1、北京市部分区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题分类汇编书面表达书面表达专题专题北京市东城区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题六、书面表达六、书面表达(15 分分)61.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 在邮件中询问你的高中生活。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1. 你遇到的挑战；2. 你为此所做的努力。注意：1. 词数不少于 50：2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim._Yours,Li Hua北京市房山区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题51.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Peter 来信询问你高
2、一学校生活的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你的学校生活；2.你的感受；3.询问他的情况。注意：1.词数不少于 50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua北京市丰台区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题六、书面表达（共六、书面表达（共 25 分）分）56.根据短文内容以及写作要求进行故事续写。 请写出一篇连贯完整的短文。 词数不少于 60。开头已给出。The big day had finally arrived. I had won the local speech contest (比赛), representingMadi
3、son Middle School. Here it was the state competition. I waited backstage for the host toannounce My name.Even though I had practiced much, I was extremely nervous. My heart was thumping, mypalms were sweating, and my mouth was dry. “Calm down,” I told myself. Still, picturing anaudience of teachers,
4、 parents and classmates made me want to disappear totally.Mr. Patrick, who taught me to give speeches, reminded me, “Youll do great. Youre prepared.Youve come this far.”Mr. Patrick was right. I was ready for this, and besides, I won first place in the earliercontests. Yet, when I pictured all eyes o
5、n me waiting for me to mess up, my heart was graduallysinking into my stomach.“You cant back out now” I told myself as Mr. Nichols, the host, announced my name and the titleof my speech, “My Hero.”请你写出接下来主人公演讲的过程，以及演讲结束后激动的心情。The big moment came._北京市密云区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题第二部分：书面表达（共第二部分：书面表达（
6、共 20 分）分）56.根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下提示给他回信。1. take a Chinese course2. learn and sing Chinese songs.注意：1.词数不少于 60。2.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._Looking forward to hearin
7、g from you soon!Yours,Li Hua北京市平谷区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题第五部分第五部分 书面表达书面表达(共共 1 小题，共小题，共 20 分分)81.根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文，词数不少于 60。中国有多个传统节日，假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，挑选一个传统节日介绍给你的英国笔友 Tom，并欢迎他来中国参加庆祝活动。提示:可以适当增加细节，作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。NameTimeActivitiesthe Lantern Festivalon the 15th day of the firstlunar
8、 monthgo to the temple fair eat stickyrice balls the Dragon Boat Festivalon the 5th day of the fifthlunar monthtake part in the dragon boatrace eat zongzithe Mid-Autumn Festivalon the 15th day of the eighthlunar monthenjoy the full moon eat mooncakesDear Tom,I am glad to know that you are interested
9、 in Chinese traditional culture from your letter._Yours,Li Hua参考答案北京市东城区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题【答案】Possible version 1:Dear Jim,It is great to hear from you. You asked me about my life in high school. Here is myexperience.Going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challeng
10、e. The biggest oneis finding time for both studies and extra-curricular activities. There are so many clubs in my newschool. To make more friends, I joined some. But soon I found the club activities took too much ofmy time and I had little time for my study. I felt anxious so I asked my teacher for
11、help. Shesuggested that I should join one or two clubs suitable for me and make a workable schedule. I tookher advice and now I have no trouble keeping up with my classmates. Now I feel great aboutmyself.How is your school life? Write to me.Yours,Li HuaPossible version 2:Dear Jim,Its great to hear f
12、rom you. You asked me about my life in high school. Im happy to sharemy experience with you.There are many after-school activities in my school. I am out-going and want to make morefriends in this new school, so I joined some clubs. However, club activities took much of my timeand I hardly had time
13、to finish homework or review lessons. I felt anxious.To solve this problem, I talked with my teacher. She suggested that I should choose one ortwo clubs that I liked best and spend more time on study. I took her advice and concentrated onmy study when I didnt need to go to clubs. Soon, I made progre
14、ss. Now, I feel confident againand I know how to make good use of my time.How is your school life now? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 在邮件中询问你的高中生活。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1. 你遇到的挑战；2. 你为此所做的努力。第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组） ：hear from
15、(收到来信)；junior high school (初中)；bothand (两者都)；extra-curricular activities(课外活动)；asked for help (寻求帮助)等。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。第 4 步： 连句成文， 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡， 书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式， 如 Here is my experience.运用倒装句； She sugges
16、ted that I should join one or two clubssuitable for me and make a workable schedule.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。北京市房山区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题【答案】Dear Peter,Im very pleased to tell you how I get along with my high school as you want to learn about it.It is goi
17、ng really well.Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us theall-round development.Apart from the excellent teachers, the public transportation is alsoconvenient. Our school life is busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school that weall enjoy
18、taking part in. I have made many new friends and we often help and learn from eachother.What about you? May your school life be filled with achievements and happiness.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Peter 来信询问你高一学校生活的情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你的学校生活；2.你的感受
19、；3.询问他的情况。第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组） ，如：pleased to tell you（高兴地告诉你） ；goingreally well（真的变好） ；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood（位于一个美丽而安静的社区） ；Apart from the excellent teachers（除了一些优秀的老师之外） ；等。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第 4 步： 连句成文， 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡， 书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛
20、】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。Im very pleased to tell you how I getalong with my high school as you want to learn about it.句中 how 引导宾语从句， as 引导原因状语从句；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, my school is an ideal place to get us theall-round development.此处过去分词作原
21、因状语。北京市丰台区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题【答案】The big moment came. I stepped onto the stage, took a deep breath and began to speak.Gradually with great eagerness to do well in the speech contest, I was completely focused on thecontents. The optimism and persistence delivered in my speech on “My Hero, Nick
22、” had inspiredthe judges and audience a lot. They were moved with tears rolling in their eyes.My efforts undoubtedly paid off. I was awarded “the outstanding speaker”. Holding thecertificate, I swelled with pride and a sense of achievement. When I was standing excitedly on thestage, pictures of my t
23、eacher helping and encouraging me flashed into my mind. The victory andhonor belonged to both of us.The past contest witnessed my growth. It is not only my enthusiasm but also my belief inmyself that impresses others.(138w)【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。 根据故事内容写出接下来主人公演讲的过程， 以及演讲结束后激动的心情。【详解】续写是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生
24、既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式， 同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了作者代表学校参加演讲比赛的经历及当时的心情。第一步： 确定内容： 续写部分开头是： 这一伟大的时刻来临了， 接下来应该是写演讲的过程，以及演讲结束后激动的心情。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段
25、落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，演讲当时的经历；第二段，演讲的结果；第三段，总结及感想。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语： take a deep breath；do well in；focus on；pay off；sense ofachievement；belong to 等。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接；注意书写，保持卷面整洁。【点睛】 本文描写详略得当， 使用了一些高级词汇， 如： step; eagerness; optimism; persistence;undoubtedly; flash等高级词汇； 以及一些高级句式：Holding the cer
26、tificate, I swelled with prideand a sense of achievement. 使用了现在分词作状语； When I was standing excitedly on the stage,pictures of my teacher helping and encouraging me flashed into my mind. 使用了when引导的时间状语从句；It is not only my enthusiasm but also my belief in myself that impresses others.使用了强调句。北京市密云区 2019
27、-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题【答案】Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are afew suggestions:First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher andpractice with your fellow students. Then, it should be a good
28、 idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll 1earn and remember Chinese words more easily. Besides, it helps towatch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. You can alsomake more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you l
29、earn Chinese.I hope youll find my suggestions helpful. Try to write me in Chinese next time. Lookingforward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，回复英国朋友 Peter 关于如何才能学好中文的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文；人称：第一、三人称为主；时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；结构：总-分-总法；要点：1. take a Chinese course2. learn and s
30、ing Chinese songs 等第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）ask for； learn well； take a Chinese course； a few； be able to； learn from； fellow students； Chinesesongs；watch TV；read books；make friends；a lot；next time；look forward to 等第三步：连词成句1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.2. I
31、t is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practicewith your fellow students.3. It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll 1earn andremember Chinese words more easily.4. It helps to watch TV and read books, newspap
32、ers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.5. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.6. I hope youll find my suggestions helpful.7. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.等根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First；Then；2.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；also；3.表因果关
33、系：as 等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Im glad to receive your letter askingfor my advice on how to learn Chinese well. 使用了现在分词作状语；it is important to take aChinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and prac
34、tice with your fellow students.使用了 it 作形式主语和 as 引导状语从句；it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinesesongs, because by doing so youll 1earn and remember Chinese words more easily.使用了 it 作形式主语和 because 引导状语从句；it helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers andmagazines in Chinese whenever possibl
35、e.使用了 it 作形式主语和 whatever 引导的状语从句；They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.使用了 and 连接的并列句； I hopeyoull find my suggestions helpful.使用了 find+宾语+宾语结构等。 还使用了一些固定短语， 如：ask for；learn well；a few；be able to；learn from；make friends；a lot；look forward to 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外
36、，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。北京市平谷区 2019-2020 学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题【答案】Dear Tom,I am glad to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture from your letter. Youknow the Lantern Festival is around the corner. So, now I am very happy to tell you somethingabout it.The Lantern Festival is on the
37、 15th day of the first lunar month, which is highly valued byevery Chinese family. On that day, people can do all kinds of interesting things to celebrate it.First, people will prepare some lanterns and lantern riddles for the purpose of guessinggamesWhat makes it more attractive is that the winners
38、 will also get some amazing gifts byguessing riddles correctly. Second, its a wonderful thing for people to be back together withfamilies. People usually celebrate it by eating sticky rice balls and having a family gathering. Afterthat, people will go to temple fairs where they can experienceChinese
39、 traditional culture.Besides, people can taste delicious traditional snacks from all over the country.All in all, it is afantastic thing to celebrate the Lantern Festival.Although some of the original customs havechanged, the spirit of the festival has largely been kept.Im looking forward to your co
40、ming to join us to celebrate the wonderful Lantern Festival.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给你的英国笔友 Tom 写信介绍中国的一个传统节日并欢迎他来中国参加庆祝活动。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据写作提要，要求以李华的名义给你的英国笔友 Tom 写信介绍中国的一个传统节日并欢迎他来中国参加庆祝活动。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体， 故需要准确表
41、达。 写作时注意准确运用时态， 上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系， 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：around the corner，for the purpose of， attractive， wonderful， celebrate ，have a family gathering， fantasticthing ，original customs，s
42、pirit 。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/SecondAndthen, Finally, In the end,At last， Above all。 2.表并列补充关系： What is more, Besides, Moreover,Furthermore, In addition,As well as, not onlybut (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符
43、合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：The Lantern Festival is on the 15th dayof the first lunar month, which is highly valued by every Chinese family. 这句话运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。What makes it more attractive is that the winners will also get someamazing gifts by guessing riddles correctly. 这句话运用了 what 引导的主语从句和 that 引导的表语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：around the corner， for the purpose of 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
