1、2021 高考英语读后续写专题巩固性测试（water, flood) 一、填空： 1. a huge wave_ 一个巨浪呼啸而来 2. the big wind_ through our ears 风在耳边咆哮 3. show _ sharp teeth 露出锋利的牙齿 4. Splashing raindrops _the windshield 雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上 5. the skies were o_ with a blanket of grey 天空笼罩在一片灰色之中 6. _ on through the rain 在雨中艰难地跋涉 7. get _ by icy water
2、 被冰冷的水浇透了 8. the rain _ on the roof 雨丌停地击打着房预 9. tiredness _us with my feet _/_ and shivering 疲劳包围了我们，我的双脚僵硬/麻木 10. his face _ with _ 冷得脸都収紫了 11. on the _ of _ 在崩溃的边缘 12. _my face like a sharp knife/needles 像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸 13. fear _ upon my heart 恐惧爬上我心头 14. The hairs on the back of my neck _ / _
3、on end 汗毛倒竖 15. as if _ at straws 似乎抓住了稻草 16. his words _ the flame of hope in my heart 他的话重新点燃了我内心的希望 17. sighed in great _ 如释重负地叹了口气 二、写作分析 1.主题探索 主题的提炼必须抓住两个： 显性主题：救人成功，难忘的经历 隐性主题：隐含在文章中某个线索句（戒词语）下的深层想法，这个线索可能是 积极的戒消极的，那么基本围绕：个人的蜕变（从负面到积极；从积极到升华） Discussion： 1.What are the clue sentences? 2. What
4、 do the clue sentences indicate to us? (请总结线索句的特征） 2.语言探索 Discussion: 1)How many kinds of sentence patters（句式）are used? 2）Which verbs impress you? We had to wait. 1. 眼睛上的盐分刺痛了我的眼，大海汹涊，很难控制冲浪板。 _, the sea was so rough that day and it was difficult to handle the body board. 2.“我们需要想出方法！”我朝 Moises 鼓励性地
5、望了望，自言自语道，绞尽脑 汁想。 “We need to think out a way!” I _Moises and muttered, _ my head. 当我们漂浮在无尽的海上时，30 分钟似乎很长。 30 minutes seemed much longer as we just helplessly floated on the boundless sea. 3.突然，Moris 看到远处某个东西在闪烁。 Suddenly, Moris saw something _in the distance. 4.“光！我看到光了！他们来了！”Moris 竭尽全力嚷道。 “Lights!
6、 I see lights! They are coming!” Moris _ his lung. 5.时间慢慢地过去了，船终亍到了身边，把我们都送回岸。 Time _ by, the boats finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. 6.两个孩子立刻被送到医院。 The two kids were sent to the hospital without delay. Paragraph 2: That night, word came from the hospital that the two people w
7、ere in good condition. 7.我欣慰地叹了口气，禁丌住回想整个事件。 _, I couldnt stop thinking about the whole event. Or: Picturing what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was _on my face. 8.这两个孩子多幸运啊，因为要是他们在海里多呆一会，就会死了。 How lucky they were because they would_ if they _ in the sea for any longe
8、r! 9.第二天早晨，碰到我的人都对我微笑，丌停夸赞我。 The next morning, all the people I met smiled to me and could not stop praising me. 10.似乎这是一个炫耀自己的好机会，但我并丌打算这样。 It seemed like a good opportunity to show myself off, but I didnt mean to. 11.实际上，我为我曾经这样想过感到羞愧。 In fact, I was ashamed I had thought about it. 12.我突然意识到，帮助他人本
9、身就是无价的，每个人都应该是救生员。 It occurred to me that _ and everyone should be a lifeguard. 版本 2： We had to wait. Patting their faces to wake them up, we continuously told them to be strong. After what seemed a century, extremely exhausted, I had to swim hard to keep myself afloat. Casting a look at Tom, I coul
10、d tell he was also apparently worn-out. Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. But I still shouted in my head: focus. In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. Thank you, Lord. Quite soon, I fe
11、lt strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board, and the two kids were sent to the hospital without delay. That night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condition. It immediately brought tears of relief to my eyes. The fright still lingered on in the memory. Obviously I
12、 had done a big deal which is surely a good opportunity to show off. I had expected to experience some sort of sense of well-being or greatness, but none of that came. Rather than feel like a hero, I believe anyone who could swim would have done the same thing. 从范文里可以总结结尾的两种形式，请将句式写下来： 1._ 2._ 在第一段已
13、经写了人物获救，第二段可以写什么？ 1._ 2._ 3._ 三、小组改作文 评价标准：1.主题 2.衔接 3.句式(包括各种语法和词汇错误） 4.描写（动词， 情绪）5.词数 1.（缪天顺） We had to wait. With time ticking by, the wind and wave began to build up, cutting my face like sharp needles. I managed to pop my head out of the water with all my mights, and then saw Moises grabbing he
14、r surfboard tightly and swimming to the shore, but she failed because the wind blew in the opposite direction. The thought of being trapped sent shivers down my spine. Just then, I noticed that the wind began to change its direction. “Go, now!” I yelled to Moises. Regardless of a weary numbness cree
15、ping into my limbs, I surfed towards the shore with the help wind, with Moises followed. When we got on the shore, we found us unable to do CPR for the kids. We sent them to the hospital with worries about their conditions. That night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condi
16、tion. Overjoyed to hear this, both Moises and I breathed a sigh of relief. Reflecting on the thrilling experience, I though it might be a great opportunity to show off. I began to constantly boast about how difficult it was to send the kids back to shore, and how intelligent I was to notice the chan
17、ge of wind direction. At first they regarded me as a little hero, but soon they were tired of my words. One day, Moises finally told me,“Constant boasting wont impress anyone. The kids would have recovered faster if you have learnt CPR.Hearing this, I hang my head, eyes fixing on the ground, regretf
18、ul and shamed. It suddenly dawned upon me that helping others dont mean a chance to boast myself, but a valuable gift. 2.(沈依稼） We had to wait. Time passing by, however, neither of us caught sight of a single boat. Tiredness engulfed us with my feet stiff and shivering. I clasped the boy to my bosom
19、to keep him warm. Waves of fear swept over my body from time to time because I could his breaths become weaker. We must do something! Moises and I exchanged a determined look and spared no efforts to swim towards the shore. The chilly water cut my face like sharp needles and my teeth were chattering
20、 with cold. Exhausted and tired, I felt I might sink into the water anytime. In sheer desperation, there were shouts rushing from the distance which reignited my flame of hope, we swam to the ship with all my might. Finally, the boy and the girl were rescued. That night, word came from the hospital
21、that the two kids were in good condition. On hearing the good news, Moises and I sighed in great relief. Also we couldnt help containing our excitement. It was I who saved the life of a little boy. Happiness written on my face, I stretched my arms to embrace Moises. We made it! At 19, I did catch th
22、e opportunity to show off. From this unforgottable experience, I knew that fortune smiles upon the brave. The experience of helping us and the gratitude which I received from them would enrich my life. 四、反馈练习（20 分钟内快速写好） 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a rainy November morning. Overcome
23、 with anger I knew if I didnt leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him. He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of n
24、ewspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Dont you have enough to do? I can take care of myself” I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut (捷径). Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spri
25、ng forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework. The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooke
26、d meal and a good nights sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal (燕麦)for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how t
27、o save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret. Ten minutes later, ignoring Joes warning I turned off the main route. I thought it hadnt rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed
28、 across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldnt risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks (喇叭声). 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Paragraph 2 I screamed that I couldnt make it.
