1、人教版八年级下册英语Unit6-unit10写作指导Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.【单元写作目标】能写简短的童话、神话故事。1.能从who,when,where,what,how 等问题出发，完整地叙述故事； 2.能用“as soon as,unless,so .that.”来连接句子，构成复合句； 3.写作微技能：用合适的短语连接多个句子，构成复合句。一 、词汇积累(一)短语中译英。1. 一 . 就 . 2. 有点儿 3.试图做某事 4.放弃 5.从前 6.代替；反而 7.引导某人做某事 8.爱上某人 9 . 结婚 10.全世界
2、11. 醒来 12.迷路 13.看起来可能 14.解决问题 15.一切皆有可能 16.找到出路 (二)短语英译中。1.take away 2.turn. into 3.neither of 4.leave sb.to do sth. 5.because of 6.at other times 二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿。1.As soon as the man finished talking,Yu Gong said that his family could continue to movethe mountains after he died.【as soon as 就 conti
3、nue to do sth.继续做某事】 大灰狼一看到小红帽(Little Red Riding Hood)就开始跟在她后面。尽管天开始黑了，大灰狼继续跟踪小红帽。2.This story reminds us that you can never know whats possible unless you try to make ithappen.【try to do sth. 尽力做某事】 大灰狼尽力让小红帽相信他。3.Its leading us to that wonderful house made of bread,cake and sugar.【lead sb.to do st
4、h. 引导某人做某事】 大灰狼诱使小红帽相信他说的话。4.Why does the wife tell her husband to leave the children in the forest?28初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)【tell sb.to do sth. 叫某人做某事】 妈妈告诉小红帽尽快到外婆家。5.Gretel heard that their stepmother planned to kill her and her brother.【plan to do sth. 打算或计划做某事】大灰狼打算比小红帽早一点到达外婆家。6.Later that night,
5、they could see the stones because of the shining moon.【because of 由于；因为 通常接短语】 因为生病，你说话我听不清。7.But unless he can hide his tail,he cannot turn himself into a person. 【unless 如果不；除非】大灰狼不能吃掉小红帽，除非她走到床边。8.She was so busy that she had no time to make a dress for the party. 【so .that . 非常/如此以至于】小红帽看到路边的美丽花
6、儿太高兴以至于她忘记了妈妈的话。三、以读促写Once upon a time,there was a girl named Little Red Riding Hood lived in a forest with her mother.And her grandma lived in another forest.One day,her mom asked the little girl to visit her grandma because the old lady was ill and had to stay in bed.At first,Little Red Riding Hoo
7、d walked slowly.There were so many beautiful flowers along the path that she stopped to enjoy them.At that moment,a wolf noticed Little Red Riding Hood.The wolf talked with her and led her to tell where her grandma lived.Later,the wolf got to her grandmas house and ate the poor lady.He even dressed
8、up like her in the bed and waited to eat Little Red Riding Hood.How dangerous it was!Luckily,a hunter passed by.He killed the wolf and also saved both Little Red Riding Hood and her grandma.Little Red Riding Hood and her grandma thanked him.Then they had a wonderful dinner阅读故事，并回答以下问题。1.写童话故事时，需交代哪几
9、个要素? 2. 该故事是按什么顺序来写的? 29初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)四、篇章训练同学们，一年一度的文化节来啦!你对其中的“故事新编”比赛非常感兴趣。请你 发挥想象，重新编写耳熟能详的童话故事小红帽和大灰狼。词数不限。【我的草稿】Little Red Riding Hood and the Wolf30初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)【我的作品】【我的订正】31初中英语写作指导与训练 新目标八年级(下)Unit 7 Whats the highest mountain in the world?【单元写作目标】能介绍关于自然、地理方面的知识。1.正确使用形容词、副词的
10、比较级与最高级；2.能使用 a lot /much/a little /many times修饰形容词和副词比较级；3.写作微技能：用形容词和副词增加文章美感；1+n(n3) 写作拓展。一、词汇积累(一)数据描述短语。1.550米深 2.8.844米高 3.2.400公里长 4.960万平方公里 5.10千克 6.300年历史 (二)含最高级短语。1. 最长/短的河流 2.最大/小的沙漠 3. 最重/轻的熊猫 4.最多/少的竹子 5.最危险的人口 6.最普遍的问题 7.最著名的部分 8.最深的咸水湖 9.最高的山脉 10.最多的人口 (三)其他短语。1. 每两年 2. 的重要性 3.濒危动物
11、4. 就我所知 5.水污染 6. 主要的原因之一 7.长城之旅 8.登山 二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿。1.The spirit of these climbers shows us that we should never give up trying to achieve ourdreams.【give up(doing)sth.放弃(做)某事 try to do sth.尽力做某事】 尽管有诸多困难，他也从不放弃拯救濒危动物。政府尽力阻止工厂向河流排放污水。2.Adult pandas spend more than 12 hours a day eating about 10 ki
12、los of bamboo.【spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事】 他曾打算花5年时间环游中国。3.They send people to schools to tell children about the importance of saving these animals.32初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)【the importance of doing sth. 做某事的重要性】 人们开始意识到保护环境的重要性。(二)比较句专练。1. 中国几乎与美国一样大。【as .as . 】2. 黄河不如长江长。【not so(as).as . 】3.中国比美国的历
13、史要长得多。【a much longer history】4.北京是中国最大的城市之一。【one of.】5.重庆是所有城市中最大的。【of all .】三 、 以读促写根据短文内容和中文提示，写出空白处各单词的正确形式，每空限填一词。India,in the southern (亚洲),is about 3,200,000 (平方)kilometers in size.Even though it is much smaller than China,the (人口) of it is almost as big as that of China.It is said that there
14、are more than 1600 languages in India.However,English is the most widely used there.India is a fantastic country with a long history.There are many (旅行者) from all over the world to visit India every year.If you travel to India,youre sure to have a great (旅行)there.There are many mountains in India,bu
15、t most of them are less than 1,000 (米) high.Thar (沙漠)is the smallest in the world.It lies in the west,about 590,000 square kilometers.And the longest river is Indus,which runs through India and Pakistan.Though India is next to Indian (大洋),the weather there is hot most of the time. The (政府) urges peo
16、ple to plant more trees to make it cool.With modern technology,India develops rapidly these years.Some people ( 达 到 ) their dreams to (成功) and become rich.However,the (自然) is destroyed at the same time.And the pollution also causes many kinds of (疾病).And Some (野生的) animals are in great danger, (包括)
17、elephants.Its really necessary to make solutions to (保护) them.Indians truly believe their motherland will be better and better.33初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)四、篇章训练同学们，我们的祖国拥有五千年的悠久历史。我国幅员辽阔，山河壮丽，民族众多。 随着社会的不断发展，我们的祖国越来越昌盛富强。请你写一篇120词左右的短文介绍 我们的祖国，内容可包括自然地理、人口、语言、环境、名胜等方面。参考词汇：river,mountain,desert,places of
18、 interest,history 【我的草稿】34初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)【我的作品】【我的订正】35初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet?【单元写作目标】能用现在完成时表达最近已完成的事情和尚未完成的事情。1. 能用现在完成时肯定形式“have already done sth.”表达已经完成的事情；2. 能用现在完成时否定形式 “havent done sth.yet” 表达尚未完成的事情；3. 能用一般过去时表达完成事情的具体时间；4. 能用一般将来时表达打算何时完成尚未完成的事情；5.
19、 写作微技能：1+n(n3)写作拓展策略。一 、词汇积累(一)写出下列动词的过去式、过去分词。动词过去式过去分词动词过去式过去分词readfinishdecidehavewritelosedofindteachbuytravelseelistenwatchsellsing(二)动词类短语。1. 完成阅读 2.放下 3.放弃 4. 砍倒 5. 等待 6.对感兴趣 7.迫不及待做某事 8.属于 9.做一些研究 10.开始意识到 11.使某人回忆；回顾 12.观看某人现场演唱 13. 享受成功 14.过去常常做某事 (三)其他短语。1. 至少 2.赶紧 3. 乡村音乐 4.大自然的美 5.最成功的音
20、乐家之一 6.钱与成功的重要性 二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿。1.Have you at least read the back of the book to see what its about? 【at least 至少；不管怎样；无论如何。可修饰动词与数字】 陈萍喜欢阅读，她读了至少200本不同的书籍。36初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)2. However,country music brings us back to the“good old days”when people were kind to each other and trusted one another.
21、【bringsb.back to sth. 使某人回忆/回顾】致青春( To Youth) 这部电影使我回忆了我的大学生活。3.It reminds us that the best things in life are freelaugher,friends,family,and the beauty of nature and the countryside.【It reminds sb.that.(跟句子),它提醒某人】那本书提醒学生没有思考的学习是很危险的。4.Garth is one of the most successful musicians in American histo
22、ry.【one of.,之一，后面所跟的名词用复数形式】 莫言是中国历史上最成功的作家之一。(二)仿写句子。根据表格中的信息，按照例句，仿写句子。如：I have already finished reading Alice in Wonderland.I finished it yesterday.I think its fantastic.I havent read Treasure Island yet.I will read it next week.已完成的事具体时间尚未完成的事计划完成时间1.Petersee the movie To Youthlast Sundayintrodu
23、ce the movie to otherstomorrow2.Marysweep the floo1this morningwash clothesthis evening12.(三)写作微技能：1+n(n3) 写作拓展策略。请同学们阅读课本60页的4b和62页阅读文章的最后一个自然段，感悟文章是如何 拓展的。然后选择本页中仿写句子的其中一个人物，对其进行写作拓展训练。37初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)三 、篇章训练某校正在举行文化节(Cultural Festival),为了全面了解学生的课余文化生活，学校对 学生们进行了一次“课余文化生活”的调查。假设你是该校的一名学生，请填写
24、你的课 余文化生活信息，然后请根据表格信息(可以添加),写一篇120词左右的英语短文。things I have donetimethings I havent doneplan to finishbooksTreasure Islandlast weekOliver Twistnext weekmoviesmusic【我的草稿】Beginning: Body: Ending: 38初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)【我的作品】【我的订正】39初中英语写作指导与训练新目标八年级(下)Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum?【单元写作目标】能介绍曾经去过
25、的一个地方以及在那儿的经历。1.能用 “have ever been to.”表达某人曾经去过的地方； 2. 能 用 “have ever done sth.” 表达曾经经历过某事；3.能用一般将来时表达对将来的愿望；4. 写作微技能：形容词在写作中的运用。形容词具有的修辞功能，恰当使用形容词来增 强作文表达效果，能使文章更具体、形象、生动。一、词汇积累(一)写出下列动词的过去式、过去分词。动词过去式过去分词动词过去式过去分词tryinventam/is /arelearnvisitsingeathearmakeseetakeplay(二)动词类短语。1. 参观太空博物馆 2.尝试中国食物 3
26、.进步如此迅速 4.了解有关 5. 听说 6. 兜风 7.鼓励某人做某事 8.做某事有困难 9.玩得开心 10.去某个不同的地方 (三)形容词类短语。1.a very unusual museum 2.a relaxing and peaceful place 3.an enjoyable trip 4.in such a rapid way 5.a wonderful and safe place 6.an excellent place 7.a normal zo0 8.one great thing 9.exciting rides 10.lovely restaurants 11.fa
27、ntastic gift shops 12.the most interesting museum (四)其他短语。1.在白天 2. 历史博物馆 3.成千上万的 4. 厕所的发展 5.一方面 6. 另一方面 7. 四分之 三 8.说英语的国家 二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿。1.Its a great way to spend a Saturday afternoon.【its a great way to do sth. 这是做某事的好方式、方法】40初中英语写作指导与训练 新目标八年级(下)这是过国庆假期非常好的方式。2.The most interesting museum Ive e
28、ver been to is the American Computer Museum.【The most interesting.Ive ever been to is . 我曾经去过的最有趣的地方是】 我曾经去过的最漂亮的城市是厦门。3.Watching them prepare the tea with the beautiful tea sets is just as enjoyable as drinking thetea itself. 【as .as 和一样，形容词/副词的同级比较】 骑自行车和游泳一样好玩。4.Its also a good place to practice
29、your English.【a good place to do sth. 是一个做某事的好地方】 杭州也是一个购物的好地方。5.One great thing about Singapore is that the temperature is almost the same all year round.【one great thing about .is that+句子的很大特征(很好的方面)是】 厦门一个很大的特征是它是一个非常干净的城市。6.Its unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way!【its
30、 unbelievable that+句子 真是令人难以置信】 难以置信的是你可以在新加坡尝到世界各地的食物。(二)写作微技能：形容词在写作中的运用。给下面的短文加上恰当的形容词。记得用不同的形容词哟!The most place I have ever been to is Jungfraujoch Top of Europe.In July, 2013,I went there.When I arrived at the foot of the mountain,I saw many and flowers that I have never seen before.A/An train
31、took me to the top of the mountain.I think you have ever taken trains,but have you ever taken a train from the sea level to 3,454 meters above the sea level?When the train went up,the weather became colder and colder.I had to put on more clothes.On the way,I saw a/an area with green grass.The mounta
32、ins with white snow caught my eyes.The sky and the air made me feel .Everyone on the train took lots of photos with their cameras.I realized that it was a /an and place to take a holiday.When I arrived at the top of the mountain,its that the weather was so cold there!Although my whole body was trembling a lot,I bravely wen
