1、概要写作的评分标准之一是“上下文的连贯性”,要求你有效地运用一定的衔接手段,使所写的句子连贯、流畅。在概要写作时,我们可以借用三种衔接手段使上下文连贯,即词汇衔接、逻辑衔接和语法衔接。微技能六运用衔接手段微技能六运用衔接手段词汇衔接指运用原词、近义词或反义词、上下义词等的复现和同一语义场词汇的共现等方法。如:job和doctor,teacher,translator为上义词与下义词的关系;learn,education和knowledge等为同一语义场词汇。逻辑衔接 指利用表逻辑关系的过渡词来衔接上下句的方法,如besides,however等。语法衔接常见的有替代和省略。替代是指用代词替代前
2、面相应的名词或名词性短语和句子,用助动词替代前面的动词和动词短语。省略是指为了表达简洁,在语境清楚的条件下,省去某个词句。常见的省略有蒙上省略,即省去上文已提到的词句;探下省略,即省去下文将提到的词句。1因果关系(1)显性因:because,becauseof,for,as,since,inthat,onaccountof,nowthat显性果:so,sothat,therefore,asaresult,thus,consequently,accordingly(2)隐性因果:导致(因果):cause,reason,leadto,giveriseto,resultin,stimulate,fu
3、el,produce由而来(果因):resultfrom,derivefrom,originatefrom反映,体现(果因):reflect,present,demonstrate,suggest,imply2转折关系but,however,yet,although,though,eventhough,evenif,even,nevertheless,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof,anyway,anyhow,unfortunately,surprisingly3举例关系forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,namely,asyouk
4、now,like,suchas,acaseinpointis.,inparticular,including.,take.asanexample,asfor4条件关系if,onlyif,ifonly,unless,lest,otherwise,assoonas,aslongas,incase,supposethat,supposingthat,providedthat,providingthat5比较关系(1)相同点:similarly,inlikemanner,incomparisonwith,like.,likewise,similarlyimportant,inthesameway(2)
5、不同点:yet,still,rather,neither.nor,unlike,asopposedto,incontrast,onthecontrary,differentfromthis,nevertheless,contraryto6否定关系(1)显性否定:no,not,never,nor,none,neither(2)隐形否定:failto,refuse,remove,reject,lackof(3)否定前缀:a-,ab-,dis-,il-,im-,in-,non-,un-(4)双重否定:notfailto,notillegal,notuncommon,notunavailable7并列
6、关系and,also,or,neither.nor,either.or,notonly.butalso,aswellas,thesame.as,then,besides,additionally,inaddition,furthermore,whatismore,ononehand.ontheotherhand,foronething.foranother,one.another,some.others.stillothers8先后关系first,second,atlast,next,previously,eventually,lastbutnotleast,tobeginwith,tosta
7、rtwith,toendwith,finally,sincethen,firstofall,afterwards,followingthis9强调关系infact,especially,particularly,moreover,naturally,nottomention.,believeitornot,itiscertain/surethat.,definitely,undoubtedly,intruth,obviously10时间关系atonce,immediately,inthemeantime,meanwhile,atthesametime,intheend,then,soon,la
8、ter,atonce,atlast,finally,sometimeago,atpresent,allofasudden,fromnowon,fromtimetotime,sincethen,when,whenever,afewminuteslater,as,once,since,inamoment,shortly,previously【典例示范】Thesechangesonlybecamepossibleasmymemoryimproved.Firstitwasstoredintubes,thenontransistorsandlateronverysmallchips.AsaresultI
9、totallychangedmyshape.AsIhavegrownolderIhavealsogrownsmaller.Overtimemymemoryhasdevelopedsomuchthat,likeanelephant,IneverforgetanythingIhavebeentold!AndmymemorybecamesolargethatevenIcouldntbelieveit!作者运用了以下使上下文连贯的衔接词:词汇衔接词:memory,forget,changed,grown,developed逻辑衔接词:first,then,andlater,asaresult,as,a
10、nd,so.that.语法衔接词:these,it,I,my【即时演练】阅读下面短文,选用适当的衔接词完成概要写作。Theproductionofcoffeebeansishuge,profitablebusiness,but,unfortunately,full-sunproductionistakingovertheindustryandbringingaboutalotofdamage.Thechangeinhowcoffeeisgrownfromshade-grownproductiontofull-sunproductionendangerstheveryexistenceofcer
11、tainanimals,andevendisturbstheworldsecologicalbalance.Onalocallevel,thedamagetotheforestsrequiredbyfull-sunfieldsaffectstheareasanimals.Theshadeoftheforesttreesprovidesahomeforbirdsandotherspecies(物种)thatdependonthetreesflowersandfruits.Full-suncoffeegrowersdestroythisforesthome.Asaresult,manyspecie
12、sarequicklydyingout.Onamoregloballevel,thedestructionoftherainforestforfull-suncoffeefieldsalsothreatens(威胁)humanlife.Medicalresearchoftenmakesuseoftheforestsplantandanimallife,andthedestructionofsuchspeciescouldpreventresearchersfromfindingcuresforcertaindiseases.Inaddition,newcoffee-growingtechniq
13、uesarepoisoningthewaterlocally,andeventuallytheworldsgroundwater.Bothlocallyandglobally,thecontinuedspreadoffull-suncoffeeplantations(种植园)couldmeanthedestructionoftherainforestecology.Thelossofshadetreesisalreadycausingaslightchangeintheworldsclimate,andstudiesshowthatthelossofoxygen-givingtreesalso
14、leadstoairpollutionandglobalwarming.Moreover,thenewgrowingtechniquesarecontributingtoacidicsoilconditions.Itisobviousthatthewaymuchcoffeeisgrownaffectsmanyaspectsoflife,fromthelocalenvironmenttotheglobalecology.Butconsumersdohaveachoice.Theycanpurchaseshade-growncoffeewheneverpossible,althoughatahig
15、hercost.【选词填空】therefore/second/first/moreoverFull-sunproductionofcoffeebeanshascauseddamagetosomespecies,eventheecology.(要点1)_,itdestroysthehabitatsoflocalspecies,andevencausestheirextinction.(要点2)_,withwaterpoisonedandfewerspeciesformedicalresearch,peopleslifeisseverelyaffected.(要点3)_,Thedestructionoftherainforestecologyseemsinevitable,accompaniedbyairpollutionandglobalwarmingandsoon.(要点4)_,consumersareadvisedtobuyshade-growncoffeethoughitsmoreexpensive.(要点5)FirstSecondMoreoverTherefore