1、英 语 写作写作 触类旁通触类旁通 假如你叫张华假如你叫张华,你们的英文校报你们的英文校报English Garden向你约稿。向你约稿。 请结合下列提示请结合下列提示,就你校图书馆的情况给校长写一封信就你校图书馆的情况给校长写一封信,说明说明 新建的图书馆很漂亮新建的图书馆很漂亮,但存在一些问题。最后对反映的问题但存在一些问题。最后对反映的问题 提出自己的建议。提出自己的建议。 问题包括问题包括: 1.阅览室的座位少阅览室的座位少; 2.星期六、日不开放星期六、日不开放; 3.无法知道有什么新书可看无法知道有什么新书可看。 注意注意:1.词数词数 100左右左右; 2.可适当增加细节可适当增
2、加细节,以使行文连贯以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已写好开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmaster, _ _ _ _ _ Thats all.Thank you! Sincerely yours, Zhang Hua 初读课文初读课文 明大意明大意 审审 题题 文体文体 记叙文记叙文(建议信建议信) 人称人称 第一人称为主第一人称为主 时态、时态、语态语态 一般现在时为主一般现在时为主 主动语态为主主动语态为主 要点要点 1.图书馆的基本情况图书馆的基本情况 2.阅览室的座位少阅览室的座位少 3.开放时间开放时间 4.无法知道有什么新书可看无法知道有什么
3、新书可看 初读课文初读课文 明大意明大意 谋谋 词词 1.deal with 处理处理 2.take/make notes 记笔记记笔记 3.put up 张贴张贴 4.take.into consideration 考虑考虑 布布 句句 1.Im writing to tell you. 2. .The new library is beautiful and well-equipped. 3.There arent plenty of seats.and. 4.The library is closed at weekends,. 5.I suggest that. 初读课文初读课文 明大
4、意明大意 成成 篇篇 Dear schoolmaster, Im writing to tell you that all of us are glad to see our newly-built library open.It is so beautiful and well-equipped that we all like to make the most of our spare time here.But there is something we should deal with as quickly as possible. 初读课文初读课文 明大意明大意 First of a
5、ll,there arent plenty of seats in the reading- room,so we have to stand reading and thus cant take notes. Besides,the library is closed at weekends,but in fact,we students have more spare time only at weekends to enjoy reading.Whats more,we dont know what new books are available. I suggest that our
6、school library provide more seats and be kept open at weekends.Also,a notice should be put up if there are new books available. 初读课文初读课文 明大意明大意 I would appreciate it a lot if you take that into consideration and take some steps to solve them. Thats all.Thank you! Sincerely yours, Zhang Hua 写给亲朋好友的建议
7、信写给亲朋好友的建议信,正文的开头可以用正文的开头可以用: I am glad to receive your letter yesterday. 我很高兴昨天收到你的来信。我很高兴昨天收到你的来信。 I am sorry to hear that. 我很遗憾地得知我很遗憾地得知 Now let me answer your questions. 现在我来回答你的问题。现在我来回答你的问题。 Now,let me tell you something about. 现在我和你谈一下现在我和你谈一下 写给某个组织或机构的建议信写给某个组织或机构的建议信,开头可以用开头可以用: I am a st
8、udent from.我是来自我是来自的学生。的学生。 I am writing to tell you that. 我写信告诉您我写信告诉您 I recently find that.我最近发现我最近发现 表达建议的句子表达建议的句子: In my opinion,it would be beneficial if. 在我看来在我看来,如果如果是有益的。是有益的。 As to.I suggest that you choose. 至于至于,我建议你们选择我建议你们选择 As far as I am concerned,. 就我而言就我而言, I would like to make some
9、 suggestions.First,. 我想提些建议。第一我想提些建议。第一, 结尾句结尾句: I hope that my suggestions are helpful. 我希望我的建议有帮助我希望我的建议有帮助 I would be more than happy to see improvement in. 我会非常高兴地看到在我会非常高兴地看到在方面有所改进。方面有所改进。 If you could take what I suggest seriously,you would. 如果你能认真考虑我的建议如果你能认真考虑我的建议,你会你会 假如你是中学生李华假如你是中学生李华,你收
10、到正在学习汉语的美国笔友你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友 Peter的电子邮件的电子邮件,说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难,感到非常着感到非常着 急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议,帮他来解决这方帮他来解决这方 面的困难。面的困难。 1.不要担忧不要担忧,要有信心要有信心; 2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会给自己更多练习汉语的机会; 3.让自己处在汉语的环境当中让自己处在汉语的环境当中。 注意注意: 1.可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯以使行文连贯; 2.词数词数100左右左右; 3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出邮件的开头和结尾已给出,
11、不计入总词数。不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, Ive received your email. Im sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese.Now Im writing to give you some suggestions. To begin with,dont be anxious and trust yourself.Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so its normal for a be
12、ginner to have some trouble. Besides,grab every opportunity to practice using the language.The more you practice,the more fluent you will be in it.Above all,involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese,and by friends speaking Chinese,which is essential to the learning of any language. Looking forward to your improvement soon. Yours, Li Hua
