1、高考英语写作新题型备考技巧专题二 并列句+亮点词汇（一）备考技巧1顾名思义，并列句是用连词或分号把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来。一并列句的类型和并列连词并列（递进）关系and, bothand, not onlybut (also), neithernor转折关系but, yet, 选择关系or, otherwise, or else, eitheror, notbut因果关系for, so, therefore, thus 对比关系while, whereas注意: . therefore，thus引导的句子前需要用分号或and才能引导并列从句，如: It rained; therefor
2、e the game was called off. . 连接并列主语时，需要注意 “就近原则”，如： Neither he nor I am going to attend the ceremony. 1. The choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event. (2019浙江高考书面表达)2. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turn
3、ed out perfect. (2017北京高考书面表达)3. I plan to go for an outing, and I would like to invite you to participate. (2017浙江高考书面表达)4. I know you are very enthusiastic about ping-pong, so I really hope you can join our school team. (2017全国三卷书面表达)5. As middle school students, were not familiar with foreign cul
4、tures, while Chinese culture isnt fit to appear in an English newspaper. (2014上海高考作文)二并列句在高考写作中的运用：1. bothand, 既又On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical. (2017江苏高考书面表达)2. eitheror, 或者或者Peo
5、ple can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses. 3. neithernor, 既不也不In autumn, its neither too cold nor too hot. (2014年天津高考书面表达)4. not onlybut also, 不仅而且I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts
6、 in the world. (2015安徽高考书面表达)注意：此句型中，not only可以放句首倒装，为写作加分，如:I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance.(2018全国一卷书面表达)5. notbut, 不是而是From my perspective, the son refuses to communicate with his mother not because he has no t
7、ime but because hes unwilling to. 6. while/whereas, 而/却Some of the studies show positive results, whereas others dont.7. 祈使句/名词词组 + and/or/otherwise + 陈述句Keep it in mind, and we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it. (2013四川高考书面表达)It is really risky. One more step, and the baby will
8、fall into the well. Study hard, otherwise you will fail in your exams. More healthy food, or youll break down sooner or later. 8. when, 这时. sb. was doing sth. when , 某人正在做某事, 这时候 We were having a conference when he broke in. sb. was about to do/sb was on the point of doingwhen, 某人正要做某事, 这时 I was abo
9、ut to give up when my father came and inspired me to keep going.(2014福建高考书面表达). sb had just done sth. when., 某人刚做完某事., 这时 I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang. 注意: 并列句型8可经常用于记叙文续写写作，需要掌握透彻并学会运用。备考技巧2提升训练一 用适当的并列连词填空1. _ will all kinds of paper-cutting works created by famou
10、s artists of this field be on show that day, _ a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well. 2. Seize the chance, _ youll regret some day. 3. Another try, _ youll fulfil your dream. 4. The young man had wanted to help the dog, _ as he approached, it started to bark. 5. We were abo
11、ut to set off _ it suddenly began to pour down. 6. Some people believe smoking is harmful to health_ others consider it is helpful in reducing working pressure. 7. It is not what you had done _ what you had said that annoyed your classmates. 【答案】：1. Not only; but (also)2. or/or else/otherwise3. and4
12、. but5. when 6. while/whereas7. but 二 用并列句完成下列句子。1. 他刚走就有人敲门。_2. 你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。_3. 虽然她是一位普通妇女，但是确实值得尊敬。_4. 别犹豫，否则你将一事无成。_5. 票价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力来吸引更多的观众。The ticket price is on the increase. _6. 呆在完全不同的文化里令人害怕，我甚至想直接打道回府。Being in a completely different culture was scaring, _7. 寄宿家庭不仅
13、很友好，和我当时住一起的那个男孩对足球也感兴趣。_, which made my stay more enjoyable and stress-free.8. 因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。Therefore, from now on, _9. 因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。Therefore, _If you try hard to learn. 10. 音乐不仅在人类社会发展中扮演重要的角色，而且也能丰富我们的精神和文化生活。_11. 生活的质量已经提
14、升，而且看电影也被看作是一种娱乐的好方式。_【答案】1. He was about to leave/on the point of leaving when someone knocked at the door. 2. Not only should you share your study experience with them, but (also) you must keep your heart open to them. 3. She is an ordinary woman, but/yet she is really worth respecting. 4. Dont he
15、sitate, or/otherwise youll accomplish nothing. 5. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers. 6. and I event wanted to go straight back home. 7. The homestay family was not only vert kind, but also the boy that I was staying with was keen on football 8. lets not
16、 waste our time on insignificant things but have a heart-to-heart chat with our parents on a regular basis. 9. the exhibition can not only help you have a better understanding of Chinese folk art works, but can also help you acquire some paper-cutting skills. 10. Music not only plays an important pa
17、rt in the development of human society, but it also can enrich our spiritual and cultural life. 11. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment.备考技巧3亮点词汇（一） 平常写作中，学生除了要掌握和运用基本词句的能力外，还要学会遣词造句的技巧。使用亮点词汇无疑会对考生的写作起着升华的作用。考生平时一定要多积累地道自然的单词短语，这样写的东西才会不落
18、俗套和单调。 值得注意的是，学生要把握好使用高级词汇的度，不能为了追求“高级”而将复杂甚至偏、难、怪的词堆砌在写作中，这样反而会适得其反。所以考生在完成写作任务时，要遵循 “恰当、准确、自然”的原则，也要注意使用的场合。一请将下列句子的划线部分用不同的或更好的单词短语替代。1. Im busy with my lesson now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near. _; _; _2. So I have to bother you to correct my mistak
19、es in the material I attach to the letter. _3. The team will hold many activities, some of which will attract you, including many matches. _; _4. Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be. _;_5. Ive decided to teach you
20、Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a.m. on Wednesday, which will last two hours. _6. We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future. _;_7. I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. 8. Second, I am trying my best to g
21、et the necessary knowledge and skills about my position. _9. The craftsman will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot._ 10. Our class thought of the idea to make better use of old materials. _11. The reasons are the following. _12. As high school students, we should be nea
22、tly dressed when at school. _13. Theres no harm in your going to bed late sometimes. _14. In the coming three years, our school life will become difficult. _15. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. _【答案】1. occupied with; of great importance; around the corner/a
23、pproaching 2. have no choice but to put you to trouble3. appeal to; a range of4. constructed; set up 5. made up my mind to6. take pains; get prepared 7. owe you an apology for8. am sparing no effort 9. various 10. came up with 11. as follows12. are supposed to 13. staying up 14. challenging 15. alte
24、rnative 二请尝试用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文。Dear Jason, Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New
25、 bridges and roads have been built, tall buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are useful to the native people. It is developing into a modern city. But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and bad air pollution, which have a bad effect on peoples life. I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.【答案】. more than; . charming . rapidly . decade. set up. high-rise. An increasing number of. of use. severe . As far as Im concerned,
