1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习男孩因照顾母亲经常迟到，校长了解清楚后鼓励大家都积极帮助男孩1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Jenny was a nice girl,but she had one shortcoming.She was often late for school because she had to look after her sick mother,who lay in bed all through the year.The familys cooking and washing went to the young girl.Of c
2、ourse this brought a little inconvenience to Jennys schooling.One morning when Jenny came in late again,Mr.Black,her class teacher,got very angry.“I will ask your father to my office if you arent here on time tomorrow,”he shouted at her.Jenny didnt want him to do so.On the one hand her parents were
3、very strict with her;on the other hand his father was working on the farm these days,for it was autumn,when all the crops had to be harvested.She didnt want to waste her fathers precious time to listen to her teachers roar in front of all the other teachers.4续写原文The next day,Jenny got up early.To sa
4、ve time,she wolfed her breakfast.When the bell rang,she was waiting in her seat quietly,especially waiting for Mr.Black.The door opened,but an unfamiliar face appeared.“Im Miss Green.Mr.Black is ill,so I will take his class instead today.”How disappointed Jenny was!The next morning Jenny got up even
5、 earlier.To avoid unhappy things,she went to school without breakfast.Just before she got to the school gate,she stopped:a wallet was lying on the ground!She picked it up with hesitation.“Whose is this?”she wondered.As she stood there thinking,she heard the first bell.“What shall I do?”she asked her
6、self.“I will turn it in first,”she decided quickly and so she did.When she hurried to the classroom,Mr.Black had already begun his class.5段首句Para 1：“Jenny,you really make me disappointed!”Mr Black shouted as soon as he saw her.Para 2：At this moment the headmaster came in hurriedly.“Your wallet,Mr Bl
7、ack.”he said.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jenny因为自己早上要照顾她生病的母亲所以经常迟到，被科任老师 Mr Black责备。这一天Jenny又迟到了，Mr Black让Jenny下课后去办公室找他。后来校长把钱包拿给了Mr Black，Mr Black知道了Jenny的善行并了解了她的家庭情况，决心要帮助她。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路
8、分析 Para 1:“Jenny,you really make me disappointed!”Mr Black shouted as soon as he saw her.由第一段首句内容“Jenny，你真让我失望!”Mr Black一看见她就大叫起来。”可知，第一段可描写 Mr Black责备Jenny，并让她下课后去办公室找他。Jenny把钱包交给了校长。10续写思路分析 Para 2：At this moment the headmaster came in hurriedly.“Your wallet,Mr Black.”he said.由第二段首句内容“这时校长匆匆忙忙地进来了
9、。“你的钱包，Mr Black。”他说。”可知，第二段可描写校长拿着钱包还给Mr Black，Mr Black知道了Jenny的善行并了解了她的家庭情况，决心要帮助她。11续写素材 续写素材 Mr Black责备Jenny叫Jenny去办公室Jenny交钱包给校长校长归还钱包Mr Black知道善行Mr Black了解情况Mr Black决心帮助Jenny12续写素材 续写素材 行为类 发生：happen/take place/occur 尽力做：try ones best to do/make the best of/struggle to do 情绪类 害怕：with fear/in te
10、rror/dreadfully 生气：angry/annoyed/in a huff13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.Mr Black,who clearly thought Jenny was lying,stopped her.“Come to my office after class and go back to your seat now.”（运用了由who引导的定语从句）高分句型2.There was no doubt that he felt angry again.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）高分句型3.When he saw Jenny,he said happily
11、,“Oh,it was this little girl who found your wallet.”（运用了强调句和由when引导的时间状语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现“Jenny,you really make me disappointed!”Mr Black shouted as soon as he saw her.Jenny lowered her head with fear,saying“Im sorry,Sir.I didnt mean to,but there was something happened on the way.”Mr Black,who c
12、learly thought Jenny was lying,stopped her.“Come to my office after class and go back to your seat now.”Then he went on with his lesson.Jenny was fidgeting in class.The bell finally rang.After a struggle,Jenny went to the principals office first,giving him the wallet and explaining,and then she ran
13、quickly to the office to find Mr Black.There was no doubt that he felt angry again.16范文呈现At this moment the headmaster came in hurriedly.“Your wallet,Mr Black.”he said.When he saw Jenny,he said happily,“Oh,it was this little girl who found your wallet.”Hearing this,Mr Black felt a bit surprised.He s
14、oon recovered his spirit and thanked Jenny.Meanwhile,he had a better understanding of Jennys family.He thought he would try his best to help this girl.17范文译文“珍妮，你真让我失望！”布莱克先生一看到她就喊道。珍妮害怕地低下头，说：“对不起，先生。我不是故意的，但路上发生了什么事。”布莱克先生显然认为珍妮在撒谎，拦住了她。“下课后到我办公室来，现在回到你的座位上。”然后他继续上课。珍妮在课堂上坐立不安。铃终于响了。经过一番挣扎，珍妮先去了校长办公室，把钱包给了他并解释了，然后她赶紧跑到办公室去找布莱克先生。毫无疑问，他又生气了。这时，校长匆匆走了进来。“你的钱包，布莱克先生。”他说。当他看到珍妮时，他高兴地说：“哦，是这个小女孩发现了你的钱包。”听到这个消息，布莱克先生有点惊讶。他很快恢复了精神，感谢珍妮。与此同时，他对珍妮的家人有了更好的了解。他想他会尽力帮助这个女孩。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!
