1、2021 届高考英语冲刺写作专题复习：困难模式water, flood 话题一：困难解决大水 Step I 导入 围绕七个场景： 一、环境描写（恶劣） 二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎） 三、转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么 四、情绪描写（希望+努力） 五、脱险描写 六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴） 七、主旨描写 模板语句： 一、环境描写（恶劣） 波涛汹涌： 1.As I floated on, a huge wave (一 个 巨 浪 ) whistled (呼 啸 而 来 )and approached us. 2. The big wind roared through our ears (在耳
2、边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther. 3. All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临) 4. A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我 们) 鲨鱼的可怕： It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. The sharks jaws
3、opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth. 陆地上的水： Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,. 雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。 The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive. 水丌停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。 Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon
4、 my waist. 在水里行走（丌可能 rush, dash） wade: 跋涉，蹚（水或淤泥等）Joe leaped out and waded into the flood. struggle: 艰难地行进；吃力地进行 I struggled up the hill with the heavy bags. struggle to ones feet 挣扎着站起来 plod:艰难地行走；吃力地 stagger/ totter/ stumble 蹒跚；踉跄 Our horses plodded down the muddy track. 我们的马沿着泥泞小路蹒跚而 行。 We plodde
5、d on through the rain. 我们冒雨艰难地跋涉。 With jaws clenched, I resolved to keep edging closer, inch by inch. Mustering up my courage, I pushed the door open with all my might, seized Joes arm tightly, and we waddled （蹒跚而行）to the truck by holding each other up. I stretched out my arms to embrace him, and he
6、 patted me on the back slightly to show comfort. 推荐句型： 1. The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth. 风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过/掠过 2. They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。 3. The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击 打窗户。 4. The rain drum
7、med on the roof of the building.雨丌停地击打着房预。 5. The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。 6. The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我 的脸。 7. A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。 8. The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破 了宁静的夜晚。 9. The
8、bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。 10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other 二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎） 疲倦/寒冷 1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. 2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed ( 包 围 了 ) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
9、3.Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didnt stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming. 4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myselfafloat(漂浮着的). 5. He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.他缩进大衣里，冷 得脸都发紫了。 6. Fingers numbed by the chill
10、y water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing. 7. She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在 胸前。 8. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles. 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。 9. Her teeth were chatteri
11、ng with cold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。 害怕 1. I took a deep breath and swallowed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫). 2. A chill feeling crept up her spine. 3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind, which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright (难以控制地发抖). 4. Looking at the vast
12、 sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.(在身体涌动) 5. As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on (前行). 6. The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发 凉). 7. I was flooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没). 8. S
13、eeing this, I felt my fear growing/increasing(剧增) inside. 9. I felt a wave of anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept over my body (袭来). 10. Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness. 11. A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!” 12. Th
14、e hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透） 13. Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice. 14. Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from mov
15、ing a single inch. 描写挣扎努力 1. Tom looked thoughtful (若有所思) 2. “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁) 3. .,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地). 4. We spared no effort to(丌遗余力地) to swim towards the shore. 5. We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行)
16、 at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度). 三、转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么 1. A distant sound reached our ears.(传入耳朵) 2. Just then, my mind raced why not call 911 and Joe? 3. The sound of the boat echoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响) 4. At that moment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空). 5. When we were at a loss of what
17、 to do, there were rasping (刺耳 的) shouts(喊叫声)rising from the distance(从远处升起). 6. Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. 7. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. 8.
18、After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. 四、情绪描写（希望+努力） 描写如释重负 1. As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again. 2. Hearing the comforting news, I couldnt help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑) 3. His words reignited the fla
19、me of hope in my heart 4. On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地 叹了口气), grinning merrily ateach other. 5.Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪). 6. Overjoyed( 狂 喜 ) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气) 7. St
20、iff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. 五、脱险描写 The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger. 六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴） When we pictured
21、 what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written on my face. Sighing in relief, I couldnt stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer. 七、主旨描写 1. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and eve
22、ryone should be a lifeguard. 2. For the first time since, ones emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks. 3. Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin. 4. Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmu
23、red sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously. 5. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience. Step II 实战 I went up to the roof for a break after studying for an hour and watched the 50 or so people swimming in the natural rock poo
24、l below our house. It was a sunny day-a blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered three or four big waves heading towards the shore. Id seen these mini-tsunamis(海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the pool. Most people
25、knew how to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble. Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board(俯伏 冲浪板) on the way and shouted at a stranger to go inside my house and call the coastguard. My neighbor Moi
26、ses had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his body board, so together we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea. Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl from the pool and into the open sea. I knew that the nearest boat would take at least 30
27、minutes to reach us. Waiting for help wasnt a choice. I wasnt used to this sort of emergency-Id never been trained as a lifeguard-but I didnt think twice about trying to save them. I supposed in a way I wanted to impress everyone: at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off.
28、 Moises and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear they wouldnt have been able to stay
29、 there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Moises moved the girl onto his board. We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out. 注意： 1.所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: We had to wait. 提示：分为以下场景： 场景一：描写环境的恶劣 场景二：描写我们的努力 场景三：描写转机（有没有外援？） 场景四：得救 Paragraph 2: That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition. 提示： 场景五：我们的感受 场景六：（可选）我们行动的反响 场景七：照应主题（在文章中找到一处与主题有关的语句） We had to wait. That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition.
