1、人教版人教版 8 8 年级年级下册英语作文精品赏析下册英语作文精品赏析 1.现在很多中学生被近视困扰，下周的英语课上，你们将就“近视”这个问题进 行小组讨论。请你根据下面的图表信息写一篇英语短文为此做准备。 要求：要求：90 词左右，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：参考词汇：视力 eyesight 保护 protect 近视的 short-sighted _ _ _ Quite a few students are short-sighted now. This is because some students watch TV for too long without breaks and some
2、 keep their eyes too close to books when reading. Poor eyesight causes problems in our life and makes studying difficult. For example, we cant swim without glasses. We cant become pilots. So its important to protect our eyesight. First, we should relax after studying for hours. Second, we should do
3、eye exercises every day. Third, we shouldnt watch TV or play computer games too much. 2.2. 在中国学习的英国交换生吉尔(Jill)近期总是头痛， 她到医院诊治多次但 效果不佳。她听说中医保健治疗效果不错，就登录了中国某健康网留言咨询中医 孟大夫。假如你是孟大夫，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，回复吉尔。 提示：提示： 1. 描述吉尔的病情； 2. 分析原因； 3. 给出建议： 保证足够的睡眠并做运动； 多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉(至少补充 1 条) 要求：要求：90 词左右，可适当发挥。短文格式和结尾已给
4、出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jill, Hope you will be better soon. Dr. Meng Dear Jill, Im sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days. You said you went to the doctor, but you didnt feel better. From what you told me, I think the reason is that youre too tired. Here is my advice. First, you should get e
5、nough sleep every day, at least 8 hours at night. And you should do sports. Second, you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third, try putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed. Hope you will be better soon. Dr. Meng 3.某国际文化交流中心将于 5 月份组织一些英、美学生来北京学习、交流， 现
6、正在招募志愿者。假如你是第二中学的孙新，请根据以下提示给该项目负责人 格林先生(Mr. Green) 写一封申请信，要求成为此次活动的一名志愿者。 提示：Why do you want to be a volunteer in the program? What qualifies (使具备资格) you to do the volunteer job? When can you do the volunteer job? 要求：80 词左右，可适当发挥。信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Green, _ _ _ Yours, Sun Xin Dear Mr. Green, I
7、m Sun Xin from No. 2 Middle School. I want to help out as a volunteer in your program. The reason is that Im interested in other countries and their cultures and want to make new friends from other countries. Im good at English and Im outgoing. Whats more, Im always ready to help others. I think tha
8、t is important for a volunteer. Im free to help on the weekend. If I can get the job, Im sure I can be a great helper. Yours, Sun Xin 4.假如你是王伟，你在“学雷锋纪念日”参加了志愿者去敬老院慰问老人的社 会实践活动。请你根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友 Lisa 写一封电子邮件，向她 介绍此次活动。 提示：提示：活动：送鲜花、水果；打扫卫生；读报 你参加活动后的感想： 要求：要求：要点齐全，80 词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总 词数。 Dear
9、 Lisa, Yours, Wang Wei Dear Lisa, I went to an old peoples home with some volunteers. We did many things for the old people. We brought them some flowers and fresh fruit. And we helped clean their rooms. After that, some of us sang songs and danced for them. Some of us read newspapers to them. Some
10、of us talked with them. How happy they were! I think this activity is very meaningful. I learned that we should care for the old around us every day. Yours, Wang Wei 5.假如你是王婷，你准备明天给妹妹举办一个生日聚会，但你一个人忙不过 来，打算请你的美国朋友比尔(Bill)前来帮忙。请你根据以下提示，给比尔发一 封电子邮件，告诉他你的情况及你想让他做的事情。 提示：提示：1. 帮你打扫、装饰房间； 2. 帮你购买食物； 3. 教你
11、做蛋糕。 要求：要求：1. 运用本单元所学句型 Could you please .?； 2. 80 词左右。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：参考词汇：装饰 decorate Dear Bill, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Wang Ting Dear Bill, Tomorrow is my sisters birthday. Im going to have a birthday party for her. However, there is too much work to do, so I need your help. Could you please
12、help me clean the room and decorate it? On your way to my home, could you please help buy some food for the party? Perhaps you could also help me with something else. I plan to make a birthday cake for my sister. Could you please teach me how? Yours, Wang Ting 6.假如你是李峰，下面是你的美国笔友埃里克(Eric)给你发来的电子邮件。请
13、你就他的电子邮件中的问题，给他回复一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Feng, I dont like doing chores, so my mom is angry with me. Do you do chores at home? What do you think of doing chores? Do you think students should do chores? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Eric 要求：要求：90 词左右。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, Yours, Li Feng
14、Dear Eric, I never did chores before. But last month I cleaned the house when my mother was not at home. When she came back, I could see the satisfaction in her eyes. Now, I often help do the chores whenever I am free. I think students should do chores when theyre free. Here are the reasons. Firstly
15、, doing chores can help students learn to look after themselves. Secondly, doing chores can help students relax. Finally, parents are tired. Doing chores can make them rest for a while. Yours, Li Feng 7.假如你是王涛，下面是你的美国笔友比尔(Bill)给你的一封来信。请你回复 他的这封信，在信中表明你对此事的看法，并给他一些建议。 Dear Wang Tao, I want to buy a C
16、D player, but my parents disagree. Theyre worried that I will be listening to music all the time and it will affect (影响) my studies. Now Im very upset. What should I do? Yours, Bill 要求要求: 80 词左右，可适当发挥。信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Bill, _ _ _ _ Yours, Wang Tao Dear Bill, I dont really agree with your parents
17、 because youre interested in music and listening to music on it can help you relax. Maybe your parents are worried you will spend too much time listening to music and might not get good grades. I think you should tell them why you want to buy a CD player and promise that youll keep on studying hard.
18、 If they still dont agree, you can get a part-time job and make some money to buy a CD player. Yours, Wang Tao 8.某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Experience ( 一次难忘的经历 )” 为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，向该报社投稿。 提示：提示： Where were you? What happened? What do you think of the experience? 要求：要求：1. 至少使用一个含有过去进行时的句子；
19、2. 80 词左右，可适当发挥。题目已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Experience _ _ _ An Unforgettable Experience On October 1st, 2015, I planned to take the bus to the train station. When I was waiting for the bus, it began to rain. Unluckily, I forgot to take my umbrella. I stood in the rain, with the rain beating heav
20、ily against my body. Just at that time, a car stopped and the driver offered to take me to the train station. I was so moved. Ill never forget this experience and will always be ready to help others like that driver. 9.同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧？请根据本单元所学内 容及下面的提示词语，以 The story of Yu Gong 为题，把“愚公移山”的故事用
21、英 语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。80 词左右，开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 提示词语：提示词语：90, move the mountains, Zhi Sou, die, sons, grandsons, continue, god, be moved, help The story of Yu Gong Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. _ _ _ The story of Yu Gong Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong.
22、Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains. A “clever” man called Zhi Sou said, “You are too old to move the mountains.” Yu Gong said, “If I die, my sons will still do this. And if my sons die, my grandsons will continue doing this.” Then a god was moved by Yu Gong. So he sent two g
23、ods to help him. From the story, I learn that anything is possible if we work hard! 10.假如你是王鹏，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书，并将 其发表在你校英文网站上。 提示：提示： 要求：要求： 1. 内容应包括提示信息， 可适当发挥； 2. 恰当运用比较级和最高级； 3. 80 词左右。倡议书的格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal Dear schoolmates, _ _ _ I believe everyones contribution (贡献) c
24、an make a big difference. Dear schoolmates, Elephants are the largest mammals on land. They can live as long as 80 years. However, these days the number of elephants is becoming much smaller. Because people cut down forests they are losing their homes. Also, people kill them for their ivory. Elephan
25、ts are in great danger. I think we should try our best to protect them. First, we should help make rules to stop people from killing elephants. Second, we shouldnt cut down trees. Third, we shouldnt buy anything made of ivory. I believe everyones contribution (贡献) can make a big difference. Wang Pen
26、g 11.你班下周的英语口语课要就“你最喜欢的电影或戏剧(play)”这一话题进行 讨论。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文为此做准备。 提示：提示： 1. 你最喜欢的电影或戏剧是什么？2. 它主要讲述了什么？ 3. 它有什 么特别之处或你学到了什么？ 要求：要求：80 词左右，可适当发挥。 _ _ _ One possible version 1: My favorite play is Teahouse. It is so interesting that I have watched it three times. Teahouse is one of Lao Shes most fam
27、ous plays. It describes peoples lives in China about one hundred years ago. All the actors and actresses did a good job. Every time I watched it, I felt like I was living in that time. I advise you to watch it because it shows you how much China has changed and its easy to understand. One possible v
28、ersion 2: My favorite movie is Ratatouille. It is so interesting and educational that I have watched it five times. Remy, a mouse, is the main character. He is always dreaming of being a cook. But others think that is impossible. However, Remy doesnt give up his dream and he finally succeeds through
29、 hard work. This movie tells me that I can achieve my dreams if I believe in myself. Also, the music in the movie is really beautiful. 12.假如你校的英文网站“周游各地”栏目正在征文，请你以“A visit to _”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述一下你去某地参观的经历及感受。 内容须包括：内容须包括：1. Where did you go? 2. Whom did you go with? 3. What did you do? 4. What do you th
30、ink of the place? 要求：要求：80 词左右，可适当发挥。 A visit to _ _ A visit to Hangzhou Have you ever been to Hangzhou? I have been there. Last winter, I went there with my parents. We visited many places of interest such as West Lake, the landmark of Hangzhou, and Leifeng Pagoda. We also enjoyed different kinds o
31、f food there. We had a good time. In my opinion, Hangzhou is a beautiful place with hills and lakes. Another great thing about Hangzhou is that its not too cold in winter. If you want to relax, you can go there. 13.假如你是李东，请阅读你的美国笔友 David 发给你的这封电子邮件，然后 针对邮件中的几个问题给他回复一封电子邮件。 Dear Li Dong, I heard youl
32、l have a yard sale to sell one of your favorite books this weekend. Im interested in buying it. Do you mind answering my following questions? 1. Whats the book about? 2. How did you get it? 3. What do you think of it? 4. How long have you had it? 5. Why do you plan to sell it? Im looking forward to
33、your reply. Yours, David 要求：要求：80 词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David， _ _ Yours, Li Dong _ Dear David, It is a storybook. My mother bought it for me for my tenth birthday. I like the book so much and I have read it many times, because the stories in it are very interesting and they have brought me lots of fun. I have had this book for three years so far. Although I like it a lot and will be sad to part with it, I want to sell it because I think it can make someone else happy too. Yours, Li Dong
