1、译林版必修第一册 Unit4 单元写作训练 写作指导 本单元的写作任务是写一篇观点类文章。 在观点类文章中你应该清楚地向读者表达你对 某个特定主题的观点。写一篇好的观点类文章，应该注意以下几点： 1在第一段清楚地阐明你的观点； 2给出理由解释你的观点； 3在最后一段用不同的方式总结你的观点。 常用表达 1Recent research shows that. 2In my opinion，it is very. 3First，it is the easiest way to help. 4Secondly，it helps people with. 5Lastly，its a good ide
2、a to do. 6In a word，I strongly hold the view that. 假如你是李华， 你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论， 要求每个同学用 书信的形式投稿，发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。 1你的观点：青少年不应该整容； 2你的理由：对身体有害；分散学习的注意力；中学生过分注重外表不合适 注意： 1词数 80 左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 审题 写作要求是发表对“青少年是否应该整容” 的看法，写作时应注意下面几点： 1确定文体：这是一篇议论文。写作时注意议论文的写作特点。 2主体时态：文章应
3、以一般现在时为主。 3主体人称：由于是发表对某个问题的看法，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，引入主题：青少年不应该整容； 第二段：具体介绍自己的理由：1. 第三段：总结自己的观点。 核心词汇 1持有某种观点_ 2在乎_ 3集中精力于_ 4换句话说_ 5恢复正常生活_ 6远离_ 1.hold the view2care about 3 concentrate on 4 in other words5return to a normal life 6 keep away from 连词成句 1我坚持认为青少年不应该整容。 _ 2首先，青少年不应该太在乎自己的外表。
4、_ 3他应该集中精力于学习。 _ 4有些青少年做了整容手术，这阻止了他们回到正常的生活状态。 _ 1.I strongly believe that teenagers shouldnt have plastic surgery. 2.Firstly，a teenager should not care about his appearance too much. 3.He should concentrate on his lessons. 4.Some teenagers had plastic surgery and it stopped them from returning to a
5、 normal life. 句式升级 1用同位语从句改写第一句话。 _ 2用 not.but.把第二句和第三句连成一句话。 _ 3用定语从句改写第四句话。 _ 1.I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldnt have plastic surgery. 2.Firstly，a teenager should not care about his appearance too much，but concentrate on his lessons. 3.Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopp
6、ed them from returning to a normal life. 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇 80 词左右的英语 短文。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Dear Editor， Im Li Hua.Im writing to express my opinions about whether teenagers should have plastic surgery. I strongly hold the view that teenagers shouldnt have plastic surgery.Firstly，a tee
7、nager should not care about his appearance too much，but concentrate on his lessons.In other words，a teenager should improve himself by working hard.Secondly，a teenager is still growing and such surgery is likely to harm his health.Some teenagers had plastic surgery，which stopped them from returning to a normal life.Therefore，they regret having the surgery. In a word，a teenager should keep away from plastic surgery，read more books and lead a meaningful life. Yours， Li Hua
