1、Developing ideas writing about a family memoryUnit 3 Family Unit 3 Family MattersMatters This is an old picture:What do you see in the picture?Can you guess why they look so happy?Read for the main ideasParagraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 3Paragraph 4BeginningBodyEndingParagraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 4R
2、ead for the structureParagraph 3a clear structureRead for the details in the beginningbeginning:tell us how the memory came into her mind.Describe the moment by using-ing formI was _ and _.When I _,the lovely memory of _.Write the beginning beginning:tell us how the memory came into your mind.Descri
3、be the moment by using-ing formTime:_ years ago;on my mothers _ I decided to _ my mother with _.I woke up early and _ to the kitchen.I had _ cooked before,so I tried to copy how she did it.But they end up _.I was about to _ everthing _ when my mother came in.Surprisingly,my mother _ them and said th
4、ey were _!We end up _ and ate them all.Read for the details in the body parttentenbirthdaybirthdaysurprisesurprisehome-made scrambled eggshome-made scrambled eggstip-toedtip-toedneverneverburntburntthrowthrowawayawaytastedtastednot badnot badlaughinglaughingRead for the details in the body partfacts
5、/eventsfacts/eventsfactsfacts+feelingsfeelingsopinionsopinionslogiclogic_ years ago,_Write the body partfacts/eventsfacts/eventslogiclogicLast sunmmer,.In 2015.Many years ago,.I was at.andor but sofactsfacts+feelingsfeelings/opinions/opinionsI was doing sth when.I was about to do sth when.To my surp
6、rise,!It made me feel so.I remember this because.I learnt that.Read for the details in the endingThe influence of the memory:what will you do because of this memory?Write the endingThe influence of the memory:what will you do because of this memeory?Checklist同伴互评自我评价Homework Try to polish your writing by using linking words to make your story logical and different ways to express your feelings.T h a n k s f o r l i s t e n i n g