1、Describe a place that you likeUse what you have learnt in this unit to describe an interesting, exciting, or surprising place.writing 如何描述你喜欢的地方A.描述一个漂亮或者特殊的地方总体上属于介绍事物的说明文。它的要点内容可包括:地理位置、面积、人口、气候状况、著名的景点以及与众不同之处等。B.写说明文,时态应以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。题型解读writing 写作攻略 开头:介绍该地方的基本信息(位置，面积等); 主体:描述该地方的一些具体信息(著名的
2、景点，与众不同之处); 结尾:作者对此地点的感受或希望。1.基本框架 介绍事物的说明文，以说明事实为准，写说明文，时态以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。2.写作特点 注意内容要符合事实，避免全篇都在写自我感受。3.注意事项writing 重点词汇外观类形容词外观类形容词: beautiful; rolling; clean; blue; green;large; small; huge; smooth; crowded感受类形容词感受类形容词: peaceful; quiet; delicious; comfortable;cool; impressive; exciting; friendl
3、y特征形容词特征形容词: famous; unique; industrial; extraordinary; alive; wonderful; naturalwriting 重点词汇位置关系位置关系:located; situated; in front of; opposite; behind; in the south of; on the left; on the other side of自然名词自然名词: landscape; sweet scent; fresh flowers;scenery; resort; grassland; river; stream人文名词人文名词:
4、 sense; chance; history; tradition; structure; centre; business; gardens; shopping mallswriting 重点词汇常用动词常用动词: impress; excite; inspire; offer; greet; develop; experience; relax; enjoy; sense; hear; see; feel; smell; taste; look; touch程度副词程度副词: significantly; especially; always; seldom;frequently其他其他
5、: have a great influence on; have a long history of;dotted with; have a chance of; a feast for the eyeswriting 常用句型 It lies/ is situated/ is located in/ on/ at. It is surrounded by/ with . It lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of/between/among It stands at the foot of/on the top of.writing 主语+
6、covers/takes up a total area of .square kilometres/ metres with a population of . ( with结构作定语) 主语+has a population of. 主语+is a city with a population of.常用句型writing It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, sunny, rainy.) lts like spring all the year round. People in . can enjoy typical tropical climat
7、e( 典型的热带气候 ) all year round, so many tourists come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery and hot weather. The average temperature ranges between 23 and 39 常用句型writing 常用句型历史: 主语+ have a history of . It is an ancient town with a long history and attractive scenery.特色: It is known/ famous as/for. It is
8、rich in. 其他: It is not surprising that . It is worth doing . What impressed me most is . have made great progress in.writing 介绍该地的地理位置、面积、人口等基本信息;介绍该地的气候情况;介绍该地的著名景点及独特之处;表达情感、寄予希望。写作模板Located in., my hometown.is a place, province.) with a history of.lies in the southwest of. It covers/has a total a
9、rea of 12740 square kilometres with a population of 70000. It is warm (dry, cold, sunny, rainy.) Because. is famous/well-known for., the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery. Besides, the special character of . is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. More
10、importantly, it has many world-famous places of interest, such as. and. I love my hometown.If you have a chance, I hope you can come here. writing 假如你是南京某校的高三学生李华，你们学校将举办一个演讲比赛，题目为“介绍自己的家乡”，请你写一篇演讲稿介绍自己的家乡。_典例分析第一步审题谋篇审题审题本文是一个演讲稿，题目是介绍自己的家乡，但是已经给出了李华为南京学生，所以介绍的地点已经明确，属于对一个地方的描述。1.确定文体：这是一篇介绍南京的演讲稿。
11、确定文体：这是一篇介绍南京的演讲稿。2.主体时态、人称：文章应以一般现在时及第三人称为主。主体时态、人称：文章应以一般现在时及第三人称为主。3.主要内容：主要内容：介绍南京的地理位置、面积、人口等基本信息; 介绍南京的气候情况; 介绍该地的著名景点及独特之处; 表达情感、寄予希望。核心词汇核心词汇1.位置位置2.面积面积3.人口人口4.景点及独特之处景点及独特之处5.历史文化历史文化6.情感、情感、希望希望lies/is situated/ is located in.has a population of. be known/ famous as/for .have a history of
12、 .I love ./I hope . 第二步遣词造句covers/takes up a total area of .Ladies and gentlemen, good morning! My name is Li Hua, and I am a student in Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, located in the southeast of China. It covers an area of 6,587 square kilometres with a population of about 8 million
13、. The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty. It is so rich in places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City that attracts a large number of tourists fr
14、om home and abroad. Besides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. Most importantly, people can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily.I love my hometown Nanjing. I
15、f you have a chance, I hope you can come here.writing 文章涵盖了题目中所要求的内容，结构条理清楚，段落分配合理。:点明了演讲的主题，介绍了南京的地理位置、面积、人口、气候和历史背景等内容，同时也介绍了几个著名的旅游景点并描述了现代南京的发展情况。:表达自己对家乡的喜爱，并发出邀请。典例分析结构点评writing 文中 besides,most importantly 等连接词汇的使用使文章衔接紧密，逻辑清晰。文中多处使用了复杂的句式，如“.I am a student in Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, located in the southeast of China.”(非谓语动词)，“The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty.”(非限制性定语从句)等。典例分析语言点评homeworkDraft a passage about one of your favourite places.
