1、成长感悟类成长感悟类Tom was shocked when he saw his parents appear at the ceremony hall.Hesitating for a moment,Toms father told him everything that happened many years ago.Tom started to dislike his mom more.He always felt unpleasant to see his moms face.But what he did not know was that his mom scratched he
2、r beauty to save him from a fire when he was one year old.Not wanting to burden him with it,Toms parents kept it a secret.He felt awkward to see his mom with that scarred face standing in front of the school gate.Story MountainThree years later,then came Toms graduation ceremony.His parents didnt wa
3、nt to be absent from such an important occasion,so they managed to be there without informing Tom.angryexplainregretchange情感线Theme:love续写情节构想(inference)Q1:How did Tom feel?Q2:What would Tom do?Q3:What did the father and mother do?Para 1：Tom was shocked when he saw his parents appear at the ceremony
4、hall.Para 2:Hesitating for a moment,Toms father told him everything that happened many years ago.Q1:What did the father tell him?Q2:What was Toms feeling?Q3:How did Tom react?Tom was shocked when he saw his parents appear at the ceremony hall.He stood rooted to the floor for a moment,not knowing wha
5、t to do.Seconds later,he tried to contain himself and awkwardly walked up to greet his father,ignoring his mothers existence.But when he heard others whispering about his mums ugly face embarrassment came over him.With anger written all on his face,he pushed his mum hard out of the hall.Seeing Toms
6、mum leave with deep sorrow.his father followed them out.Hesitating for a moment,Toms father told him everything that happened many years ago.His mum got burnt severely to save him in a terrible fire.Tears streamed down his face when he recollected how much he had hurt her all these years.how he had
7、ignored her and he realized the amount of pain and agony she had gone through.After the ceremony,he found his mum and embraced her,saying“Sorry“again and again.From then on he thought of his moms face even with scars as the moms beautiful face in the world and his mom as the most respected woman in
8、the world.20232023届新高考二轮复习届新高考二轮复习读后续写之成长感悟读后续写之成长感悟篇篇主题主题语境：人与自我（生活与学习语境：人与自我（生活与学习;做人与做事）做人与做事）个人成长是了解自我、完善自我、开发自我潜能的持续过程个人成长是了解自我、完善自我、开发自我潜能的持续过程。因此在读后续写中，个人的成长不仅涉及到知识层面上，更多因此在读后续写中，个人的成长不仅涉及到知识层面上，更多涉及到涉及到情感、态度和价值观情感、态度和价值观(含品德含品德)。语篇往往是学生比较熟。语篇往往是学生比较熟悉的场景悉的场景:学校生活、家庭生活及工作学校生活、家庭生活及工作(劳动劳动)场景。
9、最终的升华场景。最终的升华指向指向:健康的生活方式，积极的生活态度，完善的自我健康的生活方式，积极的生活态度，完善的自我,优秀的优秀的品行及更好的规划品行及更好的规划(学习学习,生活和职业生活和职业)。按照情节的发展，语篇。按照情节的发展，语篇分为三个阶段。分为三个阶段。Hector stood in the front of his fifth-grade classroom as one of the last two competitors in the Room Five Geography Bee.His opponent having missed the last questio
10、n,it was Hectors turn.If he answered his question corectly,he would be the Room Five champion.“Where did I put that second sheet of questions?”Mr.Adler whispered while searching through a thick pile of papers on his messy desk.Mr.Adler,though a great teacher,had a reputation of being disorganized wi
11、th a long history of misplacing things.“Oh well,I apologize for the delay.”said Mr.Adler after what seemed like a long time.“Hector,please tell us the capital city of Brazil.”Hearing the question,Hector smiled.Then,there was the answer.Later that day in the coutyard,many classmates congratulated Hec
12、tor.Wearing a proud smile,he greeted and thanked them all.Oh,the sweet taste of victory.原文分析原文分析HectorHector参加地理测试的分赛参加地理测试的分赛老师找不到比赛题老师找不到比赛题HectorHector赢得分赛赢得分赛 As it was getting late,the courtyard became deserted.But Hector still didnt want to leave.Then he saw Mr.Adler crossing the courty ard an
13、d holding a half-open bag full of papers.As he hurried past,an envelope dropped out but Mr.Adler was unaware,turned a corner and disappeared out of sight.Hector picked it up.On the envelope were the words“Fifth Crade Ceography Bee Questions and Answers”.Hector stared wide-eyed at the envelope.Before
14、 he even had time to reflect on the consequences,he opened it and read the questions.As soon as Hector had done it,he knew it was the wrong choice.Hed cheated and whatever he did now,he couldnt change the fact.“What if Mr.Adler thought I stole this mornings questions too?”Hector thought.“Hed take aw
15、ay my Room Five victory for sure.”Little did he know that one of the best days in his life would be turned into the worst so quickly.Torn by his conscience,Hector was totally at a loss what to do.原文分析原文分析HectorHector意外拾到老师的决赛意外拾到老师的决赛题题HectorHector不知该怎么办不知该怎么办成长前的困扰：情境描写+消极情绪的累积（高潮）Before he realize
16、d it,Hector found himself standing in Mr.Adlers room.The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.What would Hector do or say?Hectors inner activityHow would Mr.Adler react to his behavior?Would Hector be finally forgiven or punished?How did Hector feel and perform in t
17、he final competition?Did he win the competition at last?If not/so,how would he feel about it?成长中的蜕变：成长的动机+过程中变化的心情（resolution）成长后的升华：成长后的收获+积极情绪（ending）Before he realized it,Hector found himself standing in Mr.Adlers room.regret1.With the envelope in his hand,he felt extremely guilty.2.Desperate and
18、 helpless,Hector stood there with tears of regret in his eyes.3.Hector thought to himself,“If only he had not opened the envelope and read the questions.”Before he realized it,Hector found himself standing in Mr.Adlers room.1.His heart beat so violently that he felt like sitting on pins and needles.
19、他的心跳得如此剧烈，他感到如坐针毡。2.Thinking that Mr.Adler would be angry with him,he was too nervous to utter a word.3.At the thought of Mr.Adlers disappointment,his face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.Before he realized it,Hector found himself standing in Mr.Adlers room.成长中的蜕变：成长的动机+过程中变化的心情（resolution）r
20、egret/worryapologize to sb.bosom(倾诉，吐露心事)his regretsrelief1.As Hector told everything to Mr.Adler,the stone which had hung in his heart was eventually gone.2.Finally telling the truth was a great weight off my shoulders.3.It was a great relief to know that Mr.Adler wouldnt take away his Room Five vi
21、ctory.4.He was relieved to hear that The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.成长后的升华：成长后的收获+积极情绪（ending）1.Hector knew that it was Mr.Adlers trust and support that helped him pull through.2.Hector realized that honesty is the best policy and great efforts would event
22、ually pay off.3.Hed set out to learn everything about the world and ended up learning more about himself.Before he realized it,Hector found himself standing in Mr.Adlers room.“Hector!Come and help me look for.”“This?”Hector stopped Mr.Adler mid-sentence,holding out the open envelope.Mr.Adlers brows
23、were smoothed but then knitted again.Before he formed questions,Hector started unbosoming his regrets.If he had waited another moment,they would have torn him into pieces.“Can I still be in the Bee?”asked Hector timidly.“Absolutely,my honest boy,”Mr.Adler patted his shoulder.“I dont believe in punis
24、hing people for making the right decisions and correcting their mistakes.”Immense relief washed over Hector.续写赏析1Mr.Adler,though a great teacher,had a reputation of being disorganized with a long history of misplacing things.成长中的蜕变：成长的动机+过程中变化的心情（resolution）As soon as Hector had done it,he knew it w
25、as the wrong choice.Torn by his conscience,Hector“What if Mr.Adler thought I stole this mornings questions too?”Hector thought.“Hed take away my Room Five victory for sure.”续写赏析1成长后的升华：成长后的收获+积极情绪（ending）The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.Having been up late s
26、tudying,Hector looked exhausted but extremely excited.So did the other competitors.All the eyes fixed on the stage,Hector felt blood rushing onto his cheeks and his heart beating fast.Unfortunately,the questions Mr.Adler rewrote were so tough that he was knocked out in round three.But Hector realize
27、d to his surprise that he didnt feel bad about losing at all.Whether others knew he was smart was of no significance.Hed set out to learn everything about the world and ended up learning more about himself.Hector stared wide-eyed at the envelope.Before he even had time t o r e f l e c t o n t h e co
28、nsequences,he opened it and read the questions.续写赏析1成长后的升华：成长后的收获+积极情绪（ending）The next day the entire school came to watch the Fifth Grade Geography Bee.Having been up late studying,Hector looked exhausted but extremely excited.So did the other competitors.All the eyes fixed on the stage,Hector felt
29、 blood rushing onto his cheeks and his heart beating fast.Unfortunately,the questions Mr.Adler rewrote were so tough that he was knocked out in round three.But Hector realized to his surprise that he didnt feel bad about losing at all.Whether others knew he was smart was of no significance.Hed set o
30、ut to learn everything about the world and ended up learning more about himself.Hector stared wide-eyed at the envelope.Before he even had time t o r e f l e c t o n t h e consequences,he opened it and read the questions.With his newfound integrity and determination,Hector was able to answer the final question correctly.The entire school cheered and applauded as Hector accepted his victory.At that moment Hector realized that honesty is the best policy and great efforts would eventually pay off.
