1、By the end of this class,Ss will be able to：1.talk about past events;2.know how to write a trip diary.3.know how to write a better composition(作文作文).saw beautiful flowerspicked appleswent fishingflew kiteshad lunchtook photosStep1 Lead in(video)Peters school tripHelens diaryJims diaryWho:When:Where:
2、How:What:Feelings:June 15ththe science museumby train learned a lot about robots;took photos;bought giftsexcitingsix key points(六要素)my classmates and IStep2 Reading before writing A School TripWhoWhereHowWhat(did&saw)FeelingsYou can add(添加):Weather,people and so onMind-mapWhenWho:When:Where:How:What
3、:Feelings:A trip to June 23rd(yesterday)the zooby bussaw animals;took photos;bought giftsgreatBobs trip:My school(My classmates and I)Sally:where did you .Bob:I.Pair work:Who:When:Where:How:What:Feelings:June 23rd(yesterday)the zooby bussaw animals;took photos;bought giftsgreatMy school(My classmate
4、s and I)June 23rd Yesterday my classmates and I went to the zoo.We got there by bus.At the zoo,we saw many animals.We took some photos of them and bought some gifts in the gift shop.It was an great day.Step3 Story-telling June 23rdYesterday I went to the zoo and saw many animals.The animals were ver
5、y cute.I took some photos of them.I went to a gift shop,too.I bought many gifts.It was an exciting day.Level _EHow to get A?Step4 Writing examples:1.Better the wordsMy school went to the zoo.My school the zoo.My school the zoo.1)2)We saw many animals.We saw animals.3)I took some photos of them.I too
6、k photos of them.visitedwent on a trip tomany different kinds ofquite a lot of took us about half an hour to get to the zoo.2.short sentences long sentences We saw many animals.The animals were very cute.We saw _ animals _ cute pandas,friendly giraffes,smart elephants and so on.We went to the zoo by
7、 bus._,we took a bus.I bought many gifts.I bought many gifts _.The gifts were _,so I bought some for my parentsmany different kinds oflikeTo get therefor my parentsbeautiful and cheapThe bus ride June 23rdYesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates.We took a bus.The bus ride took us about half an
8、 hour to get to the zoo.We saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas,friendly giraffes,smart elephants and so on(等等).I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them.We went to the gift shop.The gifts there were beautiful and cheap.I bought some for my parents.It was an exciting day.Leve
9、l _DJune 23rdYesterday I visited the zoo with my classmates._,we took a bus.The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo._,we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas,friendly giraffes,smart elephants and so on(等等).I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them._,we went
10、to the gift shop.The gifts there were beautiful and cheap,_ I bought some for my parents._,it was an exciting day.We had great fun!3.Use phrases to make it logical(有逻辑的)To get thereAt the zooAfter thatsoAll in allall in all;after that;to get there;at the zoo;soLevel _CJune 23rd Yesterday I visited t
11、he zoo with my classmates.To get there,we took a bus.The bus ride took us about half an hour to get to the zoo.At the zoo,we saw all kinds of animals like cute pandas,friendly giraffes,smart elephants and so on(等等).I like them so much and I took quite a lot of photos of them.After that,we went to th
12、e gift shop.The gifts there were beautiful and cheap,so I bought some for my parents.All in all,it was an exciting day.4.Add a good beginning and ending I will never forget my school trip to the zoo.It was an unforgettable(难忘的)day for me.We all had great fun!Level _A?B?假如你叫Peter，上个星期天(5月28日)你班组织了一次乘
13、车去阳光农场（Sunshine Farm）的郊游活动。请写一篇旅游日记。要求：1.包含所给的全部信息，可适当发挥；2.时态正确，用词准确，行文流畅；3.不少于80词。(unforgettable,like,and,but,so,many different kinds of)Step5 Writing(实战演练实战演练):How many scores can you get?Come to show us your writing!?Scores(分数分数)_Write a trip diary.Go over the words.We all need to relax!Lets have more relaxing trips!FEDCBAWriting levels:
