1、高 中 英 语 写 作 系 列 建议信 谋/篇/布/局 01 Lead-in lead-in This is Laura. She is upset.Her parents protect her too much. She can hardly go out with friends. And her parents involves her life too much. She feels depressed. lead-in Do you have effective solutions ? 通过片段构架训练，引导学生构思出逻辑清晰 的段落结构。 通过对建议信整体谋篇布局的训练，引导学生
2、 言之有物、言之有理、言之有序。 Learning Objectives Self-study(独立构思） 假设你是Cynthia，你的听众朋友Laura写信告诉你她 的父母总是对她过度保护，使她失去了自我成长的空间。 请你给她写封信。内容包括： 1写信目的 2你的看法 3你的建议 01 Guidance and Exploration 审题 假设你是Cynthia，你的听众 朋友Laura写信告诉你她的父 母总是对她过度保护，使她失 去了自我成长的空间。请你给 她写封信。内容包括： 1写信目的 2你的建议 显性要点 1写信目的 2你的建议 隐性要点 安慰 祝福 片段构架写信目的你的建议祝福
3、表示理解 I understand your feelings. 表达安慰 Dont be unhappy. 我可以给你一些 建议 I can give you some advice. Reason. 头脑风暴 How can you help Laura? 建议1建议2 片段构架写信目的 与父母沟通，告知父母 你的想法。 建议1 告知父母你可以对自己负责。 建议2 tell your parents what you think about their protective behaviour. 建议1 show your parents how responsible you can b
4、e. 建议2 你的建议祝福 you fully understand their love for you, but explain the side effects of their overprotectiveness. Make it clear when you need their help and when you dont. For example. 片段构架写信目的你的建议 希望我的建议对你有帮助，祝你顺利练一手好字。 （首尾呼应） I hope my advice will be of some help to you and best wishes.（首尾呼应） 祝福 总结
5、 I understand your feelings. Dont be unhappy+原因.I can give you some advice. 建议1：tell your parents what you think about their protective behaviour.+想法：you fully understand their love for you, but explain the side effects of their overprotectiveness. 建议2：show your parents how responsible you can be+如
6、何做：Make it clear when you need their help and when you dont.+举例 Offer advice End the letter with positive message I hope my advice will be of some help to you and best wishes. 思考探究-如何连篇成文？ 写作常用句型 I want to give you some advice. Here are my suggestions. It is important to I advise/suggest that. I hop
7、e you can find the suggestions useful. Look forward to your improvement. If you have other questions, please contact me. 如何提升作文的格调， 这些句型是关键。 如何把普通句型变成亮 点句？ 亮点句1 I am writing to give you some advice. I am writing to help you work out your problems. I am writing to offer some advice, so as to help you
8、 work out your problems. offer I want to give you some advice. 亮点句1 如何表达乐意？ I feel delighted to offer some advice, so as to help you work out your problems. I want to give you some advice. 亮点句2 The following are my suggestions. My suggestions are as follows. My suggestions are listed as follows. Her
9、e are my suggestions. 亮点句3 如何表达重要？ It is of great importance / significance that. 如何表达必要？ It is of great necessity that. It is important to 亮点句4 如何表达好主意？ It is a good idea to do. In my opinion/As far as Im concerned/ From my point of view/Personally, it would be wise of you to do. It is a good idea.
10、 亮点句4 In my opinion/As far as Im concerned/ From my point of view/Personally, it would be wise of you to do. 亮点句5 I suggest that. 如何表达我建议？ I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that It is suggested that If I were you, I would . 亮点句6 如何表达希望建议有用？ I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. I would
11、appreciate it if you find these suggestions helpful/useful/practical. I hope the suggestions will be useful. 亮点句6 如何表达希望采纳建议？ I will appreciate it if you take the suggestions into consideration/account. I hope you can adopt my advice. 亮点句6 如何表达期待提高？ Im sure you can solve your problem before long. I
12、will be more than glad to see your improvement in . I hope you can make progress. 亮点句7 如何表达有其他问题，及时联系? If you have any further questions, please dont hesitate to ask me. If you have other questions, please contact me. 独立写作 I understand your feelings. Dont be unhappy+原因.I can give you some advice. 建议
13、1：tell your parents what you think about their protective behaviour.+想法：you fully understand their love for you, but explain the side effects of their overprotectiveness. 建议2：show your parents how responsible you can be+如 何做：Make it clear when you need their help and when you dont.+举例 Offer advice E
14、nd the letter with positive message I hope my advice will be of some help to you and best wishes. 目标升华 . Show us your work 目标升华 Dear Laura, I understand your feelings. Sometimes parents can become overprotective after all, it is their job to protect their child from harm. But dont be unhappy. I am w
15、riting to offer offer some advice, so as to help you work out your problems. First,if I were you, I would tell your parents what you think about their protective behaviour.Tell them you fully understand their love for you, but explain the side effects of their overprotectiveness. They may change the
16、ir mind after they learn about your feelings. Second, It is a good idea to show your parents how responsible you can be. Make it clear when you need their help and when you dont. For example, tell them that they need not worry about you when you go out with friends during the daytime. But if you want to go out in the evening, assure them that you will be home before 9 oclock. I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. I wish you all the best. Yours Cynthia 01 Homework uReview whats been learnt in class. uWrite a letter of advice to Simon in the name of Cynthia.
