1、Continuation WritingForeshadowing and EchoesTeaching objectivesAfter this class,we will be able to:1.understand what foreshadowing and echoes are;2.find the foreshadowing of each parapraph;3.find the most proper echoes;Continuation WritingReadingPlot LineEmotion LineForeshadowingWritingEchoesWhat ar
2、e the foreshadowing and echoes?based on the article A Mothers Day SurpriseWhenWhereWhoWhatmade _ to give mother a _.Mothers dayThe twins;Mother;FatherKitchenbreakfastsurpriseForeshadowing(伏笔）Para 1Para 2&3Para 4Para 5Foreshadowing are hints to the things happen in the future.A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE T
3、he twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing t
4、o it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs in
5、to a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna
6、threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff st
7、ayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.O
8、h dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Foreshadowing(伏笔）Para 1Para 2&3Para 4Para 5How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought h
9、er breakfast in bed.The stove was a mess;give a cry of painin disappointment;their father appearedbreakfast;woke their mother upSurpriseForeshadowing are hints to the things happen in the future.Foreshadowing(伏笔）what we know Echoes(呼应）what we want to knowThe stove was a mess;give a cry of painin dis
10、appointment Surprisetheir father appearedbreakfastwoke their mother upWould the surprise be a success?How to make it a successful surprise?What happend to the messy stove in the end?Did the cry wake someone up?What would drive their disappointment away?What would their father do?How did the chicken
11、porridge smell?What did the French toast look like?How would their mother feel and do when she see the breakfast?As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.plot linesee the messy stovehelp them make breakfastclean the kitchencome back to the bedroomemotion linedisappoint
12、edrelievedexcited/happy/satisfiedThe twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.plot linemom saw the breakfast(action/emotion)eat the breakfast and evaluateenvironmentemotion linesurprisedmovedhappy and proudAs the twins looked around them in disappointed,their father appeared.See
13、ing the messy stove and spoiled porridge,their father,awakened by Jeffs cry,frowned and froze with shock(a cry of pain).At the sight of it,Jenna explained what had happened in a low voice.Father was deeply touched by the twins and decided to help them out,a broad smile flashing across his face.Their
14、 frustration was swept away the moment father promised to help.(in disappointment)Under his careful guidance,it didnt take long before the twins made the breakfast and cleaned the kitchen.With everything settled,Father slipped back to the bedroom,promising to keep their secret(surprise).The twins ca
15、rried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Mother s eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast.The aroma of the chicken porridge permeated the whole bedroom and the brown French toast looked mouth-watering(breakfast).“Happy Mothers day,dear Mummy!”the twins voiced together.Cupping the twi
16、ns faces in her hands,Mother was wild with joy,her eyes full of pride and surprise(pleased and proud).She gave them a long,loving and tender hug before she bit into the toast and praised it was the best she had ever tasted.Father pretended to be surprised to see such delicious food,winking at Jenna
17、and Jeff(surprise).Laughter lingered in the whole room.Foreshadowing is a hint or clue that points to future event.Echoes are the reflection of foreshadowing in writing.Practice 1:(2016年10月浙江高考试题)One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the f
18、orest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she
19、had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept mo
20、ving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the bre
21、ak of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk a
22、long the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blo
23、use,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._ Paragraph 2：It was daybreak when Jane woke up._ 1.
24、She suddenly realized that she was lost.Emotion changesForeshadowing2.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom3.thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again4.no more helicopters,getting dark again.5.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Echoes(e
25、motion)frightenedregrethopeful desperate/sorrowraise hope againplot development Find the way out1.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.2.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came b
26、ack again.3.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.4.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.walk along the stream find an open areawait for the helicoptersfall asleepWake upfind the helicopterswave the yellow blouse,and yellbe rescued and reunitetell the loveSampleBut no more helicopt
27、ers came and it was getting dark again.There was nothing but silence.Jane was extremely frightened and missed her husband,Tom,a great deal.She couldnt help crying,clutching her hair.However,having a deep breath,Jane made her way bravely,concentrating all efforts on walking down along the stream.To h
28、er great joy,she eventually reached an open area.Feeling exhausted,she fell asleep.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.The sun shone lightly,bringing warmth and hope to the world.Jane stayed at the open area patiently to wait for others help.Two hours later,the helicopter which she had seen yesterday
29、caught her eyes.Jane took off her yellow blouse to flag them and yelled out to make the helicopter notice her.Fortunately,the helicopter noticed her and came closer,finally landing at the open area.Her husband,Tom,got out of the helicopter.Surprised and overjoyed a great deal.Jane held him tightly a
30、nd told him how much she loved him.At the moment,the mountain was filled with love.Practice 2:2020年新高考山东卷读后续写The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were t
31、rying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children a
32、bout a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.Background “I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and
33、Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money.”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry.“We really s
34、hould do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell yo
35、u what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”When Mrs.Meredith heard of the idea,she thought it was a good one,too.With everything ready,Bernard started
36、 out on his new business.Made the popcorn and told Bernard this good idea.Bernard sold the popcorn.WhyWith Berbnards father in bed,his mother was to go out to work.Bernard wanted to do something to his family.WhereWhoWhatMrs.Merediths children want to the boy Bernard in need.a small communityMrs.Mer
37、edith,Bernard,Bernards parents,Clara,Harry,JohnsickunablesupportassistWhen Mrs.Meredith heard of the idea,she thought it was a good one,too.1.You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?2.We can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell i
38、t.ForeshadowingEchoesTake out that box of cornBuy or borrow the popcorn machineMake popcornPut it into paper bagsTell Bernard this good news and give him a surpriseKnowing what they did,Bernard felt moved and excited.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.We can make popcorn(爆
39、米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.ForeshadowingEchoesSell the popcorn from door to doorPopcorn sell outGo home with happinessInspirationplotemotionShy/nervousconfidentHappy/rapturousSampleWhen Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea，she thought it was a
40、 good one,too.So Mrs.Meredith took out that big box of corn.At the sight of it,the children jumped up and down with joy.Then,they paid a visit to Uncle John,borrowed the popcorn machine and learned how to make the most delicious popcorn.Very soon,they were busying popping the corn,while Mrs.Meredith
41、 went out to buy the paper bags.She came back,followed by Bernard.They shared the idea with him.His eyes shone with excitement.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.At first,Bernard was too shy.But John,a smart and lovely boy,helped him to sell their popcorn from door to door
42、.It was its sweet smell that made it popular.In the evening,their popcorn was sold out.Stars appeared in the sky,twinkling their eyes at them in happiness.Holding money,so moved was Bernard that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for him.Bernard hugged John tightly.Sometimes our
43、 small action can make a great difference to others.Homework1.Sort out the content of the The Hidden Treasure.2.Find the foreshadowing of each paragraph3.Write down your echoes of each foreshadowing.Find the rulesRead these foreshadowing sentences and find their common points.1.How pleased and proud
44、 mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.2.As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.3.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.4.Soon,he was one of our favorite people to talk to.EmotionFind the rulesRead these foreshadowing sentenc
45、es and find their common points.breakfasthelicopteryellow blousebox of cornpopcorn paper bagsfriut treeslow,gruff voice.Properties Find the rulesRead these foreshadowing sentences and find their common points.2.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.3.It was daybreak when Jane wo
46、ke up.1.The stove was a mess.(kitchen)4.Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.5.One day,we stopped by to see him when he was on his front porch(门廊)We talked to him for hours.Surroundings 1.as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.Find the rulesRead these fore
47、shadowing sentences and find their common points.2.I didnt dare to take his fruit because of the horrible rumors we had heard about Old Man Donovan3.we realized that we had found the other hidden treasure:the sweet,kind heart hidden behind his gruff voice.ThemeSummary1.helicopters,yellow blouse2.I d
48、idnt dare to take his fruit because of the horrible rumors we had heard about Old Man Donovan.4.getting dark,daybreak5.How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.propertiesThemesurroundingsemotion All in all,foreshadowing sentences can be the properties,theme relate
49、d s e n t e n c e s,e x p r e s s i o n s o f surroundings and emotional expressions.Reclassify the foreshadowing of The Hidden Treasure based on the STEP rules.STEP At least thats what we had heard.I didnt dare to.horrible rumors we had heard.we realized.other hidden treasure:the sweet,kind heart h
50、idden.fruit treesapplesgruff,low voiceChoose the relevant echoes.Which echoes do you think are appropriate?A.Be kind to others.B.Seeing is believing.C.Share.D.Friendship.E.Dont judge a person by his appearance.F.A person would have such a big influence on me.How to use this property(friut trees and
