1、应用文写作之求助信【要点梳理】【要点梳理】一、一、求助求助信高考选取概率信高考选取概率二、二、求助求助信题型分析信题型分析三、三、求助求助信关联词汇和短语信关联词汇和短语四、四、求助求助信锦句信锦句五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例）六、六、求助信写作建议求助信写作建议七、求助七、求助信模板推荐信模板推荐八八、求助信求助信巩固练习巩固练习一、一、求助求助信高考选取概率信高考选取概率应用文体裁被高考选中的概率排列顺序如下：书信（各种信件及电子邮件）、通知、演讲稿、报道等。以下是最近几年高考卷选取的求助信例子：2016全国卷I：假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外
2、贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2013新课标全国卷II：假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1. 外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。 一、一、求助求助信高考选取概率信高考选取概率2011全国卷I：假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望
3、得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容；3. 约定时间；4. 你的联系方式（Email: ; Phone: 12345678）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。2007全国卷I：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友，具体条件包括：1. 年龄； 2. 性别；3. 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文
4、连贯。 二、二、求助求助信题型分析信题型分析Brainstorming 1. How many paragraphs? 2. What will you write in each paragraph? 3. What tense and person will you use? 4. Useful words, phrases and sentence patterns? 二、二、求助求助信题型分析信题型分析题型分析 题型解读人称时态要点结构图开头点题（说明写信目的）交代求助的背景及写信的目的求助信是写信人向收信人寻求帮助或建议的信件，此类信件往往需要写信人介绍自己并描述具体的请求内容，在提
5、供足够信息的同时尽量做到简明扼要，语气要委婉真诚，最后要表达诚挚的谢意。第一人称（I We ）第二人称（You）一般现在时为主（叙述得到帮助后自己有可能产生的变化时要用一般将来时）主体段落（要点一个也不能少，可适当拓展）详细描述求助的内容（有时题目会要求告知联系方式）尾段（表达感谢）表达希望得到对方的帮助并致谢三、三、求助求助信关联词汇和短语信关联词汇和短语1. adj. 焦虑的 _2. n. 指导 _3. n. & v. 困扰；烦扰 _4. n. & v. 麻烦 _5. adj. 困惑的 _6. adj. 令人困惑的 _7. n. 困难 _8. adj. 不安的 _9. adj. 感激的 _
6、10. v. 感激；欣赏 _anxiousinstruction / guidancebothertroubleconfusedconfusingdifficultyupsetgrateful / thankful / appreciativeappreciate三、三、求助求助信关联词汇和短语信关联词汇和短语11. (做)某事有困难 _12. 设法(成功)做某事 _13. 请某人帮忙 _14. 帮某人一个忙 _15. 遇到几个问题 _have difficulty/trouble/problems (in) doing sthmanage to do sth / succeed in doi
7、ng sthask sb a favour / ask sb for helpdo sb a favour / lend sb a handencounter some problems / meet with some problems三、三、求助求助信关联词汇和短语信关联词汇和短语16. 面临这些问题 _17. 因某事感激某人 _18. 提供一些有建设性的指导 _19. 灰心，气馁 _20. 向某人求助 _(be) faced with these problemsbe grateful to sb. for sthoffer some constructive guidancelose
8、heartturn to sb (for help)四、四、求助求助信锦句信锦句1. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。 _2. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。 _3. 我想知道我是否能问您一些与相关的话题。 _4. 我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面另一方面 _5. 我在.方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。 _Im writing (to you) to ask whether you could do me a favour. Im sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need
9、your help.I am wondering if I could ask you some questions regarding .I find my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, . For another .I have some difficulty in ., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.四、四、求助求助信锦句信锦句6. 由于我是一个新手，我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。 _7. 面
10、对那么多的问题，我感到担心，希望你能帮助我。 _8. 我渴望得到你及时的帮助。 _9. 我肯定/相信在你的帮助下我能在.方面取得进步。 _10. 对于你提出的建议我将不胜感激。 _Hardly do I have any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand. Faced with those problems, I feel very anxious and I hope that you will be kind enough to help me.Im eager to
11、 get your timely help. / Im eager for your timely help.Im sure/convinced that with your help I can make great progress in .I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和
12、格式（format）。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（一）审题立意1. 文体：求助信2. 主题：请求帮助3. 要点：说明兼职意向+请求帮忙修改4. 要求：词数100左右，增加细节以使文章充实、连贯5. 人称：第一、第二人称为主6. 时态：一般现在时为主五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（二）技巧点拨1. 本试题并
13、非提纲作文，首先需要理清写作思路，总结要点内容，从而整理作文框架结巧；2. 适时地采用丰富的时态、语态以及复杂句型表达；3. 注意语句间的衔接适当使用过渡性词语或独立结构。五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（三）要点整合1. 铺垫陈述：为了获得假兼职的机会，需要写申请书和个人简历；2. 碰到问题：第一次写申请书和个人简历，对文字和格式不
14、太了解；3. 请求帮忙：提出让对方帮忙检查修改申请书和个人简历，自己将不胜感激。五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（四）框架构建第一段：自我介绍，开门见山。提出写信目的：寻求对方的帮助。第二段：简要间述想要得到兼取的机会，井写好了申请书和个人简历，顺着话题，提出构建拿不准申请书和个人简历的文字和格式是否正确，希望对方能够帮忙检查修改。第
15、三段：提前感谢对方的帮助。五、五、求助求助信示例分析（以信示例分析（以2016全国卷全国卷I为例）为例） （五）满分范文Dear Ms Jenkins, Im Li Hua, a student from your English writing class. Im writing to ask for your help. In order to get some practical experience, Im planning to apply for a part-time job at a famous foreign company during the summer vacati
16、on, which I think will completed my application letter and resume. However, as this is the first time prepare these. Im not quite sure of the language and format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could spare some time to gothrough them and make necessary
17、changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the letter. Thanks in advance for your help. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua六、求助信写作建议六、求助信写作建议 在熟知体裁规范的前提下，1. 抓住所给要点，把所有要点用规范地道的语言表达出来，切忌汉语式英语。要点顺序可按照行文需要作出调整，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，所提示的英语词汇一定要出现在作文中。2. 行文要语篇连贯。所有要点内容要用适当的词、短语或句
18、子恰到好处地过渡、衔接起来以使文章流畅、连贯、优美。3. 语言要简明扼要。不使用生僻的单词，也不使用结构过于复杂的长句。字数应该控制在规定字数的+15%。六、求助信写作建议六、求助信写作建议 （一）首段：问候+自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的1. Im writing to ask for some help. 2. Im writing to ask whether you can give me help. 3. Im writing to ask you a favor. / I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 4. Now I wonder
19、whether I could ask you a favor. 5. I am wondering whether you could . 6. Im afraid that I have to seek help from you. 7. What bothers me is that I dont know what to do. 8. Im eager to get your timely help. / Im eager for your timely help. 9. Facing so many difficulties / Faced with so many difficul
20、ties, I have to turn to you for help. 六、求助信写作建议六、求助信写作建议 （二）中间：讲述自己遇到的困难，再提出请求1. But I have met some difficulties with . / in doing . 2. But unfortunately, Im facing difficulty in . 3. Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. 4. I need your help because . 5. I dont fe
21、el quite accustomed to the life here. 我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。6. I long to learn English well, but I dont know how, which makes me upset. 我渴望学好英语，但我不知道怎么学，这使我很烦恼。7. I cant concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。六、求助信写作建议六、求助信
22、写作建议 （二）中间：讲述自己遇到的困难，再提出请求8. With too much homework to do, I have no time to do some sports. 有如此多的作业要做我都没有时间做运动。9. I dont know if there is anything to pay attention to, as this is the first time that I have written an application and personal resume. 我不知道是否有一些要注意的地方，因为这是第一次写申请和个人简历。10. But unfortuna
23、tely, I encounter some difficulty in preparing the English competition. 不幸的是，我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。11. Not only do I have some difficulty in reading but also I am poor at writing. 不仅在阅读而且在写作方面也有问题。12. So difficult is the situation that I dont know how to face it. 情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。六、求助信写作建议六、求助信写作建
24、议 （三）结尾：诚恳地提出希望，表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢1. Im looking forward to your early reply. 2. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. 3. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor. 4. Could you please help me to solve these problems? 5. Im sure I can make great progress with your help. 6. Looki
25、ng forward to/Hoping for your early reply.7. Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.8. I will be very grateful if you could help me . / I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.9. I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help. 10. I believe I will benef
26、it a lot from your valuable and timely advice. 11. Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.七、求助信模板推荐七、求助信模板推荐 【模板一】Dear _, My name is _; I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour. (说明自己身份，提出写信目的). I have had much difficulty
27、/ trouble in _(交代自己面临的困难). The reason for _ is that _ (给出原因). Besides, Im very upset that _ (进一步说明自己的困境). In the meantime / At the same time, I beg you to _ so that (再次请求对方的帮助). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. I would appreciate if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to a
28、favorable reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、求助信模板推荐七、求助信模板推荐 【模板二】Dear _, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I have some difficulty in (某方面的困难), which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help . To begin with, I have great difficulty in (困难1). Besides, I find it too cha
29、llengingfor me to (困难2) Whats more, (困难3) is also a big headache for me. Finally, it has been troubling me for a long time that I have no idea how to (困难4). Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to . so that . ?(请求一）In the meanwhile, I beg you to . (请求二）Als
30、o, I would like you to . (请求三） I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward for your early reply. Yours, Li Hua八、八、求助信求助信巩固练习巩固练习 假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。（一）细节构思：1. Im not good at English.2. Im not good at remembering English words.3.
31、I dont know how to use English words properly.4. Im afraid to talk to foreigners in English.5. My listening skill is very poor.6. I feel difficult to understand English grammar.7. My English exam results are not good.8. I hope you can help me.9. Thank you very much for your help.八、八、求助信求助信巩固练习巩固练习 假
32、定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。（二）句式提升：1. I find it difficult/challenging/demanding to learn English well. So Im writing to ask you for help.2. I find it really a challenge/headache for me to learn English well. So Id like to turn to for help and guidance.3. These
33、 days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly need your help.4. Faced with the challenge of learning English well, Im writing for your generous help and assistance.5. I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited vocabulary. 八、八、求助信求助信巩固练习巩
34、固练习 假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。（二）句式提升：6. I often fail to manage the proper use of English words, putting me in an embarrassing situation.7. Though having learned English for years, I find communicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache t
35、o me.8. I really have no idea how to improve my listening skills.9. What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.10. I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance.八、八、求助信求助信巩固练习
36、巩固练习 假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。（二）句式提升：11. I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand and Im looking forward to your earliest reply. 12. I would highly appreciate your timely/prompt reply. / Your timely/prompt reply would be highly appreciated.八、八、求助信
37、求助信巩固练习巩固练习 （三）组句成篇：例文1：Dear Alex, Hows everything going? These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly need your help. I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited vocabulary. Though having learned English for years, I find that comm
38、unicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache to me. And what troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work. I would be grateful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance. Yours, Li Hua八、八、求助信求助信巩固练习巩固练习 （三）
39、组句成篇：例文2： Dear Alex, With the college entrance examination approaching, my anxiety about the English learning is increasing, so I am writing to seek some guidance on how to improve it. English writing is really a big challenge for me. First of all, my vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossib
40、le for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases. Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one. Should you be kind enough to give me any help, I would be grateful to you. Yours, Li
41、 Hua 求求 助助 信（信（1）什什 么么 是是 求求 助助 信？信？332. 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习，七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛（ speech contest），你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件。1. 假定你是李华，上网时有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语，因此发帖向在线外籍教师 Peter 寻求帮助。3. 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中 心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信。有困难，求助344
42、. 假定你是李华。校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔友Jimmy 写一封 email 求助，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用。5. 假设你是李华, 于2018年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后, 发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信, 请他们帮你寻找。请求帮忙6. 假定你是李华，你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校的“英语文化节”话剧比赛。你给度假中的外教 Mr. Smith 写一封电子邮件，并附上节目录像，请他给予相
43、关的指导。课课 堂堂 例例 题题36课课 堂堂 例例 题题 假定你是李华，上网时有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语，因此发帖向在线外籍教师 Peter 寻求帮助。要点包括：1. 自我介绍（姓名、身份及年级）；2. 英语学习情况、困难及感受；3. 请求给予帮助。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。37例例 题题 范范 文文Dear Peter, Im Li Hua, a senior student from China. Im more than delighted to find that some foreign teachers help students w
44、ith oral English online along with your contact information. So I cant wait to post this message to you. What upsets me is that I feel nervous to communicate with others in English, although I have learned English for many years. Whats worse, I always find it challenging to listen to native speakers
45、 clearly. Thats why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua第一段：自我介绍（问候语）+背景句+目的句第二段：具体困难+感受第三段：期待回复，表达感激38词词 汇汇 积积 累累 Im more than delighted 我非常开心。迫不及待做某事I cant wait to do帮我一个忙do me a favor第一段：自我介绍（问候语）第一段：自我介绍（问候语）+背景句背景句+目的句
46、目的句39自我介绍Im Li Hua, a student 问 候 语Time flies! How is everything going with you?Its been half a year since we last met. / . How is everything going with you?第一段：自我介绍（问候语）第一段：自我介绍（问候语）+背景句背景句+目的句目的句40遇到困难have met with difficulty in sth / in doing sth ; be faced with some challenges in sth / in doing
47、sth ; have encountered some trouble in sth / in doing sth 第一段：自我介绍（问候语）第一段：自我介绍（问候语）+背景句背景句+目的句目的句41目的句：请求帮助turn to sb for help ask for a helping handIm writing to 第二段：具体的困难第二段：具体的困难+感受感受42句式 1我认为做某事对我来说比较困难，这让我很沮丧。I find / consider it difficult / hard / challenging for me to do sth, which makes me
48、extremely depressed.描述消极感受的形容词：upset, annoyed, confused, sad, disappointed, anxious, nervous第二段：具体的困难第二段：具体的困难+感受感受43句式 2让我烦恼的事情是What upsets me is that +从句（描述具体的困难）描述消极感受的动词：trouble, upset, annoy, confuse, disappoint, depress第二段：具体的困难第二段：具体的困难+感受感受44句式 3我在做某事方面有一些困难。I have some challenges / trouble
49、/ difficulties in (doing sth )第二段：具体的困难第二段：具体的困难+感受感受45句式 4：有一些困难阻止我做There are some challenges preventing(阻止) / stopping / deterring(阻止) me from doing sth (learning more and better). 句式 5 做方面有些障碍There are some barriers(挫折/障碍）in (doing) sth.练习：场景构建练习：场景构建46根据下列场景，用学过的句型描述你的困难和感受。学习英语很多年，口语不好。47句式 1：我
50、急需你在某方面给我一些专业的指导和建议, 以便于解决我的问题。 I am in great need of your professional guidance and advice in sth / in doing sth.第二段：表达求助第二段：表达求助48第二段：表达求助第二段：表达求助句式 2：不知道您能否给我一些有关的建议么？Will you please give me some advice in sth / doing sth?49第二段：表达求助第二段：表达求助句式 3：非常感谢你的意见和建议。Any advice from you would be highly appr
