1、2022届届全国新全国新高考高考英语备考英语备考复习复习读后续写动作描写画面化读后续写动作描写画面化1.The two dogs circled each other and looked for the right moment to attack.Tip 1:specific verbs Tip 2:coherent actionsWord Bank mouthfoothand/armhit,beat,tap,pat/drag,draw,pull/catch,grab,grasp,seize/cast,throw/lift,raise,carry,take/hug,embrace/reac
2、h(out)/shout cry yell scream/smile laugh/whisper murmur/sob/howlemphasize stress/tell/add/explain/admit/reply=respond/praise/complain/comfortrush dash/make ones way to/wander/travel march/stagger(蹒跚)jump/spring to ones feet/stand still/trip(绊倒)/drag/crawlScene 1 跳水救人 (A coward)Henry jumped into the
3、river and saved Robert._ the screams,Henry_the riverside,_ his clothes and _ the water without hesitation.He _ Robert just as he was sinking the last time.By great effort,and with much danger to himself,he _ Robert to the shore.Hearingran/dashed/rushed tothrew offjumped intoreachedbrought/draggedSce
4、ne 2 荒野求救 (2016.10 浙江卷)During an adventure,Jane quarreled with her husband Tom and got lost in the forest.Then,she tried her best to attract the attention of the helicopter.Finally,she was saved and reunited with Tom.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blous
5、e,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.Suddenly,A moving dot(点)on the horizon was spotted.1.What would Jane do?2.What would happen?list the actions and tell the rest story.Suddenly,A moving dot(点)on the horizon was spotted.As it drew nearer,Jane saw it cl
6、early.The helicopter,Jane murmured,sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area.She waved her yellow blouse desperately to it and yelled at the helicopter with full-strength.To her great joy,this time she was spotted.Soon afterwards,the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped o
7、ut.The moment Toms eyes fell upon her,Jane threw herself into his arms.Honey,Never will I leave you again.Jane sobbed in tears.The reunited couple hugged each other tightly.Tip 3:in+n.：in terror/excitement/shock/sorrow/in a low(weak/sweet)voicewith+情感名词：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/
8、anger/fearwith+身体部位：with its sharp eyes/her shaky hand/her pale lipsadverbs:tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight)violently/swiftly Suddenly,A moving dot(点)on the horizon was spotted.Exhausted but hopeful,Jane jumped to her feet to catch a clear sight of it.The helicopte
9、r,Jane murmured,sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area,waving her yellow blouse desperately and yelling at the helicopter with excitement.This time she was spotted,which made her feel more delighted.Eyes brimming with tears,Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom like a flying ar
10、row,hugging tightly in his arms,“please never leave me alone!Tip 4:Choose suitable grammar 形容词作状语(修饰句子主语)分词作状语（注意分词与逻辑主语的关系）定语从句 独立主格（名词/代词+doing/done/to do/n./adj./adv./介词短语）The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paul put down the window and said,“Come on,get in the car.”Then,Mac jumped off the b
11、icycle and got into the car.“What a narrow escape!”Mac added.The wolf walked around the car,but just in vain.Finally,Mac was safe and expressed his gratitude to Paul.Scene 3 骑行遇狼逃生(2018.06 浙江卷)）Mac was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.His friends had to stop to make a bicycle repair,
12、so he pedaled(骑行)along alone.Suddenly,a wolf appeared,catching up with him.At this moment,Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska and saw the scene.1.Rewrite this paragraph by using what you have learned.(specific verbs coherent actions suitable grammar)The car abruptly stopped
13、in front of him.Paul rolled down the window and yelled,“Come on,get in the car.”Frightened,Mac jumped off the bicycle and dashed into the back seat of the car.“What a narrow escape!”Mac sighed in a shaky voice.The wolf walked around the car and howled at them fiercely,but just in vain.Realizing the
14、wolf couldnt catch up any more,Mac sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat.Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile,murmuring something like“Thank you very much”.Tip 4:More doesnt mean better.Scene 4 火海救人 Tara,an 8-year-old girl,was stuck in the firing house.Surrel,her
15、 neighbor who was 64 years old,went into smoke-filled house searching but in vain.He ran outside to catch his breath.Where is Tiara?he asked desperately.“The second floor.her aunt shouted back.1.Taking a deep breath,he went in a second time._ The darkness was overwhelming.Running blindly,he finally
16、made it to the second floor,where he was met by intense heat.Breathless and light-headed,Baby girl,where are you?He cried desperately.All he could hear was the popping of burning wood.Then a soft but distinct moan(n.呻吟呻吟)emerged.He quickly crawled towards the sound.Finally,he touched something.A shoe,then an ankle.He pulled Tiara toward him,hugged her tightly and brought her out of the house,totally worn out.Assignment1.Polish your writing.2.Share your composition with your partners and learn from each other.Thank you!
