1、英语应用文写作A Letter of Proposal Writing-A Proposal（倡议书）（倡议书）On Wildlife protection 野生动物是人类的朋友野生动物是人类的朋友,但是由于人类乱捕滥杀但是由于人类乱捕滥杀以及野生动物栖息地的人为破坏等原因，致使野生以及野生动物栖息地的人为破坏等原因，致使野生动物的数量日益减少，许多物种濒临灭绝。请以学动物的数量日益减少，许多物种濒临灭绝。请以学生会的名义根据这一现状写一封倡议书，呼吁全社生会的名义根据这一现状写一封倡议书，呼吁全社会携手保护野生动物。要点包括：会携手保护野生动物。要点包括：1、野生动物的现状及产生的原因；、野
2、生动物的现状及产生的原因；2、保护野生动物的倡议。、保护野生动物的倡议。注意：注意：1、作文开头已经给出，请接着完成。可自己补充内、作文开头已经给出，请接着完成。可自己补充内容，使文章更加连贯。容，使文章更加连贯。2、字数要求：、字数要求：80左右左右 Lets move the world to protect the wildlife Wild animals are mans close friends.FactorsCriteria结构结构(organization）结构清晰，有条理结构清晰，有条理 内容内容（content）主题明确主题明确 完整全面完整全面 语言（语言（langua
3、ge）单词拼写正确单词拼写正确 没有语法错误没有语法错误 运用优美的词汇和高运用优美的词汇和高级表达级表达 运用多种句式结构运用多种句式结构 连贯连贯（coherence）行文通顺、流畅行文通顺、流畅 正确使用连接词正确使用连接词 Writing assessmentTitle(Title(标题）标题）Salutation(Salutation(称呼称呼)Body(Body(正文）正文）Closing Closing（结尾）（结尾）Signature Signature（落款）（落款）A AboutboutOrganizationOrganizationwell-organizedOrgani
4、zationwell-organizedLets move the world to protect the wildlifeDear sir,bodyThe students union LetsPresent situationCauses Proposals主要内容包括：主要内容包括：1.野生动物的现状野生动物的现状:数量减少，濒临灭绝；数量减少，濒临灭绝；2.产生的原因产生的原因3.保护野生动物的倡议。保护野生动物的倡议。Present situationdecreasebe in dangerCauses1.human hunting 2.climate changes 3.not
5、enough food/loss of 4.habitat loss/destruction/is threatened5.pollution III Proposals 1.1.appreciate/raise peoples awareness appreciate/raise peoples awareness of the of the importance of wildlife protectionimportance of wildlife protection2.2.persuade people not to buy products made persuade people
6、 not to buy products made from endangered animalsfrom endangered animals3.3.donate money donate money4.4.make laws to make laws to forbidforbid over killing/over killing/punishpunish the the law-breaking hunters without mercylaw-breaking hunters without mercy5.set up nature reserves/protect the habi
7、tats5.set up nature reserves/protect the habitats6.send volunteers to help 6.send volunteers to help 7.value/appreciate/appeal to international 7.value/appreciate/appeal to international cooperationcooperation 引入话题句1.As we can see,the environment around us 2.There is no denying that提出倡议常用句式3.Therefo
8、re,lets take the responsibility to./Its our duty to work hard to achieve this goal.4.We students of Senior One are called on to5.It is high time for us to do something about the problem/take action before it is too late.6.Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can we.结束话题常用句式7
9、.Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day,every hour and every minute.8.I hope our behavior will make a difference.9.lets work hand in hand and make a contribution to/take action.10.Your contribution counts!This is This is 套路套路Present situation(impressive/positive/smooth)dec
10、rease_be in danger_The number of them is decreasing sharply.Some species are in danger of extinction.rapidly/sharplyof going extinct/extinction/dying outUnfortunately,the number of them is decreasing sharply and some species are even in danger of extinction.Causes1.human hunting 2.climate changes 3.
11、not enough food/loss of 4.habitat loss/destruction/is threatened5.pollution Coherence(smooth)Firstly,many of them are killed for their fur to make clothes.Secondly,their habitat is threatened.Thirdly,they dont have enough food.Climate changes are also having bad effect on them.Over-hunting and their
12、 habitat loss are the main reasons for the depressing situation.Proposals Proposals clear/to the point/smoothclear/to the point/smoothWe should appreciate/raise peoples awareness We should appreciate/raise peoples awareness of the importance of wildlife protection.of the importance of wildlife prote
13、ction.We shouldnt buy products made from We shouldnt buy products made from endangered animals or harm their habitat.endangered animals or harm their habitat.We can donate money to organizations.We can donate money to organizations.Our government should make laws to punish Our government should make
14、 laws to punish the law-breaking hunters without mercy.the law-breaking hunters without mercy.We should set up more protection zones.We should set up more protection zones.We can also appeal to the international We can also appeal to the international cooperation.cooperation.whats more,in addition,b
15、esides,also,moreover 1.1.appreciate/raise peoples awareness appreciate/raise peoples awareness of the of the importance of wildlife protectionimportance of wildlife protection2.2.persuade people not to buy products made persuade people not to buy products made from endangered animalsfrom endangered
16、animals3.3.donate money donate money4.4.make laws to make laws to forbidforbid over killing/over killing/punishpunish the the law-breaking hunters without mercylaw-breaking hunters without mercy5.set up nature reserves/protect the habitats5.set up nature reserves/protect the habitats6.send volunteer
17、s to help 6.send volunteers to help 7.value/appreciate/appeal to international 7.value/appreciate/appeal to international cooperationcooperation There is no better way than raising peoples There is no better way than raising peoples awareness of the importance of wildlife awareness of the importance
18、 of wildlife protection./Its our responsibility to protect protection./Its our responsibility to protect wildlife and stop buying products made from wildlife and stop buying products made from endangered animals or harming their habitat.endangered animals or harming their habitat.Whats more,we can d
19、onate money to Whats more,we can donate money to organizations.organizations.Moreover,its necessary to make laws to punish Moreover,its necessary to make laws to punish the law-breaking hunters.the law-breaking hunters.In addition,more protection zones should be In addition,more protection zones sho
20、uld be set up for them.set up for them.The international cooperation is also The international cooperation is also valuable/appreciated.valuable/appreciated.Therefore,it is time for us to take action.There is no better way than raising peoples awareness of protecting wildlife and stop buying product
21、s made from endangered animals or harming their habitat.Whats more,we can donate money to organizations to protect them.Moreover,its necessary for the government to pass strict laws to punish law-breaking hunters and set up more nature reserves.Lets move the world to protect the wildlifeLets move th
22、e world to protect the wildlife Wild animals are mans close friends.Wild animals are mans close friends.Unfortunately,Unfortunately,the the number of them is now decreasing number of them is now decreasing sharply sharply and some and some species are species are in danger of extinctionin danger of
23、extinction.Over-hunting and.Over-hunting and their habitat destruction are the main reasons for the their habitat destruction are the main reasons for the depressing situation.depressing situation.Therefore,Therefore,it is timeit is time for us to for us to take actiontake action.There is no.There i
24、s no better way than better way than raising peoples awareness ofraising peoples awareness of the the importance of wildlife protection.And we shouldnt buy importance of wildlife protection.And we shouldnt buy products made from endangered animals or destroy products made from endangered animals or
25、destroy their habitat.Whats more,we can donate money to their habitat.Whats more,we can donate money to organizations such as CWCA.In addition its necessary organizations such as CWCA.In addition its necessary for the government to pass for the government to pass s strict lawstrict laws to punish law-to punish law-breaking hunters and set up more nature reserves.breaking hunters and set up more nature reserves.lets work hand in hand lets work hand in hand to protectto protect wildlife.wildlife.The StudentsUnion The StudentsUnion
