1、1 天津天津市红桥区市红桥区 20162016- -20202020 年五年高三一模英语试题汇编年五年高三一模英语试题汇编- -书面表达专题书面表达专题 2020年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题 第二节第二节: :书面表达书面表达( (满分满分 2525 分分) ) 61.假设你是李津，你的英国朋友 David 给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知 道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主要内容包括: (1)如何抗疫及成效； (2)你怎么度过及现状； (3)你的感受。 注意: (
2、1)开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； (2)词数:不少于 100词。 参考词汇:疫情 epidemic situation; 新冠肺炎 Covid-19 Dear David, Im glad to receive your email. _ _ _ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】Dear David, 2 Im glad to receive your email. You asked me to share with you how China is fighting Covid-19 and what Im doing in the epidemic situation. Let
3、 me tell you something. Since the outbreak of Covid-19 in Wuhan in December, 2019, Chinese people including doctors, nurses and scientists have acted bravely and spared no effort to fight against it. They are real heroes. Now initial results have been achieved against the epidemic. As a high school
4、senior, I stay home during the outbreak. On the one hand, I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers. Besides, I take exercise at home every day to keep healthy. Happily, we graduates hav
5、e now returned to school. We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon. Thank you for your concern. Yours, Li Jin 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇提纲类写作。 【详解】第 1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李津，你的英国朋友 David 给你发邮件询问你中国抗击新型冠 状病毒肺炎疫情的情况并想知道你在疫情期间是怎么度过的。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复他，主 要内容包括：(1)如何抗疫及成效；(2)你怎么度过及现状；(3)你的感受。 第 2步：根据写作要求
6、，确定关键词 （组） ：epidemic situation (疫情)；Covid-19 (新冠肺炎)；share with (分 享)；outbreak (爆发)；spared no effort to(不遗余力地)等。 第 3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去 时、现在完成时和一般现在时。 第 4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 3 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 On the one hand,
7、I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news; on the other hand I and my classmates have online courses given by our teachers.非谓语动词的运用；We are confident that everything will come back to normal soon.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾 驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2019
8、年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题 五、书面表达五、书面表达 22.假设你是李津，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：他通过媒体了解到中国改革开放四十 年的巨大变化，对中国非常感兴趣，希望能结识一位中国朋友，以便了解中国的语言、文化。请你给 David 发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：你怎样得知 David 的愿望；你愿意成为他的朋友；你打算 如何帮助他；你盼望他的回复。 注意：电子邮件的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数；词数：不少于 100 词。 Dear David, Ive learned Yours since
9、rely, Li Jin 【答案】 Dear David, Ive learned it from the Internet that you learned about the great changes of Chinas reform and opening up in the past 40 years through the media and became such great interest in China. You want to make a Chinese friend so as to better understand the Chinese language an
10、d culture, and then I am the best candidate. I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, Ill teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am goi
11、ng to help you as much as I can. How do you think? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文 【解析】 【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李津的身份给 David 发一封电子邮件。写作背景：在互 联网上看到英国高中生 David 登的一则启事：他通过媒体了解到中国改革开放四十年的巨大变化，对中国 非常感兴趣，希望能结识一位中国朋友，以便了解中国的语言、文化。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类 作文，内容包括：你怎样得知 Davi
12、d 的愿望；你愿意成为他的朋友；你打算如何帮助他；你盼望 他的回复。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。 需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符全逻 辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 4 【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句 间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：You want to make a Chinese friend so as to better unde
13、rstand the Chinese language and culture, and then I am the best candidate.运用了并列 句； I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, 运用了时间状语从句；Ill teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous
14、 historical places of interest. 运用了并列句。 2018年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分 25 分） 61. 假设你是李津。最近你所在的城市将 9 月 28 日即孔子（Confucius）诞辰之日定为“汉 字书写日”。请你根据以下要点给你的美国笔友 John 写一封信，向他介绍此事。 1设立原因 1：人们提笔忘字，写汉字机会减少； 2设立原因 2：汉字具有悠久的历史，书法是一项传统艺术，都应被传承和保护； 3该日主要活动：书法（calligraphy）竞赛及优秀作品展
15、览等。 注意： 1词数不少于 100； 2开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数； 3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear John, Im writing to tell you something about Chinese Character Writing Day in our city. _ _ 此处不能答题 You are welcome to visit us at any time. Yours, Li Jin 答案： One possible version: Dear John, 5 Im writing to tell you something about Chines
16、e Character Writing Day in our city. September 28, the birthday of Confucius, is chosen as Chinese Character Writing Day, which I think is meaningful enough to make it well-known. The reason that our city choose to set this festival is not only to bring people more opportunities to write, but to pro
17、tect our traditional art form, calligraphy, and to pass it to next generation. As we know, Chinese Character has a glorious long history but it is faced with the embarrassment that with the popularity of mobile phones, computers and the Internet, many people dont have to write so they even forget ho
18、w to write Chinese Character properly. In order to overcome this, various activities are held on that day, such as handwriting contests and exhibitions of calligraphy. You are welcome to visit us at any time. Yours, Li Jin 2017年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题试题 第二节：书面表达(满分 25 分) 61
19、. 假设你是李津，在十一旅游期间入住北京友谊宾馆702房间，10月2日入住，10月6日退房。你 回家后发现一个中等大小的蓝色皮背包遗失在哪里，内有几本学习参考书，一个白色ipad，一张信用卡和 少量现金。请用英文给该宾馆外籍经理写一封 email，请他帮忙寻找并寄回。 信件要点包括： 1.陈述写信原因； 2.简要描述该背包； 3.说明其重要性； 4.期待回复。 注意：1.词数：不少于 100； 2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir, _ _ _ 6 _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 答案：答案： One pos
20、sible version: Dear Sir, Im so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but Im writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel. I checked in on Oct. 2 and out on Oct.6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 702. It
21、s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some reference books, a white ipad, a credit card and some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipad, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much did I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss. If you find it, wo
22、uld you please post it to me? The return address is at the end of the letter. Ill appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply. Yours sincerely, LiJinLiJin 2016年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题年天津市红桥区高中毕业生学业考试模拟（一模）英语试题 第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分 2525 分）分） 7 61. 假假如如你你叫叫李李津津，上周在去图书馆途中不慎丢失书包，里
23、面有钱包、身份证、学生证等。正当你十分上周在去图书馆途中不慎丢失书包，里面有钱包、身份证、学生证等。正当你十分 焦急之时，接到学校学生会通知，称英国外教焦急之时，接到学校学生会通知，称英国外教 Miss White 拾到你的书包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请拾到你的书包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请 你对此给你对此给 Miss White 写一封感谢信，感谢她拾金不昧。写一封感谢信，感谢她拾金不昧。 注意注意： 1. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数； 2. 可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译； 3. 词数词数不少于
24、不少于 100 字。字。 Dear Miss White, Im Li Jin, a student of No. 1 Middle School. _ _ _此处不答题此处不答题_ Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Jin 答案答案 One possible version: Dear Miss White, Im Li Hua, a student of No. 1 Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you for returning my wallet, ID card and so on.
25、On my way to the library last week, I lost my bag due to my carelessness. In the bag were my wallet with some money, ID card and other documents. As you know, my ID card and student card are very important to me. I was very worried and even sleepless. I was really at a loss when I was informed to go
26、 to the StudentsUnion and take back what I had lost, where I learned that it was you who picked up my bag and kindly handed it in timely. It was such a pleasant surprise that Id like to express my thanks to you. What a good example you have set for me to learn from! Best wishes. 8 Yours sincerely, Li Hua
