1、Writing:describe a personTeaching aims:1.To know some writing problems.2.To master some writing skills.Enjoy a composition and analyze why it can get high points.假设你是李明假设你是李明,现要求你用英语写一篇短文现要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你好朋友李华的基本情况介绍你好朋友李华的基本情况.短文应该包括短文应该包括下表所列全部内容下表所列全部内容.(可恰当增加内容)(可恰当增加内容)姓名姓名:李华李华 出生年月出生年月:2000年年2
2、月月 出生地出生地:罗定市罗定市所在学校:罗定实验中学所在学校:罗定实验中学课程:语文、课程:语文、数学、数学、英语等等英语等等特长:英语(上星期在英语竞赛特长:英语(上星期在英语竞赛the English competition中获第一名)中获第一名)性格:乐于助人,与人相处融洽性格:乐于助人,与人相处融洽Luoding Experimental Middle Schoolbe willing to do sth.乐于做某事乐于做某事 LiHua,who was born in Luoding in February 2000,is a popular student in Luoding
3、Experimental Middle School.She has long hair with big eyes.The subjects(which/that)he studies at school are Chinese,math,English and so on.In his spare time,he is fond of reading English.Because of his hard work,he won the first prize in the English competition last week.Besides,he is willing to hel
4、p his classmates who are in trouble.So all of them get along well with him and regard him as their good friend.What a perfect man he is!1.LiHua,who was born in Luoding in February 2000,is a popular student in Luoding Experimental Middle School.2.She has long hair with big eyes.The subjects(which/tha
5、t)he studies at school are Chinese,math,English and so on.分析获得高分原因:分析获得高分原因:用了定语从句用了定语从句who was born in Luoding in February 2000.用了用了with结构和定语从句结构和定语从句3.In his spare time,he is fond of reading English.Because of his hard work,he won the first prize in the English competition last week.4.Besides,he i
6、s willing to help his classmates who are in trouble.高级句型:高级句型:in ones spare timebe fond of,because of连接词连接词besides,短语,短语be willing to do sth.定语从句定语从句 who are in trouble.5.So all of them get along well with him well and regard him as their good friend.6 What a perfect man he is.连词连词so.高级句型高级句型 get al
7、ong with,regard as 写作高分写作高分tips1.同位语同位语2.并列句(并列句(and,but.because)3.复合句(状从,定从,名词性从句)复合句(状从,定从,名词性从句)4.强调句(强调句(It is that/who)5.倒装句(倒装句(Only+状语;状语;Not only句首)句首)6.非谓语(非谓语(v-ing/v-ed/to do)7.With 结构结构8.高级短语高级短语/句型句型(be regarded as/It is+adj.+to do)9.过渡语(过渡语(however/besides/in addition/besides)人物简介的一般人物
8、简介的一般步骤步骤:5.评评估估(evaluation)1.概概况况(basic information,including age,birth-place,profession)2.外外貌貌性格性格/爱好爱好(appearance,hobby)3.教教育育(education)4.生生平平:(big events in his or her life)Describe Liu Shishi1.1.概况:概况:2.2.外貌性格外貌性格/爱好:爱好:3.3.教育:教育:4.4.生平:生平:5.5.评估:评估:1987年年3月月10日出生于日出生于北京,中国北京,中国女演员女演员。北京舞蹈学院北京
9、舞蹈学院(Beijing(Beijing Dance Academy)Dance Academy),主,主修芭蕾修芭蕾(ballet)(ballet)主演多部电视剧(主演多部电视剧(drama),在,在2011年主演步步惊心而闻名。年主演步步惊心而闻名。旅游,阅读,听音乐旅游,阅读,听音乐中国大陆最受欢迎的女演员之一,是我中国大陆最受欢迎的女演员之一,是我的女神。的女神。Lets play a game Divide the class into 4 groups,and choose a picture and tell me your answers.23451Basic informat
10、ion:Liu Shishi,_ _ _ on March 10,1987 in Beijing China,_ a popular Chinese actress.who was bornis2 pointsappearance,hobbyShe is slim _ long hair.In her _ time,she _ _ _ travelling,reading and listening to music.withspareis fond of3 pointsBig events:she plays an important role in many dramas.She _ _
11、_ _ her role as Ruoxi in the Chinese time-travel drama Scarlet Heart.is best known for2 pointsEducation:Liu Shishi _ _Beijing Dance Academy,_ in ballet.graduated frommajoring4 pointsEvaluation:many people _ _ _ her and _her as goddess in China.speak highly ofregard/consider4 pointsLets combine the s
12、entences.Liu Shishi,who was born on March 10,1987 in Beijing China,is a popular Chinese actress.She is slim with long hair.In her spare time,she is fond of travelling,reading and listening to music.After graduating from Beijing Dance Academy majoring in ballet,she plays an important role in many dra
13、mas.She is best known for her role as Ruoxi in the Chinese time-travel drama Scarlet Heart.From then on,she has become one of the most popular actresses in China.Believe it or not,many people speak highly of her and regard her as goddess in China.Now,correct the following sentences.1.Liu Shishi,who was born on March 10,1987 in Beijing China,a popular Chinese actress.2.She like travelling,read and listening to music.3.she is one of the most popular actress in China.isreadingactressesHomework:“My Favorite Singer/Actor/Actress”