1、高考英语读后续写素材积累一、动作描写1.精选动词，精准描述跑rush冲Hearing the noise from the dog, the babysitter rushed out of /rush into the room.看stare at注视 glare at 怒视 glance at 扫一眼说shout大喊 whisper小声说 state陈述 he simply stated，哭weep哭泣（wept，wept） His head dropped and tears fell into his lap. “Nothing, actually I was just touched
2、 by your kindness! ”said Jenny as she wiped her tears.“没什么，其实我只是被你的善良感动了!”珍妮边擦眼泪边说。笑her face brightened when I gave her the present.站rise to ones feet（站起身）/struggle to ones feet（挣扎着站起身）（rise-rose-risen） She jumped to her feet cheerfully when she heard the news.当她听到这个消息时，她高兴地跳了起来。埋头He buried his head
3、 in the arms at a loss for words. raise ones head 抬起头轻拍肩膀（男生）The teacher patted his shoulder lightly,saying that.轻抚头发（女生）The teacher touched her hair gently,saying that.紧张 My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.走 He turned and headed for the door.拥抱 Feeling excited and grateful for t
4、he kids help, he burst into tears and hugged them tightly.对孩子们的帮助感到兴奋和感激，他哭了起来，紧紧地拥抱着他们。起床I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast.2.添加副词和介词短语来修饰动词adverbs:tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight) violently/swiftlyin+n:in excitement/shock/so
5、rrow/in a low(weak/sweet) voicewith+情感名词：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fearwith+身体部位：with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/her pale lips动作描写线3.构造动作链：并列谓语动词A and B或者A，B and C。（1）上车=拦车+上车+告诉目的地He stopped the taxi, jumped into it and told the driver,simply stating:“Go to the police s
6、tation, please.”（2）跳入湖里=冲向湖边+脱掉衣服+跳入水中The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.（3）抱住儿子=冲向前+蹲下+一把抱住She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.4.构造动作面：把动作和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。（1）Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frighten
7、ing eyes, yelling,“Youre such an idiot.”(burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。）（2）At the sight of the sudden appearance of the singer, these audience were so cheerful that they shouted aloud with joy.5.读后续写常用句型(1) doing，谓语动词或谓语动词，doingLooking up at the farmer, the
8、 boy said,“Thank you.”She stood there trembling（颤抖） with cold.(2)A and B，C-ing或A，B-ing and C-ing或A-ing，B，C-ingThe students came in, talking and laughing. Looking straight into my eyes, Mike touched my hair, whispering,“You are the most beautiful /brave/considerate（体贴的） girl Ive ever seen.”(3)Having
9、done.，主句Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.=After he had queued for for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.(4)done，谓语动词Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.(5)done，谓语动词，doingEncouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whi
10、spering,“I want to have a try.”(6)形容词作状语The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.They sat on the beach, enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.(7)定语从句The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made him cry.(8)状语从句The moment（一.就） she saw his
11、husband, Jane rushed to him and hugged him tightly.When the students heard that they got the first prize in the gymnastics competition, they cheered and jumped with joy.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.(9)with复合结构Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembl
12、ing and her heart beating fast.He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks.二、情绪描写（一）表达快乐直接描写：1.Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy.(听到这句话，每个人都欣喜若狂)2.To his joy, his son won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.（二）表达快乐间接描写1.Laughter lingered around the room.(笑声在房间里萦绕
13、)2.She laughed, with her eyes shining with excitement.（她笑了，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。）3.Her face brightened with pleasure when I gave her the present.（我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。）（三）表达悲伤的描写1.At the sight of the familiar handwriting, he stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.2.I tried to hold back tears.(我强忍住泪水)（四）表
14、达生气1.She folded her arms and stared at him.2.His voice trembled with anger.(他气得声音发抖)（五）表达惊讶1.Much/Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.2.Everyone looked at her in astonishment.（六）表达恐惧、绝望1.Seeing what had happened, fear flooded over him.(恐惧淹没了他)2.At the sight
15、of the wolf，I froze with fear，too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了不敢动弹）（七）表达感动1.A warm current（暖流） welled up in his heart the moment he realized how much love his father had devoted to him.2.Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude./ words failed her.3.With tears rolling down her face,
16、 she held her son tightly into her arms.（八）表达害怕1.Her heart beat so violently, with his hands trembling.2.I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软）3.At the sight of the wolf,I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.（吓呆了，不敢动弹）（九）表达羞愧1.Hearing this, he hung/dro
17、pped his head in shame.2.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.（十）表达疲惫1.He was physically and mentally exhausted.（十一）表达如释重负Seeing what was happening, they sighed in relief.（十二）表达孤单The loneliness and fear comes in waves.三、环境描写1.The sky was blue and the sun was shining.天空蔚蓝，阳光明媚。2.T
18、he hills were bathed in the sunshine.山丘沐浴在阳光下。3.darkness fell夜幕降临4.The day was freezing，with the snow/rain pouring really hard天气寒冷大雪/雨倾盆而下5.It was pouring really hard6.The moon was shining brightly in the sky皓月当空7.The sky was dotted with stars天空繁星密布8.The clouds parted and the sun shone云散开了，太阳出来了。9.T
19、he wind was getting up and it was becoming cloudy风越来越大，天空开始乌云密布。10.Blue sky stood tall and far, and the sun was burning my back晴空万里，火热的太阳晒得我后背发烫四、主旨类句子1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 2.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can c
20、onquer whatever difficulty came in the way.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。3.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustnt give up our hope. “正是这种独特的经
21、历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。” 4.综合型 (万能公式句)即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结果+难忘的经历+感悟 Finally, we did sth.What an unforgettable experience! Only then did I realize that whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustnt give up our hope.例句： Finally, we did sth.What an unforgettable experience! Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！4
