1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、通知：压力释放日镇海中学2025年1月首考模拟冲刺卷学校发现部分同学在学习压力过大时表现出焦虑情绪，心理咨询室计划推出“压力释放日”(the Stress Relief Day) 活动。假如你是校报的学生编辑李华，请你用英语撰写一篇文章，内容包括：1. 压力释放日的意义；2. 活动方案；3. 鼓励大家参与并注重心理健康。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段写压力释放日的意义（要点1）；第二段介绍活动方案（要点2）；第三段鼓励参与（要点3）。【参考范文
2、】A Breath of Fresh Air for Our MindsIn the hustle and bustle of our school life, its not uncommon for students to feel overwhelmed by the academic pressure. Therefore, the schools psychological counseling center is scheduled to launchthe Stress Relief Day, aimed at helping students alleviate their e
3、xamination stress and enhance their learning efficiency.The counseling center has planned a wide range of activities. Firstly, fun sports will be organized to boost mood and strengthen teamwork abilities, followed by an expert lecture on mental health and strategies for coping with stress. Additiona
4、lly, art therapies such as painting and music will be introduced to facilitate students in conveying their emotions and finding their inner peace.Your participation in the deep breath for the soul is highly expected. Mental health, after all, really counts in our academic pursuits. (130 words)【中文翻译】
5、净化心灵近期，不少同学在繁重的学业压力下感到焦虑。为此，学校心理咨询室将举办“压力释放日”活动，旨在帮助同学们缓解高考压力，提升学习效率。心理咨询中心策划了一系列不同的活动。首先是组织轻松有趣的趣味运动会改善学生情绪，提升团队合作能力。其次是邀请专家，为学生讲解心理健康知识，提供应对压力的策略和方法。此外还设计了绘画、音乐等艺术疗法，让学生表达自己的情感，找到内心的平和。我们诚挚邀请每位同学积极参与，把这次活动当作一次心灵的深呼吸。毕竟，在追求学业成绩的同时，自己的心理健康也同等重要。【参考范文解析】 01应用文写作思路 （1）审题判定文体相当于一则通知；（2）因文体是通知，故李华身份不必交代
6、；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍计划推出的压力释放日的意义和活动方案，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。02本文亮点 （1）In the hustle and bustle of在.的忙碌中（2）its not uncommon for students to双重否定表示肯定=its very common for students to（3）feel overwhelmed by受到.的压制（影响）（4）a wide range of各种各样的（5）followed by紧跟着是.（6）facilitate . in使.在.很容易（7）is highly expected某事是值得期待
7、的（8）counts要紧，重要二、建议信：班级英语公众号杭州学军中学2025届高三首考最后一卷假如你是国际学校学生李华，你将和班内英国交换生Jeremy一起负责班级英语公众号（a public account）来宣传班级，请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：1.对公众号的设想；2.对分工的建议。注意：写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Dear Jeremy,Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段表达写作目的；第二段提出对公众号的设想（要点1）和分工建议（要点2）；第三段期待回复。【参考范文】Dea
8、r Jeremy,Its a pleasure to be partnering with you in managing our classs English public account. Id like to share some initial thoughts on how we can run it effectively.I think we could establish four sections: Class Culture, News Updates, Sharing of Learning Resources, and Youth Stories, which will
9、 give viewers a comprehensive insight into our class and boost their English proficiency. Regarding the job assignments, we might as well focus on maximizing our respective strengths. As a native English speaker, you can take charge of editing and proofreading English content. I, on the other hand,
10、will handle the layout and release for my familiarity with the operation of the public account. Of course, it is also preferable for both of us to brainstorm ideas and share class stories.Looking forward to your reply. (134 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的杰里米：很高兴能和你一起负责我们班级的英语公众号。关于这个公众号的运营，我有一些初步的想法。我认为
11、，我们可以设立班级文化、新闻动态、学习资源分享和我们的青春故事四个板块，让更多人了解我们班级，同时亦可以提高大家的英语水平。关于分工，我建议我们各自发挥自己的优势。你来自英国，英语表达地道，可以负责英文内容的撰写和校对；而我比较熟悉公众号运营，可以负责排版和发布。当然，我们也可以共同讨论，集思广益，讲好班级故事。期待你的回复！李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路 （1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因两人是同学关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分是对公众号提出设想及分工建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时；（4）考虑到词数要求，可以去除分工的理由：As a native Englis
12、h speaker和for my familiarity with the operation of the public account（共15个词），余119个词。02本文亮点 （1）partner with与.合作；（2）give viewers a comprehensive insight into让阅读者全面理解；（3）boost their English proficiency提升他们的英语水平；（4）regarding介词：关于；（5）might as well不妨，还是做某事的好；（6）maximizing our respective strengths充分利用各自的优势
13、；（7）it is also preferable to do sth做某事也是更好的；（8）brainstorm ideas开动脑筋。三、回复信：中医针灸雅礼中学2024年秋季学期高二期末试卷假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom最近对中医很感兴趣，特别想尝试一下中国的针灸(Acupuncture)。请你给他写封回信。内容包括：1.针灸的简介；2.你对针灸未来的展望。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Tom,Yours，Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段简要介绍针灸（要点1）；第二段写对未来针灸的展望（要点2
14、）；第三段表达期待。【参考范文】Dear Tom,I am glad to learn of your keen interest in Traditional Chinese Medicine, particularly in exploring acupuncture. Acupuncture, as a fundamental part of traditional Chinese medicine, boasts a rich history dating back thousands of years. It works by stimulating specific points
15、on the body for the purpose of disease treatment and health preservation.In my view, the future prospects for acupuncture are promising. With advancements in modern technology, acupuncture has proved effective and exploded in popularity. I believe that acupuncture will emerge as an increasingly pref
16、erred health remedy and gain wider recognition and application globally.Looking forward to your visiting China and experiencing the wonders of acupuncture. Best regards! (109 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的汤姆：你好！得知你对中医产生了浓厚兴趣，尤其是想尝试针灸，我感到非常高兴。针灸作为中国传统医学的重要组成部分，已有数千年的历史。它通过刺激身体的特定穴位，达到治疗疾病和保健养生的目的。在我看来，针
17、灸的未来充满了希望。随着现代科技的发展，针灸的疗效得到了更多科学的验证，其应用范围也越来越广泛。我相信，针灸将成为更多人选择的健康疗法，并在全球范围内得到更广泛的推广和应用。期待你有机会来中国亲身体验针灸的神奇魅力！祝好！李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路 （1）审题判定文体为回复信（主要为介绍）；（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍中医针灸及其未来展望，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。02本文亮点 （1）boasts a rich history拥有丰富的历史（2）dating back追溯到（用法解析：date back to后接具体时间，如date back to Sui Dynasty；date back后接段时间）（3）promising有前途的，有希望的（4）exploded in popularity大受欢迎（5）emerge as成为（6）gain wider recognition and application赢得更广泛的认可和应用4
