1、Book 1 Unit 1 WritingWhat do you think of your school?Is it in the greatest shape or an enthusiastic place?Are there some aspects should be improved?e.g.My school is a wonderful school which has a beautiful environment.Our school is beautiful with tall trees and gardens.P16Imagine you are a member o
2、f your class committee.Think about the changes you would suggest to the head teacher to improve your school.Talk about your suggestions and prepare a short presentation.Use the expressions in the box to help you.The first thing I would suggest is I think it would be a good idea to Another thing I wo
3、uld suggest is In my opinion,I strongly suggest that My advice on.is that I advise 1.If it rains,we wont attend P.E.classes.What a shame!I suggest that my dear school should build an indoor playground so that we can do sports on rainy days.2.The school rules require us to wear a school uniform every
4、 day,but I think it is not a good idea.3.We should protect our environment instead of destroying it.In this way,we can make our school more beautiful.4.In my opinion,its necessary for us to go for an outing.It is a good chance for us to see the outside world and relax ourselves,because we are so bus
5、y that we havent got much time to have a good rest.a school trip5.Although our school life is colorful and happy,yet I still want to give a suggestion to our school.In my opinion,our school should organize more activities like going for a spring outing,holding art festivals,a spring outingand readin
6、g and speech contest,for these activities can not only enrich our knowledge and broaden our mind,but also make us more confident.It is rewarding for us to experience some interesting and meaningful things.art festivalspeech contest6.In my opinion,we have too much homework.A large amount of homework
7、keeps us busy and tired.Thats why some students begin to lose interest in study.I strongly suggest that we should have less homework so that we can have more free time to do something else.7.The school should offer us more interesting courses in addition to the basic courses.Do you know her?She is X
8、iao Dong.She went to senior high school last week,but she has some trouble in making friends.She feels very lonely and upset.So she wrote a letter to Miss Wang,the editor in the school English Newspaper.If you are Miss Wang,would you like to give some suggestions to Xiao Dong?Do you know her problem
9、s?PracticePresenting ideas/suggestions-建议信建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议忠告。提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。谋篇布局谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。建议信的正文部分分为三部分：第一部分：引出话题；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。假设你是你校英语报社的编辑Mi
10、ss Wang，现在小冬因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议或意见。审题谋篇审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文类的书信，故要用第一人称第一人称来写；信的主要内容是写建议，根据题意，首先明确书信双方的身份，自己为报社编辑，对方是寻求建议的小冬，主题是关于交友中遇到的困难。需要给对方提出下一步的意见和建议，故用一般将来时一般将来时，同时兼顾书信的特点，会用到表达愿望的情态动词情态动词。第二步：确定段落本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手：Para.1首先要陈述自己的关心Para.2指出问题产生的原因，并提出建议Para.3表达自己的希望与祝福
11、第三步：提炼要点1_交友有困难2_好恶3_与相处得好4_处于困境中5_ 积极参加have trouble in making friendslikes and dislikesget along well withbe in troubleplay an active part in第四步：句式升级第四步：句式升级(高级表达高级表达)Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends.1听说你交友困难，我很难过。(一般表达一般表达)Im sorry to hear that you cant make friends.2
12、.我很乐意给你提供一些关于交友方面的建议。(一般表达一般表达)(高级表达高级表达)Its my pleasure to offer you some suggestions on making friends.3.这里有一些建议可以帮到你。(一般表达一般表达)(高级表达高级表达)Here are some tips which can help you.4.首先，了解你同学的喜好。(一般表达一般表达)First,get to know what your classmates like and what they dont like.(高级表达高级表达)First of all,why not
13、 learn about your classmates likes and dislikes?5.第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示你的友好。第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示你的友好。(一般表达一般表达)Second,taking an active part in the discussions in your class helps to show you are friendly.(高级表达高级表达)Whats more,it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the discussi
14、on in your class.6.6.最后，你可以帮助一些有需要的人。最后，你可以帮助一些有需要的人。(一般表达一般表达)Finally，you can help the people in need.(高级表达高级表达)The last but not the least,it would be a good idea to help others when they are in trouble.Dear Xiao Dong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends.However,the situation is easy t
15、o change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.First of all,why not learn about your classmates likes and dislikes?Then you can have much in common with them,which helps you get along well with them.Whats more,it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the
16、 discussions in your class.The last but not the least,it would be a good idea to help others when they are in trouble,which will give you a good opportunity to make youself known.With time going on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you follow the tips above.Yours,
17、Miss Wang建议信模板Dear _,Im glad/sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to _.Then,it also helps to _.Besides,it should be a good idea to _.You can also _.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)As to _,I suggest _(有时根据需要具体到某一方面).In addition,_(其他建议).Im sure _(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)Im looking forward to _(表达愿望)Sincerely yours，Miss Wang THANK YOU
