1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义第二节 (满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。This past summer, I joined my sisters family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, f
2、ishing and sand castle building on the beach. By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth.So, at dinner, I told Jannie we
3、 should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock-covered. Well. replied Jannie, Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so Im going to be pretty busy. When your mother and I used to come here wh
4、en we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains. Sounds more like punishment than a vacation. She shrugged her shoulders. Besides, I dont think I can walk that far.When I said it only took a half-hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled(嘟囔), Fine, Ill go. I knew
5、she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get.The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera. Jannie came shu
6、ffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot-like voice. Im ready to go hiking, Uncle David. Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away.As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded
7、 trail that led into the woods. I am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess.For the moment she was determined to start our journey. .A while later we did make it to the top. .审题指导：人物分析1. Jannie：一个十岁的小女孩，喜欢看电视和在礼品店浏览，不太热衷于户外活动。她表现出了一定的抵触情绪和消极态度，但也在叔叔的鼓励
8、和引导下逐渐展现出勇敢和坚持的一面。2. David（叔叔）：一个充满活力和热情的成年人，喜欢户外活动，希望侄女能够体验到自然之美。他对Jannie有耐心，通过鼓励和引导来激发她的勇气和兴趣。情节发展线David提出与Jannie一起徒步登山，但Jannie最初并不感兴趣。- David提到自己年轻时与母亲在这里游泳和徒步的经历，试图激发Jannie的兴趣，希望她能够喜欢户外活动。- Jannie最终同意去徒步，但表现得并不积极。- 第二天，他们一起出发徒步，途中Jannie有些消极，但最终还是坚持到了山顶。- 登上山岭后，被自然风光所吸引，情感由消极转为积极。如何升华在描述他们到达山顶的情景
9、时，可以强调自然之美和徒步带来的成就感。例如，可以描述山顶的风景如何令人心旷神怡，以及Jannie在看到美景时露出的惊喜和满足的表情。此外，还可以描写Jannie在徒步过程中逐渐克服困难、展现勇敢和坚持的过程，以及她在这个过程中学到的关于自我挑战和成长的教训。这些描写可以升华整个故事的主题，让读者更加深刻地理解到户外活动的意义和价值，以及勇敢面对挑战的重要性。范文：For the moment she was determined to start our journey. Fearing he would change her mind the next minute, I strode o
10、n the trail, asking her to follow me close. With the sounds of birds and insects filling the air, Jannie seemed to have entered the biggest biological garden. Suddenly, she broke the silence. Uncle David, why do you like hiking so much? I glanced at her and said , Wait and figure it out yourself.” S
11、urpisingly, she didnt get frustrated. Instead, she became more engaged and curious, asking questions about unknown plants and little animals from time to time.（89 words）A while later we did make it to the top. The view was breathtaking, with the sun shining down on the lake and the mountains in the
12、distance. Jannies face lit up as she looked around. “Wow, this is amazing!” she exclaimed, her eyes still fixed on the view. “This is definitely a better experience than just sitting around watching TV. Now I know what you love about hiking - the sense of accomplishment you get when you reach the to
13、p.” I smiled, “Exactly! Nature is a wonderland. I knew that our hike had been a success. Jannie had overcome her initial reluctance and experienced something new and exciting. (99 words)第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My daughter and I were fans of Mister Rogers Neighborhood, an educa
14、tional childrens television series that was created and hosted by Fred Rogers, more commonly known as Mister Rogers.Around my daughters second birthday, I had a Mister Rogers-inspired idea. Why not invite one key person in my daughters world to dinner each month? The local childrens librarian could
15、visit one evening, and perhaps the borough mayor(区长) could drop by a few weeks later.But I wanted to start at the top.“Lets invite Mister Rogers himself,” I said to my wife.“After all, he lives just a few neighborhoods away. I bet hed come.”She looked at me as if I wanted to invite the President. “Y
16、ou really think Mister Rogers would come to our house for dinner? Fat chance.”Undeterred (不气馁的), I sent a letter to Mister Rogers that fall, telling him of my newfound delight in his show and my idea for inviting neighborhood people over to talk about their lives, and asking him and Mrs. Rogers to b
17、e our guests.I told my daughter about the letter. Her eyes glistened (发光). “Mister Rogers coming? Really, Daddy?”One month later, no reply. My daughter hadnt forgotten and periodically asked when Mister Rogers would be visiting. I always told her that he hadnt called yet and that it was a good oppor
18、tunity to learn about patience.Two months later, no response. At the three-month mark, my wife simply rolled her eyes when I raised the topic. I was beginning to lose optimism. Mister Rogers had let me down.Sadly, Mister Rogers passed away in late February of the following year. I was unaware of his
19、 illness and now understood why our invitation had gone unanswered. Mister Rogers would not be coming to dinner after all. Yet, even after his passing, Mister Rogers gave us a far greater gift than I ever could have imagined.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。续写解读：续写第一段：要写出来信内容，可包括Mr. Rogers对于受到邻居的邀
20、请表示感谢、感动或期待见面、表示自己可能因为自己接受化疗来不了等；续写第二段：表达自己的感悟 生命是脆弱的，但人性是强大的，就如患重病的名导演Rogers戏内戏外都一样亲切随和、积极乐观，从中我们可以升华到邻居、社区、乃至整个世界都应该怀揣真善美，和睦相处，世代永好.下水作文：A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers. With my trembling hands, I fingered the letter and read it word for word. He ap
21、preciated my daughters enjoyment of his program and thanked us for our invitation, adding that he was much honored to be our “guest”. But he apologized for not responding sooner and not being able to make it to our dinner party then due to his stomach cancer treatment. In a delightful tone he expres
22、sed his wish to meet some day. The one-page typed letter was like something from an old friend: personal and caring. (89 words)The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter. We could never imagine it was written when he was then suffering great pains. Mister Roger
23、s is gone, but his remarkable talents are left behind. Rogers never came for dinner, but his belief in the importance of being good neighbors is passed on. His spirits will never die: caring for people including the unknown, hoping for the future, and most importantly, posing a positive attitude to
24、life whatever happens. When least expected, sometimes the best presents in life come from a special neighbor. (83 words)续写题目The air hung thick with the aroma of orange chicken and sweet and sour pork balls in Lucky Dragon, a fast-food haven nestled within the bustling Grandview Mall.Behind the count
25、er,Mei,a petite woman with a sharp mind and sharper wit, managed her crew:Sungho,the ever-smiling cook with lightning-fast reflexes,Ling,the meticulous cashier with a talent for origami napkin folding,and young Chen,still clumsy but eager to please.The lunchtime rush was relentless,the familiar melo
26、dy of clanging woks and hurried greetings filling the air.Then,a new beat entered the symphony a tall,broad-shouldered African American man named Kevin sauntered up to the counter. Mei,used to a clientele of mostly college students and office workers,did a double-take.Can I help you,sir? Sungho aske
27、d in his practiced American English,already reaching for the menu.Kevins response shattered the routine.W yo y g zhi ma bing he yi bei zhen zhu lv cha, he said,his Mandarin surprisingly smooth.(Translation:Ill have one sesame donut and a green tea with white pearls.)The entire crew froze.Meis eyes w
28、idened,a smile playing on her lips.Ni shu hny ma? (Translation:You speak Chinese?) she blurted,disbelief coloring her voice.The others mirrored her astonishment.Kevin chuckled,clearly enjoying their surprise.wo shi tu sheng tu zhang de Beijing ren, he replied,throwing them another curveball.(Transla
29、tion:I was born and raised in Beijing.)Mei blinked,processing this new wrinkle.ni zen me shuo de zhe me ho a! (Translation:But.you speak it very well!) she exclaimed.W hn i zhngwn, Kevin explained,his tone turning serious.W zhuan xi zhi zhi de xux le y nin bn. (Translation:I love Chinese.I studied w
30、hole heartedly for a year and a half.)Ah,that explained it.Ling,always the observant one,piped in,N de c hu kn q li hn zhun ye a!Ptng de xux zh bo bu hu shu zhuan xin zhi zhi. (Translation:Your vocabulary seems very professional!Ordinary learners wouldnt say wholeheartedly.)Kevin grinned,a touch of
31、pride in his eyes.Just then,the aroma of his freshly prepared sesame donut wafted from the kitchen.He leaned closer,a playful glint in his eyes,W hi yu yi ju.N men de ci se xiang wei (Translation:I have one more. You dish excels in look, smell, taste)Before he could finish,the staff,catching on,chim
32、ed in unison,a broad smile plastered on each face,Ju qun! (Translation:in all measures!)The air crackled with shared laughter and a sense of camaraderie.Para 1: Mei,her heart warmed by the unexpected encounter, held out Kevins order.Para 2:Leaving Lucky Dragon,Kevin felt a surge of warmth.范文Para 1:
33、Mei, her heart warmed by the unexpected encounter, held out Kevins order.We are definitely giving you this for free, she declared with glistening eyes. Kevins brows shot up in surprise, his hand still reaching for his wallet. But Meis resolve, backed by the chorus of Its on us! from the staff, was u
34、nshakeable. Taking a deep breath, Kevin accepted the bag and smiled again, “Thank you”. As he turned to leave, the Lucky Dragon crew, their faces beaming, chimed in unison, “Goodbye. Please come again.”Para 2: Leaving Lucky Dragon, Kevin felt a surge of warmth.That warmth stirred up his memory. Sudd
35、enly, sauntering in the mall, he was transported back in time to the one and a half years he had spent in Beijing. The wonderful scenery, the delicious food and most importantly, the warm-hearted people who had accepted and helped him flooded back and blurred his eyes. Somehow, he was consumed by this amazing feeling of peace and joy. It was the feeling of home. And he knew, Mei and her friends, felt that too.
