1、译林版必修第一册 Unit3 单元写作训练 写作指导 本单元的写作任务是描述一下好的朋友应具备的品质。 写此类文章时, 我们可以通过以 下三个部分来写作: 第一部分:先总体介绍一个好的朋友应该是怎样的; 第二部分:然后再分别介绍一个好的朋友必须具备的几种品质; 第三部分:最后进行总结。 常用表达 1In my opinion,a good friend should be. 2From my point of view,a good friend is likely to. 3Being honest is the first factor that a good friend. 4Secon
2、dly,being generous is. 5Lastly,being helpful is as important as. 6Generally speaking,a good friend should have. 7In a word,a good friend should. 假如你是李华,你的同学 Lucy 发现被好朋友欺骗了,很是苦恼,不知道还该不该继续 她们的友谊。 于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友?”请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子 邮件。 1真正朋友的特点是: 2学着去了解别人,找到真正的好朋友; 3表达祝愿。 注意: 1词数 80 左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连
3、贯; 3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 审题 写作要求是说明真正的朋友应具备的品质,写作时应注意下面几点: 1确定文体:这是一封电子邮件。写作时应注意电子邮件的写作特点。 2主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。 3主体人称:由于是就对方的问题表达自己的看法,所以人称应该以第二人称和第三人称 为主。 谋篇 第一段:开门见山,引入主题:给对方提建议; 第二段:提出具体的建议; 第三段:表达祝福。 核心词汇 1做决定_ 2故意_ 3放手_ 4首先_ 5陷入麻烦_ 6陪伴某人_ 1.make a decision 2 on purpose 3 let go of4first of all 5 get
4、into trouble 6 keep pany 连词成句 1在做决定之前,你最好把事情想透彻。(时间状语从句) _- 2你的朋友真的是故意欺骗你。(on purpose) _- 3你该放手你们的友谊了。(Its time for sb.to do sth.) _- 4我希望你找到真正的好朋友,他/她也非常珍视你。(宾语从句) _- 1.Before you make a decision,youd better think the whole thing through. 2.Your friend really tricked you on purpose. 3.Its time for
5、you to let go of your friendship. 4.I hope that you will find a truly good friend and he/she will also value you very much. 句式升级 1把第一句话改为简单句。 _ 2把第二句和第三句连成一句话。 _ 3用定语从句改写第四句话。 _ 1.Before making a decision,youd better think the whole thing through. 2.If your friend really tricked you on purpose,its t
6、ime for you to let go of your friendship. 3.I hope that you will find a truly good friend,who will also value you very much. 用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇 80 词左右的英语 短文。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Dear Lucy, Im sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you.Id like to offer you some advice. Before ma
7、king a decision,youd better think the whole thing through.If your friend really tricked you on purpose, its time for you to let go of your friendship.First of all, a good friend is a person you can trust.Secondly,when you get into trouble,your friend will try to help you out.Thatis , agoodfriendshouldbehelpful.Thirdly , agoodfriendshouldbe understanding.Whenever you feel sad or lonely,he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company. I hope that you will find a truly good friend,who will also value you very much. Yours, Li Hua