1、Ding yong hua October 31 2007Lets Make English Writing Easy!Dont be shy,just try.I enjoy losing face.I enjoy being laughed at.I enjoy being made fun of.I enjoy making mistakes.I enjoy learning from mistakes!The more mistakes I make,the more progress I make!Try to make as many mistakes as possible!Tr
2、y to lose face as much as possible!Try to make people laugh as much as possible!Try to make progress as much as possible!Start to make mistakes and lose face today!Dont be shy,just try!.We can make the sentences longer!1.Its a book.It an interesting book.Its an interesting book about Henry Potter.It
3、s the most interesting Henry Potter book I have ever read!The book about Henry Potter is so interesting that I want to read it again.Its your turn:He is a boy.This is a school.*Adjectives are magic words.2.Liu Xiang can run.He can run very fast.He runs as fast as he can.He runs fastest in the world.
4、He ran so fast that he won the gold medal in Athens Olympic Games.Its your turn:It is raining.He does his homework.*Adverbs are magic words,too.*The more elements a sentence contains,the longer the sentence will be,and of course,the more beautiful the sentence will be.3.I saw a film.I saw an interes
5、ting American film with my friend at Rose Garden Cinema after I had dinner.Its your turn:My father bought a bike.We will have a picnic.We can make the sentences more beautiful!1.The book is interestingHow interesting the book is!What an interesting book it is!It is fun to have a picnic in spring.Wha
6、t fun it is to have a picnic in spring!*陈述句可以陈述句可以改成感叹句改成感叹句.Time flies fast.Our school is beautiful.It is nice to see you again.简单句可简单句可以改成复以改成复合句合句2.He is an honest boy.He is a boy who is honest.He is a boy who never tells a lie.He is so honest that everyone wants to make friends with him.He went
7、to bed.(after,when,not until)He can sing and dance.(not only,but also as well as)We will have a picnic.(if)We are studying hard.(so that)I like spring.(because)3.Miss Qin loves us and we love her,too.Miss Wang loves us and she is loved by us,as well.We can see many flowers in our school.Many flowers
8、 can be seen in our school.You help others.Others will help you.Today you help others,you will be helped tomorrow.主动语态可以改成被动语态主动语态可以改成被动语态.They will build a new bridge over the HuangPu River.We must do something to protect the earth.III.We can make the beginning more attractive!Trees A:Trees are imp
9、ortant.B:What makes air around us cleaner and fresher?What makes our environment more beautiful?Trees!运用设问句运用设问句.Books are important.Friends are important in our life.WaterA:Water is important.B:Can you imagine a world without water?运用反问句运用反问句.Our schoolA:Our school is beautiful.B:Our school is a be
10、autiful garden!Our school is a warm family!Our school is a world of knowledge!Our school is a palace full of dreams!运用运用比喻比喻句句Without hard work,a dream is just like a cloud in the air that you never can reach.Life is like a mirror.A good teacher is like a candle-It consumes itself to light the way t
11、o others.生活就像一面镜子生活就像一面镜子老师就像蜡烛，燃烧了自己，照亮了别人老师就像蜡烛，燃烧了自己，照亮了别人不付出努力，梦想就像空中遥不可及的云朵不付出努力，梦想就像空中遥不可及的云朵Lets fly kites.A:Spring is here.Lets go out to fly kites.B:When the wind is just gentle,when the sun shines brightly,what do you feel like doing?What about flying kites?运用排比句B:As the saying goes:An app
12、le a day keeps the doctor away!Apples are good.A:Apples are good for people.引用名人名言、谚语 You should work hard to achieve success-success never come easily and it never comes suddenly.More English sayings:Practice is important-Practice makes perfectYou should not give up-Where there is a will,there is a
13、 way.We can make the end more meaningful!1.Now that you know Shanghai is such a wonderful place,why not spread your wings to visit it?2.If you have a chance to visit China,I am sure Shanghai will be your No.1 choice.3.I am sure if everyone helps to fight pollution,the sky will be bluer,the water wil
14、l be cleaner.the land will be greener,and of course,our life will be more enjoyable.4.Im looking forward to seeing a younger and healthier father.I hope the air in our home will be cleaner and fresher.I am sure we will have a happier life if there is no smoke in our family.5.Lets help each other bec
15、ause everybody needs help.I am sure the happiest person in the world is someone who offers help to others.Why not be one?c.I have a high sense of responsibility.We must make the body clear and correct!I want to be a volunteer of the World Expo a.I can speak Englishb.I am familiar with Shanghai.We ca
16、n write the English composition easily!Thank you,_.Who/what would you like to thank?Why would you like to thank her?How would you like to show you are thankful to her?She might be one person to the world,but to me she is the whole world.Do you know who she is?Yes,youve guessed it.She is my beloved m
17、other.She takes good care of me.Every day When I get up,she has prepared delicious food for me.She helps me with my lessons as well.She is not only my mother but also my friend.When I have troubles,she encourages me.And she is happier than me when I make progress.I am so thankful to her.But I havent
18、 got enough money to buy her a present.And I am too shy to give her a kiss.But I have decided to Say“Thank you,Mum.I love you”as loudly as I can.I am sure she will be happy to hear that.How do people celebrate it?(what food to eat?what activities to have?)My favorite festival-Lantern festivalWhen is
19、 Lantern festival?The Lantern Festival China is country with long history and rich culture.Among many festivals,Lantern Festival is one of the most important ones.It is on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month.It mark the end of the Spring Festival.People eat traditional food called Yuan Xiao.A
20、nd its fun to go to a lantern show and guess lantern riddles.Children as well as adults enjoy setting fire works.But most importantly,people enjoy a family get-together.Lets try to celebrate Lantern festival so as to keep Chinese tradition and culture.1.We can use adjectives to modify nouns.3.We can
21、 add time,place,condition and other elements.2.We can use adverbs to modify verbs.1.我们可以使用不同类型的句子：我们可以使用不同类型的句子：陈述句感叹句陈述句感叹句简单句复合句简单句复合句主动语态被动语态主动语态被动语态1.我们可以用修辞手法:设问句 反问句 比喻句 排比句 引用 ClearCorrectWe must make the body:An attractive beginningA meaningful endingA clear and correct body Thank you for yo
22、ur attention!Thank you for your co-operation!3.My middle school life is over,but these beautiful memories will stay in my mind for ever.Wherever I go,I will never forget the days which I spent with my friends and teachers.What activities do you have in spring?I have a date with spring.What do you th
23、ink of spring?What do you see/hear in spring?Spring is around the corner.Lets give spring a warm hug!The air is fresh and everything is energetic!Its so nice to see butterflies flying freely in the colorful flowers.Its so wonderful to hear birds singing happily in the green trees.people enjoy warm sunshine and they like to go for a spring outing.Spring is a season full of hopes.Lets work hard to make our dreams come true.
