1、读后续写:自我认知、成长与突破 讲义读后续写阅读下面材料,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一篇完整的故事。For me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was
2、 twelve, because my camp counselors(辅导员)and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I knew I was no ones first choice.I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body tens
3、ed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasnt been in other events to run the two-mile!”He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself from the
4、 shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him.“But I dont know the way around the lake!”“Youre in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smiled. Bill was my friend and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch(最后一程)on the field, just th
5、row your head back and run.” At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled. “On your mark Get set.” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I stayed close on Bills heels, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!” I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept my eyes o
6、n Bill.It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around the lake back to the field. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him.注意:1续写词数应为150个左右
7、;2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1In a moment, Bill was up again and running. _Paragraph 2I didnt know when I crossed the finish line. _一、主题意义本文主题围绕自我认知、成长与突破展开。主人公一开始对自己充满否定,认为自己既不是领导者也不是运动员的料。然而,在被迫参加比赛的过程中,主人公逐渐克服内心的恐惧和不自信,实现了自我成长和突破。通过这个故事,传达了不要轻易自我否定,勇于挑战自我的积极意义。二、伏笔“I was too little to be the lea
8、der and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, because my camp counselors and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got.” 这句话为后文主人公在比赛中的不自信和自我怀疑埋下伏笔,同时也让读者对主人公能否在比赛中有所突破充满期待。“But I dont know the way around the lake!” 这句台词暗示了主人公在比赛中可能会遇到困难和挑战,为后续情节的发展做了铺垫。三、情节
9、线1.开端:四个营地的孩子们准备比赛,主人公觉得自己不适合参加。当营地需要第四名两英里赛跑选手时,主人公被选中,尽管他极不情愿且缺乏自信。2.发展:比赛开始,主人公紧跟在朋友 Bill 后面跑。但 Bill 嫌主人公跟得太紧让他后退,这时有两个人超过了主人公。随后 Bill 被树根绊倒,被另一个营地的选手超过。3.高潮:Bill 很快起身继续跑,主人公也在坚持。4.结局:主人公不知何时冲过了终点线。四、情感线1.开始时主人公充满自我否定和恐惧,觉得自己不适合参加比赛,“I knew I was no ones first choice. Having no confidence and try
10、ing to save myself from the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him.”2.比赛过程中,主人公虽然紧张害怕,但在看到 Bill 摔倒后继续跑的场景激励下,也坚持了下来,情感逐渐变得坚定。3.最后冲过终点线时,主人公的情感可能是一种惊喜和成就感,尽管他不知道自己何时冲过了终点线,但他在这个过程中实现了自我突破。五、主题升华句1. Self-belief is the key to unlocking ones potential.自我信念是开启个人潜能的关键。2.
11、Overcoming self-doubt leads to remarkable personal growth.克服自我怀疑会带来显著的个人成长。3. Challenges are the stepping stones to self-discovery.挑战是自我发现的垫脚石。4. Ones journey of self-transformation often starts from an unexpected event.一个人的自我转变之旅常常始于一件意想不到的事情。5. The power within can be awakened through confronting
12、difficulties.内在的力量可以通过面对困难被唤醒。Possible VersionThe First VersionIn a moment, Bill was up again and running.I was inspired by his resilience. Despite his fall, he didnt give up. I knew I couldnt either. I pushed myself harder, trying to close the gap between us. The other runners were far ahead, but I
13、 focused on Bill. As we ran along the muddy trail, my legs ached and my breath came in short gasps. But I kept going. I thought about all the times I had been told I was too little or too skinny. I was determined to prove them wrong. With every step, I felt a newfound strength coursing through my bo
14、dy. I wasnt going to let my self-doubt hold me back anymore.I didnt know when I crossed the finish line.All I knew was that I had given it my all. As I stood there, panting and exhausted, a sense of accomplishment washed over me. I had never thought I could do it, but I had. I realized that I was ca
15、pable of more than I had ever imagined. This race had taught me that I shouldnt let others opinions define me. I had the power to overcome my own limitations. From that day on, I would never again doubt myself. I would face challenges head-on and believe in my ability to succeed.The Second VersionIn
16、 a moment, Bill was up again and running.I felt a surge of adrenaline as I witnessed his determination. Without hesitation, I picked up my pace, my eyes fixed firmly on his back. The path around the lake was treacherous, with tree roots and muddy patches, but I navigated them with newfound focus. As
17、 we rounded a bend, I could see the other runners in the distance. They seemed so far ahead, yet I refused to let despair overtake me. I remembered Barrys words, When you make it to the last stretch on the field, just throw your head back and run. That advice became my mantra, repeating in my head w
18、ith each step. I drew closer to Bill, our feet pounding the earth in unison. The wind whipped through my hair, and I could taste the sweat on my lips. But I was no longer the timid boy who hid under the maple tree. I was a competitor, ready to give this race everything I had.I didnt know when I cros
19、sed the finish line.The world around me seemed to blur as I pushed myself to the absolute limit. There was a deafening roar in my ears, which I later realized was the cheers of the crowd. When I finally came to a stop, I was gasping for air, my legs on the verge of giving out. I looked around, dazed
20、, and saw Bill smiling at me. He gave me a thumbs-up, and in that moment, I knew that I had not only completed the race but had also conquered my inner demons. I had proven to myself and to those who had doubted me that I was more than just a skinny, athletic kid. This race was a turning point in my life. It taught me that we are often capable of far more than we believe. From then on, I carried that lesson with me, facing each new challenge with the same courage and tenacity that I had shown on that fateful day around the lake.