1、专题07 短文改错高频考点TOP7 并列句考点一And, so, but, or误用由并列连词( and, but, or, so, not onlybut also, however, neither nor, eitheror, still)把两个或两个以上的互相独立的分句连接而成的句子叫做并列句。并列句之间的关系有并列、转折、选择、因果等关系。1) 表递进或顺承关系：常用连词and, bothand, as well as , not only but also, neithernor等连接。He is a lovely boy and he is helpful.他很可爱，乐于助人。2
2、) 转折关系：常用连词but, however, yet（然而，可是）等连接I can come, but will be a little late.我能来，但是要稍晚一些。3) 选择关系：常用连词or, eitheror, notbut, or else等连接Either give a hand, or leave right away.或者帮忙，或者立刻离开。4) 因果关系：常用连词for, so 等连接She is kind to the others, so all of us love her. 她对别人很好，所以我们都喜欢她。1) She never said she was r
3、ich, and she was.【答案】and 改为 but【解析】but 在此表示转折。句中的 she was 为 she was rich 之省略2) Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.【答案】so 改为 but【解析】此处语意转折考点二 如并列连词and, or前后连接为动词词组，则要考虑并列关系是否一致1) Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.【答案】to去掉【解
4、析】or并列连词，organize和plant并列2) In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.【答案】showed改为show【解析】show和get并列（1） We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. 【答案】and 改为 but【解析】因此处语意转折（2） I told Mother， Father， Sister， all my friends here what a great time I had. 【答
5、案】all 前加 and【解析】表示并列关系（3） It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it. 【答案】but 改为 and / so【解析】此处表因果关系，并非转折关系（4） She was smiling but nodding at me. 【答案】but 改为 and【解析】此处并无转折之意（5） It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. 【答案】and 改为 or【解析】a visitor 和 a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好
6、像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”（6） The food was expensive and the service was good. 【答案】and 改为 but【解析】此处意义发生转折（7） Im the captain of our school team so with my fellow players weve won several games. 【答案】so 改为 and【解析】表并列关系（8） My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.【答案
7、】but 改为and【解析】此处表示并列，而不是转折（9） So once youve started collecting seriously， you 【答案】So 改为 But【解析】因为前后是转折关系（10） Clever as she is， but she works very hard. 【答案】去掉but【解析】因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词 as（=though 虽然），千万不要受汉语句式“虽然但是”的影响，而重复用连词（11） I teach them， play with them， but watch them growing up.【答案】but 改为and【解析】
8、因为 teach / play 与 watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系【湖南省长郡中学2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My fathers friend Henry used to be a teacher a
9、t a medical school and he was very strict with his students. The students were afraid of him though he was seldom pleased of the answers they gave. Once a student was seated before him, and Henry required him describe a certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. ThenHenry asked a
10、bout the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. 6eHow much will you give the patient? “A full spoon!” Suddenly the student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously, “Ive made the mistake a full spoon is too many, and he can take only five drops.” “Its too late;
11、 your patient has been died,” Henry said cold.【答案】【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，Henry老师对学生非常严格，学生很怕他。文章中讲述了一件他刁难学生的事情。第三处：考查不定式。动词短语require sb to do sth要求某人做某事；其中不定式短语做宾语补足语，对宾语进行补充说明。句意：Henry要求他描述一种疾病。第四处：考查连词。句意：接着Henry又问了疾病的治疗方法，这个学生也给出了正确答案。上下文之间是顺接的并列关系，并非转折关系，所以要用and替换but。第五处：考查时态。本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，全文都使用一般过去时。
12、所以本句使用过去式realized做谓语动词。第六处：考查代词。代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中，something通常用于肯定句中。本句是一个肯定句，所以使用something。句意：突然这个学生意识到出了错误。第七处：考查固定短语。短语make a mistake犯错；其中的不定冠词a表示泛指。第八处：考查形容词。Henry询问用药的剂量，药物是不可数名词，所以使用much修饰，而many要修饰可数名词复数形式。第九处：考查语态和形容词。本句可以使用过去分词died和has构成完成时，或者使用形容词dead与has been连用表示状态。句意：太晚了，你的病人已经死亡了。Hen
13、ry冷冷地说。学科*网【2019届四川省华蓥市第一中学高三入学调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I am the shared bike. Id like to be on the street to serve for people.
14、They can ride me just via a mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. Thanks to some kindl
15、y people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well as the whole societys attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are stuck the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules.【答案】I am the shared bike. Id like to be on the s
16、treet to serve for people. They can ride me ajust via a mobile app. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole happenedsome of us with paying their bills on the app but treated us badly. They broke my saddle without and and even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for whi
17、ch those bad guys had done. whatThanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well as kind yourthe whole societys attention is what we need most. We are designed to help people who are stuck the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the
18、 in by toysbasic rules.【解析】本文是共享单车的自述，解释了共享单车受到的不公平待遇，希望人们善待共享单车。4.第五句：with改为without.考查介词。此处指有的人不在应用上付款偷走了一些单车，表示没有付款，故with改为without。5. 第五句：but改为and.考查连词。此处指有些人不付款偷走单车，还对我们不好。前后句是并列关系，不是转折。故but改为and。6.第七句：which改为what.考查宾语从句。此处指对那些坏家伙所做的事感到生气，表示做的事用what引导宾语从句，故which改为what。7.第八句：kindly改为kind.考查形容词。此处修
19、饰名词people用形容词，故kindly改为kind。8.第九句：you 改为your.考查物主代词。此处修饰名词help用形容词性物主代词，指你的帮助，故you 改为your。9.第十句：stuck后加in或by.考查介词。此处指被交通堵住，或是在交通阻塞中堵住，故stuck后加in或by。10.第十一句：toy改为toys.考查名词。和句中主语和动词We are一致，名词也用复数。故toy改为toys。【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2019届高三上学期月考（一）】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词
20、的增加、除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now the self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of Chinas top foreign language university. Sichuan International
21、Studies University, that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man for a restaurant, And he chatted happy with English learners online during her spare time. There were much grammatical mistakes, but that didnt prevent him from chatting. To seize every chance to study Engli
22、sh. he would memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said that how he hoped very much to become an interpreter. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.【答案】词性用法错误。动词chatted后用副词修饰。句意：在他空余时间，他愉快地跟在线英语学习者交谈。故将happy改为happily。人称代词用法错误。根据主语he可知，这里用his。句意：在他空余时间，他愉快地跟在线英语学习者交
23、谈。故将her改为his。形容词用法错误。因为grammatical mistakes为可数名词，故前用many修饰。句意：虽然有很多语法错误，但并不阻止他交谈。故将much改为many。主谓一致错误。句中主语为Whoever，故谓语用单数。句意：有梦想并敢于追求梦想的人是最可爱的人。故将have改为has。【名师点睛】短文改错常出现的错误有：1、时态用法错误（如题1）；2、名词数用法错误（如题2）；3、词法用法错误（如题5、7）；4、非谓语动词用法错误（如题8）；5、短语固定搭配错误（如题4）；6、语法用法错误（如题9、10）；7逻辑错误（如题6）；8、冠词连词用法错误等。【河南省中原名校2
24、019届高三第一次质量考评】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Rain is of greatly importance to us. Without rain, our water supply w
25、ould cut off and we would die, such would plants and animals. Therefore, too much rain does a lot of harms to us. It floods fields, towns and cities, cause great losses for us. So far, mans control over rain had never stopped.1f we can gain more effective control over rain, we will enjoy more freedo
26、m from the nature. Luckily, we humans have taken steps, such as planting more trees or using weather forecasts, to help avoiding flood damage and protect our water supply【答案】【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述的是雨水对我们非常的重要。4.考查副词。句意：没有雨水，我们的水供应就会被切断，我们就会死去，植物和动物也会死去。然而，太多的雨水对我们造成了很大的伤害。前后表示一种转折关系，故把Therefore改成Howe
27、ver。5.考查固定搭配。do harm to sb.对某人造成伤害，故把harms改成harm。6.考查现在分词。句意：它淹没了田野、城镇和城市，结果给我们带来了巨大的损失。此处是现在分词做自然的结果状语，故把cause改成causing。7.考查时态。根据so far可知句子用现在完成时态，句子主语是control，是单数第三人称，故把had改成has。8.考查不可数名词。nature做“大自然”讲时，前面不用冠词，故把from去掉。9.考查并列连词。句意：幸运的是，我们人类已经采取了一些措施，比如种植更多的树木和使用天气预报，以帮助避免洪水破坏和保护我们的供水。此处是递进的并列关系，故把
28、or改成and。10.考查固定搭配。help（to）do sth.帮助做某事，故把avoiding改成avoid。【点睛】“so+助动词+主语”倒装当要表示前面提出的某一肯定的情况也同样适合于后者，通常就要用“So+助动词+主语”这种倒装结构：You are young and so am I. 你年轻，我也年轻。She likes music and so do I. 她喜欢音乐，我也喜欢。注意：(1) 若前面提出某一否定的情况，要表示后者也属于同样的否定情况，则应将其中的so改为neither或nor：You arent young and neither am I. 你不年轻，我也不年轻。(2) 注意该结构与表示强调或同意的“so+主语+特殊动词”结构的区别：It was cold yesterday. So it was.“昨天很冷。”“的确很冷。”Father, you promised. Well, so I did.“爸爸，你答应过的。”“嗯，是答应过。” 学科*网
