1、读后续写练习写作讲义狗狗水中救人题目阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She was the prettiest puppy we had ever seen, and the whole family immediately fell in love with her. We named her Onyx because of her thick, shiny black coat. She spent her first vacation with us when she wa
2、s only ten weeks old and had her first bath and swim in the St. Lawrence River. We had no clue that this amazing little ball of fur would end up being our hero.As she grew older, Onyx became more and more involved in our family activities.On hot summer days, Onyx enjoyed floating on the river with u
3、s in her ownrubbertube(橡皮圈). Amazinglystandingon the top of the tube, she smiled while showing off her perfect balance. Resting her front legs and paws over the edge of the rubber tube, she kept her eyes shut as she floated until shed had enough of the warm sun on her black coat.Oneday, our eighteen
4、-year-old daughter, Margie, announced she was going to swim across the bay. No one in the family was free to goswimmingwith her. The unwritten rule, regardless of swimming ability, was to have a companion in the water with you, especially when swimming the width of the bay.I was not a good swimmer,s
5、o Isaidto Margie, “Take Onyx with you.” Having heard her name, Onyx woke up from a nap and was ready for action. Margie signed the dog to follow her. Onyx ran to the water next to her. They entered the freezing river together and swam side by side across the bay.I watched fromthebank as they reached
6、 the sandbar (沙洲) on the far shore. They rested a few minutes before diving intothewater forthereturn trip. I felt uneasy for some reason and continued to watch the pair swim side by side.优作中的好词好句提炼好词好句Para 11.Due tothe factthat I was not a good swimmer, I wascompletely at a losswhat to do, unable t
7、o conquer myinner anxiety.2. She wasinstantly still/motionlessin the water,with panic visible on her face.3.Frightened asshe was, she struggled to swim to the bank,but in vain, whichmade my heart sink.4.A wave of guilt seized me. How I wished I could swim!5.No soonerhad I screamed for helpthanour pu
8、ppy Onyx seemed to realize the awkward situation andswung into actionwithout a moment of hesitation.6.On spottingthe urgent situation, Onyxwent to great lengthsto swim towards Margieas fast as possible.7.Inch by inch, they swam towardswhereIwas waiting anxiously.8. Noticing aray/glimmer of hope, Mar
9、ie grabbed it tightly.9. At that very moment, Icaught sight ofMargie on the tube, with a gesturesignalingto me that she was fine.Para 2.10. After she landed safely, Margies fear and despairgave way toa sense of relief. Sheextended her heartfelt gratitude tothe furry ball for his timely help.11.Throu
10、gh the misty eyes, I captured the most touching moment.12. I rushed to embrace my daughter and Onyx,appreciatingthat both of them weresafe and sound,tears blurring my eyes.13. Shewinked atme and we exchanged knowing smile.13. I patted her on the head,conveying my gratefulness from the bottom of my h
11、eart.14.It dawned on me thatOnyx wasdefinitelyour hero, whose deed wouldbe engraved inmy mind/heart forever.15.Not onlywas Onyx our cute pet,butit wasalsoa family member we could rely on forever.16. Onyx alsonuzzled (用鼻子摩擦) our hands,showering (大量地给) us with thousands of kisses of show her close bon
12、d with us.Quiz: Put the following into English.1.由于我游泳游得不好，我完全不知所措，无法克服内心的焦虑。2.她立刻静止不动，脸上露出惊慌。3.尽管她很害怕，但她努力游到岸边，但徒劳无功，这让我的心沉了下去。4.一股愧疚感袭来。我多么希望自己能游泳啊！5.我刚尖叫救命，我们的小狗Onyx似乎就意识到了尴尬的处境，毫不犹豫地采取了行动。6.发现紧急情况后，Onyx竭尽全力，以最快的速度向Margie游去。7.它们一寸一寸地向我焦急等待的地方游来。8.Marie注意到了一线希望，她紧紧抓住它。9.就在那一刻，我在软管上看到了玛吉，她用一个手势向我示意
13、她很好。10.安全上岸后，玛吉不再恐惧和绝望，她感到很宽慰。她对狗狗的及时帮助表示衷心的感谢。11.透过朦胧的眼睛，我捕捉到了最动人的时刻。12.我冲过去拥抱我的女儿和Onyx，感激他们都安然无恙，泪水模糊了我的眼睛。13.她向我眨眼，我们会心一笑。13.我拍了拍她的头，表达了我发自内心的感激之情。14.我突然意识到，Onyx绝对是我们的英雄，他的事迹将永远刻在我的脑海/心中。15.Onyx不仅是我们可爱的宠物，也是我们可以永远依靠的家庭成员。16.玛瑙也用鼻子蹭我们的手，给我们用成千上万的吻来表示她与我们的亲密关系。参考答案读后续写One possible version：Suddenly
14、I heard Margie calling out, “I have a cramp(痉挛)in the leg!”Seized with panic, Margie rubbed her leg hard to relax the musclebut in vain. Seeingher struggling in the water, Onyx immediately swam to the side of Margie and then put her headbeneaththe girls right arm. I yelled for helpfor fear thatthey
15、might freeze in thechillyriver.But much to my joy,withMargie tightly grabbingOnyxs collar,our little furry friendbegan digging deep,slicingthrough the waterwith her pawsand swimming fast towards the bankwith every ounce of strength.Seeingthe pair approaching the riverbank, Ibreathed a sigh of relief
16、.When they finally got to the shore, Ireached out to help Margie, pulling her up onto the riverbank andwrappingher in a large towel.Exhausted but excited, Onyx eagerly ran to Margie and gentlylicked her faceto make sure she was Okay. Everyone in the family was grateful for their safe return and Onyx
17、 was given an extra treat later in the afternoon for her quick and brave reaction. She becameour herothat day and shenever ceasedto amaze us in the days that followed.突然，我听到玛吉喊道：“我的腿抽筋了！” 玛吉惊慌失措，使劲揉搓腿部以放松肌肉，但徒劳无用。看到玛吉在水中挣扎，奥尼克斯立刻游到玛吉身边，然后把头埋在玛吉的右臂下。我大声呼救，生怕它们在寒冷的河水中冻僵。但令我欣喜的是，玛吉紧紧抓住奥尼克斯的领，我们毛茸茸的小伙伴开
18、始深一脚浅一脚地用爪子划开水面，用尽全身力气快速游向河岸。眼看着它们俩快到河岸了，我松了一口气。当它们终于游到岸边时，我伸出手去帮助玛吉，把她拉上河岸，用一条大毛巾裹住她。奥尼克斯虽然精疲力竭，但还是很兴奋，它迫不及待地跑到玛吉身边，轻轻地舔了舔她的脸，确保她没事。家里的每个人都为他们的平安归来而感激不已，奥尼克斯也因为她快速而勇敢的反应而在下午得到了额外的奖励。那天，她成了我们的英雄，在接下来的日子里，她从未停止给我们带来惊喜。第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写二段，使之构成一篇完成的短文。Snowflake BentleyIn the days when Ve
19、rmont farmers worked the land and spent time with livestock, there lived a boy Willie Bentley who loved snow more than anything in the world. Vermont is no stranger to snow and Bentleys happiest days were snowstorm days. He watched snowflakes(雪花) on his glove, on the vast farm fields, and on the dar
20、k metal handle of the barn(谷仓) door. He said snow was the blessings of Nature. However, he could not share snowflakes because he could not save them.Later, when his mother gave him an old microscope, he mainly used it to look at snow. While kids of his neighbors chased hens and had snowball fights,
21、Willie was catching snowflakes. Day after stormy day he studied the icy crystals(冰晶).Their delicate patterns were even more beautiful than he had imagined. Willie decided he must find a way to save snowflakes so others could see their wonderful designs. For three winters he tried drawing snow crysta
22、ls. They always melted in the black tray(托盘) that he used to catch them before he could finish the drawings.When he was sixteen, Willie read of a camera with its own microscope. If I had that camera I could photograph snowflakes,” he told his mother. Willies mother knew that he would not be happy un
23、til he could share what he had seen.“Spending time on snow is just foolishness,” his mother said. Still, she loved his son. When Willie was seventeen his parents spent their savings and bought the camera.It cost as much as ten cows. Willie was sure it was the best of all cameras.Even so, his first p
24、ictures were failuresno better than shadows. Yet he would not quit. Mistake by mistake, snowflake by snowflake, Willie worked through every storm. Winter ended, the snow melted, and he had no good pictures. He waited for another season of snow. One day, in the second winter, he tried a new experimen
25、t. And it worked! Willie had figured out how to photograph snowflakes! Now everyone can see the great beauty in a tiny crystal, he said.Nevertheless, in those days no one cared.Despite the new-found fame, Snowflake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo.No two snowflakes are alik
26、e. But you might not know the man who discovered it. Actually, it can be traced back to Wilson Bentley, a farmer from Vermont,the USA, who in 1885 became the first person to successfully photograph an individual snow crystal the ice that makes up snowflakes.After years of trial and error, Bentley wa
27、s able to capture the intricate details of snow crystals by using a compound microscope attached to his bellows camera.He went on to photograph more than 5,000 of these ice flowers during his lifetime never finding any duplicates and the images still shine to this day.故事解读在那个人们只是农耕土种、饲养家畜的时代，美国佛蒙特州的
28、人们对自然现象的美丽和奥秘并不感兴趣，更不用说去欣赏那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，对于威利本特利来说，雪花的美丽和独特性却是无法抗拒的。他先是试图把雪花画下来，但每次都是雪花融化了，他还没画完。有一天，他与他母亲说，“如果我有那台相机，我就可以拍雪花了。”他母亲不理解地对他说：“把时间花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但尽管如此，威利的父母还是在孩子十七岁的那一年用可以买上十头奶牛的钱给他买了一架当时最好的相机（多米感言：父母对孩子的爱真是超级伟大！）。从此，威利痴迷于拍摄雪花，尽管周围的人都对他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他从未放弃过。他明白，自己的任务是将这些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美丽展现给世界。因此，他继续投
29、身于拍摄雪花的工作中，不断地尝试、改进、完善，终于有一天，他找到了拍摄的窍门。续写审题第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，没有人在乎。”我们的续写应该马上接着写威利自己的想法和反应是什么（自然，他会继续钻研技术，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花来了）。结合下一段的首句提示，在该段段末应该写他因为小有名气，从而得到了“雪花本特利”的美誉。第二段：提示句“尽管刚刚成名，雪花本特利还是下定决心要拍出一张完美的照片。”我们的续写应该马上接着写本特利因为执着追求完美主义，终于成为了众人关注的焦点，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了绝美的雪花。他的努力和细致让他捕捉到了那些令人叹为观止的细节。他成功了！故事告诉我
30、们：一个人不但要生活，还要会生活。只有你的全力付出才会发现生活中处处是美景，哪怕微不足道到一片雪花、一丝尘土，也可足以惊艳到你。爱美，就去发现美、探究美吧！支架句子1.He captured the perfect snowflake image, a masterpiece of clarity and beauty that would be remembered for generations.2.Through countless efforts, Bentleys perseverance began to pay off.3.Snowflake Bentleys contribut
31、ion lies not just in his photographs but in his unshakable dedication to perfectionism.4.He taught us that true success lies not in the success and status we receive, but in the achievement and satisfaction we gain from knowing that w have tried all out.范文1Nevertheless, in those days no one cared. H
32、owever hard Bentley worked on his photography, everyone still referred his work to a joke or a silly stuff. Though encountering failure after failure, Bentley never gave up. With each new snowfall, Willie would set out to capture the unique shapes and patterns of snowflakes. He spent hours huddling
33、over his microscope and camera, capturing the delicate beauty of each snowflake. As the years went by, his photos became more and more detailed and lifelike. People began to notice his work and understand him.Slowly,he got the nickname of Snowflake Bentley. (92 words)Despite the new-found fame, Snow
34、flake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo. In later years, he pushed the boundaries of his photography skills and eventually developed a special technique that allowed him to capture snowflakes in three dimensions, revealing their intricate and often surprising structures. His
35、 work is recognized as a pioneering contribution to the field of snowflake photography. Today, Snowflake Bentleys photos continue to inspire people around the world. His story reminds us that even the smallest and most overlooked objects in nature can hold immense beauty and wonder. Love it and just
36、 do it! (84 words)范文2Nevertheless, in those days no one cared. The outside world might have been indifferent to the beauty of snowflakes, but for Bentley, each one was a masterpiece of nature, unique and irreplaceable. He saw in them not merely the patterns and shapes but also the stories of their f
37、ormation, the secrets of the atmosphere they had traveled through. His passion for his craft was so intense that it excelled the indifference of the era, making him a pioneer in a field that was yet to be recognized. He soon got the title of Snowflake Bentley. (88 words)Despite the new-found fame, S
38、nowflake Bentley simply made up his mind to produce a perfect photo. As the days turned into weeks and the weeks into months, Bentleys perseverance began to pay off. His photographs, though initially dismissed, slowly began to gain recognition. People were amazed by the intricate details he had captured and the untold beauty he had gotten from the simplest natural forms. His photography became an inspiration to all who had been seeking to discover the essence of the natural world, reminding us that true beauty often lies in the most unexpected and overlooked places. (82 words)
