1、武汉加油!服务医护英雄 帮助患者家庭红东方英语爱心资料 寒假短文改错专项训练请大家爱心转发(1)It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. T
2、he next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took th
3、e old man to the nearest hospital.答案:It was 7:15 inonthe morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards theeast whilewhenan old man came out of the park on the other sidessideof the street. Then I saw a yellow cardrive up Third Street and mademakea right turn into Park Road. The
4、next moment the car hit the manwhile shehewas crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop and drivedroveoff at full speedheading west. I noticed the driver was ayoung womanworewearinga pair of glasses and the platenumber was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passedpassingcar
5、and took the old man to thenearest hospital.(2)I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view thatsenior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, Ill unable to cont
6、rol myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really cant accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldnt be forbidden
7、 to watch TV.答案:I often quarrel aboutwithmy mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds theviewthat senior three students have to make fullyfulluse of every minute to work hard at their lessons. Itseems to meherthat once I am allowed to do that, Ill beunable to control myself and forg
8、et all aboutmy study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye . But I really cant accept her ideas. In my opinion,eyeswatch watchingwhat hadhasTV can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. Besides, it is important for us to knowworkhappened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to
9、 watch TV.(3)Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter wors
10、e, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing to you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.答案:Dear sir,Last year Ibuybought
11、a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like theCustomer Li Mingshape of therefrigerator. AndButrecently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when itis(或去it)turned on. At first it is low but gradually it becomebecomeslouder and louder. To make the matterworse, it
12、even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing to you to ask for help.disappointedWould you please send apeopleman/ personto repair it? I willbe/stayat home this weekend.Please callme before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. ThanksThank(4)you very much.Custome
13、r Li MingI first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Mings parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming a
14、nd I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each other much. But weve kept writing to each other.答案:I first
15、 met Li Ming at a friendfriendsbirthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over intomy place. Welistenlistenedto my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Mingsparents invited Imeto spend two wonderful weekweeksin Qingdao with them during the summer holiday.Li Ming
16、and I loved walking along the beautifullybeautifulbeaches there. Last year I was ill butandhad to stayin hospital for a week. Li Ming came tosee me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and theymoved to another city. Since then we havent seeseeneach other much. but weve kept writing to eachoth
17、er.(5)I feel quite sure the chemistry test that were going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good.In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two ho
18、urs review pages 115140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.答案:I feel quite sureabout/ofthe chemistry test that were going to have tomorrow. The teacher hasalready told us exactexactlywhat to study and I think m
19、y grades on homework hashavebeen good.In a fact,I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I hadhavealreadyspent two hoursreviewreviewingpages 115140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour topractisewith some of the sample(实例) problem . Then I will re
20、ady for the test.practisingDear Susan,problemsbe(6)Im very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You wont find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30
21、minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and well talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.答案:Dear Susan, Im very
22、 gladlygladYours, Zhang Mingto hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont beable to meet you at the airport althoughbecause/asI have classes in the afternoon. You wont find itdifficultto get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minuteminutesand will take yo
23、u rightlyrightto theFriendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then orandI will pick you up there. I will take youtogether to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and well talk withaboutour plan for the weekend over dinner.Having Havea pleasant trip and see you Friday.(7)Yours, Zhang MingSome day I hap
24、pened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would s
25、pend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some collegestudents freely.答案:Some Oneday I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, therewherepeople were chatting in English.I trie
26、d to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior studentssurprisewerebetter than me . I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. ButeverywasmineSoday after that I would spend one hour practisepractisingmy oral English on QQ. Day by day I lea
27、rned frommany useful words and expressions.WithAs(或wentgoing)time went by, I found that I could evencommunicate withsome college students freely.(8)If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors.
28、 Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In sh
29、ort, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.答案:If I have the honor to be chosechosento work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve myEnglish so that I can talk easilyaboutwith或toforeign visitors. Second,I will learn more about thehistory of the Olympics as muchwellas the 2
30、008 Olympic Games. Third, since I wasamfamiliar withBeijing, I can help visitors find their wayswayin the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors aboutour history orandculture and show them theirourgreat achievements. In short, I will do my best to helpmaking makethe Games a success.(9)Dear
31、 Mary,I receive your Email just now. Dont worry about me. Im getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. Im afraid I couldnt agreewith you
32、 . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will,there is a way. I
33、 m looking forward to hearing good news from you.答案:Dear Mary,Yours, Li HuaI receive receivedyour Email just now. Dont worry about me. Im getting on well with my researchwork in the lab.But to my greatlygreatsurprise you say you will give uplearnlearningEnglish. The reason isbecauseyou have not done
34、 well in it recently and you have lost interests. Im afraid I couldntagreethatinterestcantwith you . I know it is difficultydifficultto learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. Itwill be animportant tool in our future work. Beside , it is becoming more and more important inBesid
35、esour daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will,there is a way. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you.Dear Ralph,(10)Yours, Li HuaI am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mi
36、nd. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They dont talk with me, and theyve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, b
37、ut I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why dont I win true friendship?答案:Dear Ralph,I am anauniversity student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now Ihavechanged my mind. I have three roommates, and I
38、was the last one to move into the dormitory.Last term,IWegot along peacefully and happy . But I find they are not willing to be with me now.happilyThey dont talk with me, and theyve become coldcoldertoward me. Many time , I have wanted to talktimeswith them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leavingleftalone, I always recallthis sadness. But I am an honest student. Why dontcantI win true friendship?请大家爱心转发