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Unit5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? (section B 3a-3b Writing for fun) 教学设计 Topic: Write about an important event that you remember well . I divided this lesson into 4 steps. Step 1. Before writing- Brainstorming Step2. While writing-Group-work Step 3. After writing-Check the composition Step 4. Writing skills for test Step1. Before writing A ) Brainstorming of events: 1) Malaysian flight lose contact. 2) .The hail in Longxi . relaxed - nervous pleased - angry happy - unhappy upset worried afraid disappointed sad scared 3）The flood in Fanjiachuan. B) Brainstorming of activity 1.calling sb. up 2.playing the guitar 3.watching TV 4.reading the newspaper 5.eating something 6.swimming in the river 7.dancing 8.talking with friends C）Brainstorming of feeling (adj.) relaxed - nervous pleased - angry happy - unhappy upset worried afraid disappointed sad scared Step 2. While writing A ）3a . Answer the following questions one by one ,then collect them in the paper , and make it a fun composition. Finally , Read and correct the composition. 1.What was the event? 2.When did it happen? 3.Where did it happen? 4.What were you doing? 5.What were your friends doing? 6.How do you feel about it? 7.Why do you remember this event? Competition Rob the best sentences for your group s composition. （mins ） B ）3b Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs. (when and where it happened). An important event that I remember well was _. It happened in/on _ at /in _. Then, write about why this event was important. This event is very important to me because many people died in the earthquake. / I remember this event well because the earthquake is too terrible, but lots of people from other place in China (even in the other countries) were coming to help people in disaster area. Step 3. After writing Summarize the key points of Writing. Answer the five Questions（4 w + 1 h）: What was the event? When did it happen ？ Where did it happen？ Who are in the story ？ How do you feel about it ? Step 4. Writing skills for the test. I. 一“审”即审题。1.注意要求写作的文体:是书信还是记叙文、说明文、或议论 文等2.要求用第几人称;3.根据写作提示考虑用什么时态; II.二“列”即列纲。1.列出主要准备写哪几点；2.考虑所要选用的关键单词、短语、 句型（根据自己的词汇句型积累尽量扬长避短，避难就易）。 III.三“连”即连句成文。1.根据所列提纲，理清文章思；2.重新排列组合句子，划 分必要段落（一般分三段）；3.灵活运用句式：长、短句，简单、复合句搭配 运用。 四“改”即修改润色全文。1.通读全文，查看有无文不对题，行文是否流畅，要点 查缺补漏；2.细节查看:包括字母书写是否规范清楚、大小写、标点符号、时态、 语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等. Warm Reminding 温馨提示 （If you can do like this ,you can get good grades in WRITING） 规范、漂亮整齐的书写会提分不少哦！ 开头和结尾句子要上保险哦！ （准确无误并一语中的） 文章分三段，阅卷轻松看！ 首段综述：开门见山，一两句话切入正题。 正文（主要内容）：层次性强，要有过度衔接词，最多展开三个方面，每个 方面两句话，言简意赅，精说少错。 结尾：紧扣主题，提炼升华，点明主题。 Homework : Write an essay about the topic. Enjoy your school life! Taste our English! And take it easy! Section B (3a- 3b) WritingWriting forfor funfun ! Before writing- Brainstorming 1 While writing-Group-work 2 After writing-Check the composition 3 Writing skills for test 4 Topic: Write about an important event that you remember well . What :Hail Where : In Longxi country ,Gansu When : At 19 on July 15 ,2014 How : Destroied many plants、 farmland and lots of wild animals What : Flood Where : In Huan Country When : At 5 am.on July 15 ,2013 How : Destroied many plants、 farmland and bridges、road ，some people died and many families were in trouble. What was /were sb. doing when sth happened? 1.calling sb. up 2.playing the guitar 3.watching TV 4.reading the newspaper 5.eating something 6.swimming in the river 7.dancing 8.talking with friends 9. I I waswas (at(at thethe timetime of)of) relaxed - nervous pleased - angry happy - unhappy upset worried afraid disappointed sad scared 3a .Answer the following questions one by one , then collect them in the paper , and make it a fun composition. Finally , Read and correct the composition. Rob the best sentences for your group s composition.（ mins ） Who wins ? He who laughs last laughsbest！ 3b Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs. First, write about the event (when and where it happened). An important event that I remember well was _. It happened in/on _ at /in _. Wenchuan Earthquake May 12, 2008 Wenchuan, Sichuan Next, write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened. When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was sleeping. My friends were working. Then, write about why this event was important. This event is very important to me because many people died in the earthquake. / I remember this event well because the earthquake is too terrible,but lots of people from other place in China (even in the other countries) were coming to help people in disaster area. An important event that I remember well was Wenchuan Earthquake.It happened on May 12, 2008 in Wenchuan, Sichuan. When I heard the news of this event, I was sleeping. My friends were working. This event is very important to me because many people died in the earthquake. I remember this event well because the earthquake is too terrible , but lots of people from other place in China (even in the other countries) were coming to help people in disaster area. Summarize the key points of Writing Answer the five Questions（4 w + 1 h）: What was the event? When did it happen ？ Where did it happen？ Who are in the story ？ How do you feel about it ? Writing skills for the test 考场英语作文写作技巧 I. 一“审”即审题。1.注意要求写作的文体文体:是书信还是记叙 文、说明文、或议论文等2.要求用第几人称人称;3.根据 写作提示考虑用什么时态时态; II.二“列”即列纲。1.列出主要准备写哪几点；2.考虑所要选 用的关键单词、短语、句型（根据自己的词汇句型积累 尽量扬长避短，避难就易）。 III.三“连”即连句成文。1.根据所列提纲，理清文章思；2.重 新排列组合句子，划分必要段落（一般分三段）；3.灵 活运用句式：长、短句，简单、复合句搭配运用。 IV.四“改”即修改润色全文。1.通读全文，查看有无文不对 题，行文是否流畅，要点查缺补漏；2.细节查看:包括字 母书写是否规范清楚、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态 、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。 I.一“审审”即审题。1.注意要求写作的文体文体:是书信还是记叙文、说 明文、或议论文等2.要求用第几人称人称;3.根据写作提示考虑用什么 时态时态; II.二“列列”即列纲。1.列出主要准备写哪几点；2.考虑所要选 用的关键单词、短语、句型（根据自己的词汇句型积累尽 量扬长避短，避难就易）。 III.三“连连”即连句成文。1.根据所列提纲，理清文章思；2. 重新排列组合句子，划分必要段落（一般分三段）；3.灵 活运用句式：长、短句，简单、复合句搭配运用。 IV.四“改改”即修改润色全文。1.通读全文，查看有无文不对 题，行文是否流畅，要点查缺补漏；2.细节查看:包括字母 书写是否规范清楚、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单 复数、主谓一致、冠词等。 Warm Reminding温馨提示 （If you can do like this ,you can get good grades in WRITING） 规范、漂亮整齐的书写会提分不少哦！ 开头和结尾句子要上保险哦！ （准确无误并一语中的） 文章分三段，阅卷轻松看！ 首段综述：开门见山，一两句话切入正题。 正文（主要内容）：层次性强，要有过度衔接词 ，最多展开三个方面，每个方面两句话，言简意 赅，精说少错。 结尾：紧扣主题，提炼升华，点明主题。 Homework : Write an essay about the topic.