1、高考英语一轮复习写作专项-读后续写“人与自然”主题:到山顶去读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mandy liked nothing betterthan to spend time with hergrandfather. You see, he wasalways making somethingand she enjoyed watching, learning, andsometimes even helping him finish whateverhe was doing. Now, the two decided to goon a
2、 hike in the woods tomorrow.The next morning, Mandy did not need an alarm to wake her. She was up, dressed, and ready to go as the sun rose andthe day began. After a great breakfast anda long drive, Mandy and her grandfatherarrived at the base of a mountain and the beginning of the trail. This is be
3、autiful,Mandy said. Just where are we hiking?To the very top of the mountain where wewill have lunch, rest, maybe take a swim, and then hike back down, he replied.“Swim! Mandy said excitedly. “Is therea lake on the top of the mountain? “Yes.” her grandfather replied. There is a lakesurrounded by big
4、 flat rocks and it is filledwith clear, cold water. “Wow! was allMandy could say.As they hiked up the mountain, Mandy asked many, many questions. What kind of tree is that? How high are we? Arethere bears around here? Are there any other people up here? “What do we do if we get lost? And of course:
5、Are we there yet? Her grandfather answered all her questions the best he could and explained that they were in a very natural area. Not many people, all sorts of wildlife, even bear.He helped her understand and respect the natural beauty around them, particularly the animals.He taught her how to use
6、 a compass, and things to help them be safer while they hiked. Like whistle a song or make some noise to let the bigger animals know you are in their area. In a soft voice, her grandfather said.The Earth is our mother. All life is sacred: treat all life with respect. Take from the Earth what is need
7、ed and nothing more. Enjoy your journey but leave no tracks.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As they hiked a little farther, Mandy saw the lake surrounded by rocks. Mandy was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “Its time to leave.” 范文赏读:As they hiked a little farther, Mandy saw the lake surr
8、oundedby rocks. They had arrived the top of the mountain. Mandy picked alarge rock that extended out into the water for them to rest on. It hadbeen warmed by the sun and was the perfect place for lunch.As hergrandfather unpacked their food, she leaned over and wiggled her fingers in thecold water. I
9、mmediately several small fish came by and nibbled at her fingers. Shelaughed and played with the fish until she heard her grandfather say “Time forlunch. And after lunch and a resting period, Mandy took a swim.Mandy was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “Its time to leave.” After making sure e
10、verything was just like it was when they arrived, theybegan their hike down the mountain. Mandy asked, “Can we take a different traildown the mountain?” “I dont see why not,” Grandfather replied. After a short time, the trail began blending into the surrounding brush and then disappeared. Mandy wass
11、cared, “I think we are lost.” Her grandfather comforted, “We just arent on a trail, so we will have to continue hiking down the mountain in the direction of the car. Relaxand enjoy the surroundings. Finally, they arrived at their car.翻译:As they hiked a little farther, Mandy saw the lake surroundedby
12、 rocks. They had arrived the top of the mountain. Mandy picked alarge rock that extended out into the water for them to rest on. It hadbeen warmed by the sun and was the perfect place for lunch. As hergrandfather unpacked their food, she leaned over and wiggled her fingers in thecold water. Immediat
13、ely several small fish came by and nibbled at her fingers. Shelaughed and played with the fish until she heard her grandfather say“ Time forlunch. And after lunch and a resting period, Mandy took a swim.当他们又往前走了一段路时,曼迪看到了那个被岩石环绕的湖泊。他们已经到达了山顶。曼迪挑了一块延伸到水中的大石头,以便他们可以坐在上面休息。那块石头被太阳晒得暖暖的,是吃午饭的绝佳之地。当她爷爷打开
14、他们的食物时,她俯身将手指在冰冷的水中摆动。立刻就有几条小鱼游了过来,轻咬她的手指。她大笑着和鱼儿嬉戏,直到听到爷爷说“该吃午饭了”。午饭后休息了一会儿,曼迪去游了个泳。Mandy was sad when she heard her grandfather say, “Its time toleave.” After making sure everything was just like it was when they arrived, theybegan their hike down the mountain. Mandy asked, “Can we take a differen
15、t traildown the mountain?” “I dont see why not,” Grandfather replied. After a short time, the trail began blending into the surrounding brush and then disappeared. Mandy wasscared, “I think we are lost.” Her grandfather comforted, “We just arent on a trail, so we will have to continue hiking down th
16、e mountain in the direction of the car. Relaxand enjoy the surroundings. Finally, they arrived at their car.当曼迪听到爷爷说“该离开了”时,她很难过。在确保一切都恢复到他们刚来时候的样子后,他们开始下山徒步返程。曼迪问道:“我们能走另一条山路下山吗?”“我看没什么不可以的。”爷爷回答道。没过多久,那条小路就开始融入周围的灌木丛中,然后消失不见了。曼迪害怕了,说道:“我觉得我们迷路了。”她爷爷安慰道:“我们只是没在小路上了,所以我们得朝着汽车的方向继续往山下走。放松点,欣赏一下周围的景色吧。”最终,他们来到了他们的汽车旁。分析:“人与自然”主题相关的英文素材能够帮助考生拓展知识,积累优质资源来提升读写水平,备战高考!本文强调人与自然和谐共生的重要性,指出它是我们生存和发展的基础。本文讲述了一段与自然和谐相处的个人经历,选择了一个具体的山上的场景,描述了Mandy如何感受到自然的美丽和力量,以及它带来的心灵上的愉悦和启发。这篇读后续写也是提出号召,呼吁大家共同努力,尊重和保护自然,实现人与自然的和谐共生。