1、定语从句专题复习定语从句专题复习Attributive Clause（2）:Writing Lesson Type:Comments on Attributive Clause Writings Teaching Focus:errors and mistakes in Students writing materials Teaching Difficulties:how to improve sentences into correct attributive clauses 语篇翻译 1.众所周知众所周知,中国有中国有960万平方公里的土万平方公里的土地地,是世界第三大国是世界第三大国.
2、2.中国有中国有56个民族个民族,其中汉族人其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic)占占94%3.中国有许多大河流中国有许多大河流,其中长江其中长江,黄河是最黄河是最重要的河流重要的河流.4.曾有一段时间曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界中国的经济落后于世界许多国家许多国家.5.随着经济的增长随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪所有中国人都为此感到自豪.Part 1.Common Mistakes1.Words and expressions(1)有有960万平方公里的土地万平方公里的土地 wrong:have 9.6 milli
3、on square kilometre area/space/place Right:with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/cover an area of 9.6 million square kilometers(2).世界第三大国世界第三大国Wrong:the world third big country/the third large countryRight:the third largest country in the world(3).有有56个民族个民族(下文：汉族人下文：汉族人the Han Ethnic)Wrong:
4、have 56 nationRight:有：有：There is/are Be made up of consist of56个民族个民族:56 nationalities/ethnics (4).占占94%Wrong:occupy 94%have 94%of.Right:making up 94%of the whole/94%of are高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(5).有许多大河流有许多大河流Wrong:have many big riverRight:there
5、 are many big rivers in 高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(6).长江长江,黄河黄河Wrong:Changjiang,HuangheRight:the Yangtze River and the Yellow River高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(7)曾有一段时间曾有一段时间Wrong:have a time/having a t
6、ime Right:There was a time when高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(8).中国的经济中国的经济Wrong:China economic/Chinas economicRight:Chinese economy高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(9).落后于落后于Wrong:later/less/behindRight:be far
7、behind/fall behind高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(10).被歧视的日子被歧视的日子Wrong:are thought lightly of days/were made fun of days/are looked down upon days are laughed at daysRight:the days when were thought lightly of/were made fun of/were looked down upon/were
8、laughed at高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(11).为此感到自豪为此感到自豪Wrong:pound/proundRight:be proud of take pride in 高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)2.Imcomplete clauses(句子成分不完整）句子成分不完整）(1).Wrong:China covers 9.6 million
9、 square kilometers,which the third biggest country in the word.Right:,which is the third biggest country in the word./which ranks the third biggest in the word/ranking the third biggest in the word(缺少从句谓语动词）缺少从句谓语动词）高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(2).Wron
10、g:It is known to us all that China is the third biggest country in the world,which the total area of about 960 square kilometers.Right:,with a total area of about 960 square kilometers/,which covers a total area of about(缺少从句谓语动词）缺少从句谓语动词）高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语
11、从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(3).Wrong:As we all know,China,which is the third biggest country in the world.Right:As we all know,China,which is the third biggest country in the world,covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.(主句不完整）主句不完整）高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共3
12、1张PPT)3.Incorrect relative pronoun/adverb（关系代词或关系副词用错）（关系代词或关系副词用错）（1）Wrong:China has 56 ethnics,during which the Han Ethnic are about 94%.Right:94%of which are the Han Ethnic高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(2).Wrong:China which the Han Ethnic take up 94 p
13、ercent has 56 nations.Right:China,in which the Han Ethnic take up 94%,has 56 ethnics./China,94%of whose population are Han Ethnic,has 56 ethnics.高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)(3).Wrong:There are many rivers in China,the most important are the Changjiang
14、and Yellow River.Right:There are many rivers in China,the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)1.众所周知众所周知,中国有中国有960万平方公里的土万平方公里的土地地,是世界第三大国是世界第三大国.2.中国有中国有56个民族个民族,其中汉族人其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic)占占94
15、%3.中国有许多大河流中国有许多大河流,其中长江其中长江,黄河是最黄河是最重要的河流重要的河流.4.曾有一段时间曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界中国的经济落后于世界许多国家许多国家.5.随着经济的增长随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪所有中国人都为此感到自豪.Part 2.Translation高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)1.众所周知众所周知,中国有中国有960万平方公里的万平方公里的土地土地,是世界第三大
16、国是世界第三大国.As is known to all/As we all know,China,with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers/which covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers,is the third largest country in the world.（1416黄秋丽，周茜茜，吴智林，莫培英，刘芳铭）或或高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)高考英语二轮专题复习课件定语从句专题复习之定语从句写作讲评(共31张PPT)As is
17、known to all/As we all know,China，the third largest country in the world/which is the third largest country in the world,covers an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.（1416黄莹，陈沛清，易冲黄莹，陈沛清，易冲）2.中国有中国有56个民族个民族,其中汉族人其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic)占占94%The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities,94%of which
18、 are the Han Ethnic Group.(1416陈远铖，徐陈远铖，徐冰冰）冰冰）或或The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities,among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest,making up 94%of the whole.或或China is made up of 56 ethnics,including an ethnic which is called the Han Ethnic with a percentage of 94.(1416黎轩成）或There are 5
19、6 ethnics in China，where the Han Ethnic make up 94%.(1416李秋焰）或China is made up of 56 ethnics,of which The Han Ethnic makes up 94%.(1416钟嘉榕）3.中国有许多大河流中国有许多大河流,其中长江其中长江,黄河是黄河是最重要的河流最重要的河流.Besides,there are many big rivers in China,the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.
20、/Besides,there are many big rivers in China,including the Yangtze River and the Yellow River which are the most important rivers in China.(1416朱朱欣仪，朱坤兰）欣仪，朱坤兰）或In addition,there are many big rivers in China,where the most important are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.(1416练嘉惠，吴智林，）4.曾有一段时间曾有一
21、段时间,中国的经济落后于中国的经济落后于世界许多国家世界许多国家.There was a time when Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world.（1416李杰萍，陀森，覃剑宁，唐金妃，莫燕玲）李杰萍，陀森，覃剑宁，唐金妃，莫燕玲）5.随着经济的增长随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返日子一去不复返,所有中国人都为所有中国人都为此感到自豪此感到自豪.However,with the development of the economy,the days are gone fore
22、ver when the Chinese people were looked down upon,which all Chinese are proud of.（1416徐冰冰，莫燕玲）Part 3.Filling the blank _is known to all,China with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers,is the third largest country in the world.The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities,among _the Han Ethnic
23、Group is the largest,making up 94%of the whole.Besides,there are many big rivers in China,the most important of _are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.Aswhichwhich There was a time _Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world.However,with the development of the economy,the days are gone forever _the Chinese people were looked down upon,_all Chinese are proud of.whenwhenwhich
