1、Help the earth教案教案 Learning aims: Help students learn to write a good composition about helping the earth. Learning difficult points: Develop the studentswriting ability. Learning procedures: 1. Enjoy the beautiful song from Michael Jackson Earth song Ask some questions about this song . 2. Watch a
2、short video , students will discuss what problems our earth has. Talk about some pictures and summarize all kinds of pollutions in our life. 3. Students will discuss what we should do to solve these problems. 4. Discussion : How to write this composition. problem Structuresolution summary 5. Write b
3、y yourself.Ask one student to write on the blackboard ,then enjoy it and correct mistakes together. Connecting words: Illustration: I think, I believe, in my opinion Addition: firstly, secondly, then , besides , at last Contrast: however, but, on the other hand Summary: in short, in a word , so, the
4、refore 6.Groupwork. Discuss in groups and correct mistakes in the article. 评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。 1. fluency 流畅consecution 条理:(Yes or No) Beginning ()key sentences()linking word()ending() 2.Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelling mistakes() The number of grammar mistakes () Does he or shewrite good words or sentence?() 3.Others:_ 第一档： 13-15 分 符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。 第二档： 912 分 基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达 较清楚，语言有少量错误。 第三档： 4-8 分 部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达 不够清楚，语言有较多错误。 。 第四档：0-3 分不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚或照抄、拼凑几个词。 作者：_得分：_评价人:_ 7. Summary and homework
