to find the words to help you,music can be your guide.Thank you!Read and CheckListen to the recording again and pay attention to the speakers mood,intonation and pace.Listen againTips for delivering better speech
44、es.Dont rush.Pause between sentences and after important points(or jokes)!Speak with enthusiasm and energy,using your hand or other gestures if appropriate.Smile,when appropriate!Study the TipsTips for delivering better speeches.Make sure the speech is easy to read and highlight important words and
45、points.Stand straight and look up at the audience often.When practicing,think about tone and rhythm.Practice aloud with a friend or record yourself.Study the TipsWhat rhetorical devices have you learned?Rhetorical devicesSummaryWhat is the structure of a speech?Structure of a speechSummaryWhat tips have you learned?Tips for delivering better speechesSummary1.Revise your speech.2.Deliver your speech and make a recording.Homework
